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Couto25

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iam taking serous before month i cant open daz program
i take month learn now , i think i learn ok try everything
also now try use other program for design cloth in body moving like this
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but i not have card to use so need buy new one after will learn hardiest part
i look buy RTX card
its for learn not business so i take thing cause i like do
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you need ask writer to make story this part scrip add poker game and chat seduction how new guy flirt spy to anna and see her naked and how sex with her also how david find out and what he think and do
i just add idea need scrip for all this
there some writer here fan hoop they share and make it
You can wait for the new RTX 5090 system to launch lol..its going to be expensive....but if you want processing speed of 4090 then it can be achieved with RTX 5070 and this my friend is a shocker, half the price of 4090 with same performance. 5070 will be the best deal for a hobbyist ...around $600 price. Like a slap to all 4090 users who bought it with twice the price of 5070.
 

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(TL;DR I don't think we're far off base but I may not have been clear in the past, I later explain but this is a very long post. My bad on that).

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In the general sense you're totally correct, no disagreement at all. However, there are things a story needs to maintain pacing...and pacing is important. Not just overall story but character pacing. I'll try to explain in more detail than before because it seems like I keep having to repeat this (I blame my own lack of clarity more than anything or anyone). Let me try to fully explain and maybe you'll see that we don't disagree but are likely focusing on different things.

*This will be long but I read your post with true consideration so I hope and you'll read and consider mine*:


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First, a story needs backbone (often called other things like foundational theme) and characters need footing for a complete story to make sense and sit right with the person taking it in. A few examples:

Footing:
I don't care about Star Wars but I've seen the movies. Before The Last Jedi came out Mark Hamill went in front of every camera he could find to tell people that this is *not* the Luke Skywalker he knew and played. He even did it on the red carpet at the premiere! Later, many fans hated the movie and cited Luke as a major reason.
What happened? The writer of that film changed the footing of Luke. Luke was no longer Luke as fans knew him. That makes a story worse.

Another quick example or hypothetical would be if a new Iron Man movie came out and it spent the first half of the movie showing Tony Stark learning Algebra in order to build a tool he needed, lol. Fans would understandably be upset to have to pretend that "Supergenius, Tony Stark" didn't know basic Algebra. We've seen him time travel and build a suit from scraps in a cave but he had to learn Algebra real quick, lol.
The footing of the character would be destroyed by that. It would undermine the basic sense of that character.


Backbone/Foundation/themes:
Star Wars is generally about rebellion, teamwork, overcoming great odds through perseverance and faith, redemption, etc.
Sex wouldn't be one of those things, lol. Sex is, at best, a vague and distant theme and kept only to Han and Leia. Sex is certainly not a theme of Star Wars.


Ok, now to APM:

Sex *is* a theme of this story. This is a porn site, lol. Every story here is heavily and often totally rooted in sex. Sex is a backbone, a foundational theme of A Perfect Marriage.

So now we have character footing:
Chris (only speaking of Chris and Anna at this point) is a man long obsessed with Anna. He has lusted after her and been secretly in love with her for, what, a decade? Since college/University.
He makes his move and slowly flirts with her until she reciprocates. He sets his best friend up to look like a cheater to help his cause with Anna. He gets her to talk privately. He gets her to divulge secrets. He gets her to send sexy photos. He finally got her to jerk him off in a shower as he fondled her tits/ass, cumming in her hand! Then within the next day (or two) gets her to suck his dick in her garage!

It would go against his footing to suddenly pull back from pursuing Anna further. He is locked-in to a pattern of behavior.

Anna has lost her ability to say "no" to Chris. Clearly. It would go against her footing to suddenly decide that things will pause or stop with Chris. Anna is locked-in to a pattern of behavior with Chris.

Note that I'm ONLY referring to those two. I've long repeated that what I'm saying does not necessarily apply to other characters because they all have their own pacing. In this story about sex...and in the pacing between Chris and Anna...they have to fuck soon to maintain pacing because breaking that pacing (backbone and footing) will make the story worse due to it being nonsensical.
This does NOT mean Anna has to become the town bicycle with every man in town if she fucks Chris soon. Noe does it make other events meaningless or more important.

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Now, this doesn't mean there are no ways to avoid it! There just aren't any ways to avoid it AND keep the story at the quality it is without a massive and difficult to write alternative. Maybe Chris gets bit by a bus or sent to Antarctica for work (lol)? Maybe Anna trips doen the stairs on ber way to fuck Chris and she's now in a wheelchair? Whatever. It CAN be avoided but it would be hard to do and not come across as bad writing/pacing.

The reason a story written with no sacred cows and a nearly impossible ability to predict the next moves is because it takes a FANTASTIC writer to achieve those things.
George RR Martin with ASOIAF/Game of Thrones is an example and there are no GRRM-level writers making porn on F95Zone, lol. I guarantee. Its best for a dev on F95 to not even try.

So, had Chris and Anna fucked would it ruin what happens with other characters? Of course not, in a general sense. In fact, I'd argue that they SHOULD HAVE fucked instead of a blowjob due to the previous shower scene. But anyway...

It wouldn't ruin the story to delay that event but it would weaken it, and if you make that a pattern (like AWAM) it would ruin the overall story. I'm sure of that.
Again, even in a porn story that requires some leeway of credulity, things have to make sense and characters have to behave in a consistent way or the story is worsened.

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Finally, I don't claim to be the arbiter of everything. In fact, if I don't know what I'm talking about I tend to shut the fuck up. With most things in life I don't know what I'm talking about, lol. I'm not a "have an opinion just to have it" guy.

I will extrapolate if anyone asked me to but I've stated here many times that cheating is something I have personal experience with. It fucked my life up and I'm literally on this site due to that event. If I were still with my ex-fiance' I wouldn't be here or know what this site is, let alone be a member, but I kinda shut my life off after losing the only person I ever loved due to my own actions. That led me to being lonely and finding this site (I need to get back on track if I'm being totally honest, lol).

If this were about gangbangs or 3-ways I'd keep my mouth shut due to having never been in one. I don't know what a 3-way is like as I've never had two women at once...

...I know the pacing of two people having a fling behind the backs of their significant others. I know what that looks like, sounds like and the speed that it happens. No two are exactly the same but they all seem to share similarity so I think that's why I'm so insistent on this one is (Chris and Anna). I've never been a 90yo man (Marvin) and I've never been the head of a company that employs the hot daughter of an old friend, lol.
I have come across an old crush later in life, slowly flirted, slowly took breaks together, slowly left campus with them on breaks, sext, get nudes sent and fuck that person behind the backs of our partners. There is a rhythm to it. You don't pull back.

I've also taken courses on screenwriting and read a dozen books on the topic so I think that's why I also focus on the stories and pacing of VNs.

When a VN is going as well as this VN I don't want it to suddenly go to shit. Too many do, for dev greed or laziness. My takes are only an attempt to keep this going as well as it has been.
Hmmm, Pace is good ..I dont have to say anything about the pace and it depends on different girls tbh...all girls are different , those who are horny if she is attracted to you, then you have to catch her signal. At our mind we go by our experiences and our pace if it's first time. Whatever we are comfortable with. Just saying you might have gone with the pace of whatever you were comfortable with right. And most important thing is attraction between both parties and experience that you both have to go for another partner right.

Fine whatever you shared and whatever your approach was, now that you had an experience with...next time just in case if it clicks with someone else..suppose you are dating some girl now, and another girl make a move on you where you find her attractive....you already know how it will go down the line just in case if you wanna cheat..because now you might be experienced in cheating too ....and depending on the girl's response, you'll clearly get a hint on whether to move forward or not...and the next time believe me if it happens, it will happen a lil bit faster than previous one...and if the girl is also experienced in cheating, she will also get a hint whether she could go ahead or not quicker than previous cheating path. Just saying the next time if some cheating is supposed to happen, it will happen quicker lol. You just have to make your mind whether to go for it or not, it will not take the process that you have gone through for the first time cheating because of 2 reasons 1) you already did it and you know how it will feel and what you will face after...2) you will obviously get a hint more easily as you are experienced now from your sex partner and make a better terms out of your relation next time based on your past experience as you know what to do and what not to do.

So as beside Chris and Ana, if Ana gets experienced once on cheating, things will pace up depending on whether she wants to have sex or not. And I dont think she will get caught after cheating with chris because chris doesnt spread any words about it...and that's what open Ana to go ahead with cheating thinking that David will not know about her other affairs too....And that's where she might go wrong and get caught . Not all guys will be Chris. And Chris is not under Kendra influence, he is independent...Ana doesnt know that other guys are under Kendra influence. Ana just got confidence that she can cheat with someone without getting caught because of her Chris experience...She doesnt know what's waiting ahead with other storyline. Chris doesn't want to ruin David marriage, he just want sex n leave the city....on the other antagonist path, she will have to face David because guys under kendra's influence might results in ruining their marriage because of Kendra..and that thing those guys doesn't know yet. So cheating only suits with people with clean sex intentions kind of person only , no malicious intentions and with an intention only to enjoy sex without harming anything else in other person life unless they're looking for a future together.

Just an example suppose you cheat with someone who kept things with herself only that was safe option for you...but if you gain that confidence of cheating n screw with a girl that chat with her other friends where few are mutual friends, that will create chaos in your personal life.
 
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You can wait for the new RTX 5090 system to launch lol..its going to be expensive....but if you want processing speed of 4090 then it can be achieved with RTX 5070 and this my friend is a shocker, half the price of 4090 with same performance. 5070 will be the best deal for a hobbyist ...around $600 price. Like a slap to all 4090 users who bought it with twice the price of 5070.
i ask lot artist they used 3050 and it work good but need 12gb better work if get 8 gb will be low quality slow
so rtx 4000 price is 300 $ so i can buy all pc will cost around 1k+ to 1500
so i plan budge also need lot thing ram mb
i put around price
 

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i ask lot artist they used 3050 and it work good but need 12gb better work if get 8 gb will be low quality slow
so rtx 4000 price is 300 $ so i can buy all pc will cost around 1k+ to 1500
so i plan budge also need lot thing ram mb
i put around price
Go for 5070 I will suggest..wait for an year...save for it... it's better option as it has got speed of 4090. So obviously better performance. And new PC will take around an year to come up with those configuration. Because new RTX need different motherboard too...so it will take time to design a slot for new RAM and new RTX slots. Running new RTX with old cpu is disaster.
 
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Go for 5070 I will suggest..wait for an year...save for it... it's better option as it has got speed of 4090. So obviously better performance. And new PC will take around an year to come up with those configuration. Because new RTX need different motherboard too...so it will take time to design a slot for new RAM and new RTX slots. Running new RTX with old cpu is disaster.
A weak processor will limit the graphics card (so-called bottleneck)
 

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L&P> is a great model that every NTR/Corruption devs should follow.....you know? The newgens need to take some inspiration from the OGs.
LP had better story...just being honest..if you have played AWAM part 1...just being honest it was best story at that time, he took like 3 years to finish all aspects of Sophia life from every angle....The moment he started making part 2, no matter animation n renders are of good quality but he lost it. I wish that he has some story in his mind...but sadly he doesn't have anything to write at all...He might know how to end the story and maybe after 30 years we will see some interesting climax ...but as of now he's just focussed on not giving away Sophia sex lol and please his slow corrupt followers for lifetime without any context by introducing million paths...He made other developers believe that holding sex scene is a key to become successful VN..,well it's not, it's the story always. The story that was actually good once upon a time now turned to disaster because of slow corruption.

The key of success will always be a good story that moves forward and not making it cringe like stuck at same place for a long time just because a single update got most likes from public..like Game of thrones series, if the story is good, sex scenes doesn't matter....you can introduce it in every episode and still people will stick to it because of story beside sex. It was not like if people like sex , game of thrones stop moving the story forward and kept showing only sex and nudity of all characters lol. Move the story forward with sex that's all it needs. You can guess after certain period of time that LP has no use of few characters in his story but due to voters, he stuck in building tease of MC with them. Like sex with tutoring students or old men probably has nothing to do with the main story itself...but he kept adding tease scene with them just because of demands. Same goes with Dylan and ellie paths with their friends is irrelevant to the main story...their relationship with Sophia is all that matters. But LP took a deep dive in building all fantasies by taking all individuals as antagonist and all members of family as MC. Slow corruption lovers made a recipe of disaster for LP on how to bring the most popular cheating wife VN to it's lowest point..And those people still praise him even if the update is completely bullshit.
 
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LP had better story...just being honest..if you have played AWAM part 1...just being honest it was best story at that time, he took like 3 years to finish all aspects of Sophia life from every angle....The moment he started making part 2, no matter animation n renders are of good quality but he lost it. I wish that he has some story in his mind...but sadly he doesn't have anything to write at all...He might know how to end the story and maybe after 30 years we will see some interesting climax ...but as of now he's just focussed on not giving away Sophia sex lol and please his slow corrupt followers for lifetime without any context by introducing million paths...He made other developers believe that holding sex scene is a key to become successful VN..,well it's not, it's the story always. The story that was actually good once upon a time now turned to disaster because of slow corruption.

The key of success will always be a good story that moves forward and not making it cringe like stuck at same place for a long time just because a single update got most likes from public..like Game of thrones series, if the story is good, sex scenes doesn't matter....you can introduce it in every episode and still people will stick to it because of story beside sex. It was not like if people like sex , game of thrones stop moving the story forward and kept showing only sex and nudity of all characters lol. Move the story forward with sex that's all it needs. You can guess after certain period of time that LP has no use of few characters in his story but due to voters, he stuck in building tease of MC with them. Like sex with tutoring students or old men probably has nothing to do with the main story itself...but he kept adding tease scene with them just because of demands. Same goes with Dylan and ellie paths with their friends is irrelevant to the main story...their relationship with Sophia is all that matters. But LP took a deep dive in building all fantasies by taking all individuals as antagonist and all members of family as MC. Slow corruption lovers made a recipe of disaster for LP on how to bring the most popular cheating wife VN to it's lowest point..And those people still praise him even if the update is completely bullshit.
Well, with few words......i was refferin' to the blueballs rather than the story I'm not a great fan of AWAM but i wouldn't go that far to compare it's story to phot on trial.
 
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