VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[fishbrain]

All I count on is that every update will make me want to kick Chris's teeth down his throat even more and I haven't been disappointed yet! There better be some sweet revenge at the end of one of these paths, we deserve it!

Looking forward to Kendra banging her head against a wall in a padded room too but that's a secondary wish. lol

 

[Pi Quantum]

Loved the phone conversations between Leonard, Robinson and Chris. Each despises the other and they'll back stab one another without hesitation if it gets them closer to Anna, but they pretend to be friendly while gathering information and sharing as little as possible. Add this to the developing friction between Marvin and Kendra and its starting to look like Anna's best chance of avoiding their plots is for another predator to sabotage them, as soon as it looks like they're gaining power over Anna. I hope she eventually works this out and starts playing them off against each other, eliminating the weakest until only one remains.

I play Anna as a naughty girl that flirts with and teases men to boost her post-pregnancy ego, but she'd never willingly drop her panties for another man unless she was convinced her marriage was over. Having said that, blackmail, spiked drinks (Marvin's likely plan) or other factors could bypass the willing part.

 

[luxilfer666]

I have a love-hate feeling about this game. It's not about that this game good or bad. But sometimes both main characters' behaviour and decision making is very frustating.

 

[mrobviouspsudonym]

Loved the phone conversations between Leonard, Robinson and Chris. Each despises the other and they'll back stab one another without hesitation if it gets them closer to Anna, but they pretend to be friendly while gathering information and sharing as little as possible. Add this to the developing friction between Marvin and Kendra and its starting to look like Anna's best chance of avoiding their plots is for another predator to sabotage them, as soon as it looks like they're gaining power over Anna. I hope she eventually works this out and starts playing them off against each other, eliminating the weakest until only one remains.

Considering she's so rock fucking retarded she couldn't tell her dad's law partner wanted to fuck her after he stuck his face between her asscheeks and breathed in her shithole scent with the volume of a failing jet engine at age twenty one as a supposed serious law student, I doubt she'll ever catch on to or come up with anything an eighth that clever. At this point all these guys have to do is stick their dick in her and she'll just go: "Come on guys, I already told you twenty times to respect my boundaries. Don't make me say it a twenty-first with a frowny face, tee hee!"

 

[Whosbeenfappin]

Considering she's so rock fucking retarded she couldn't tell her dad's law partner wanted to fuck her after he stuck his face between her asscheeks and breathed in her shithole scent with the volume of a failing jet engine at age twenty one as a supposed serious law student, I doubt she'll ever catch on to or come up with anything an eighth that clever. At this point all these guys have to do is stick their dick in her and she'll just go: "Come on guys, I already told you twenty times to respect my boundaries. Don't make me say it a twenty-first with a frowny face, tee hee!"

She's like a high functioning sexual autist.

 

[Scotty Doesn't Know]

Loved the phone conversations between Leonard, Robinson and Chris. Each despises the other and they'll back stab one another without hesitation if it gets them closer to Anna, but they pretend to be friendly while gathering information and sharing as little as possible. Add this to the developing friction between Marvin and Kendra and its starting to look like Anna's best chance of avoiding their plots is for another predator to sabotage them, as soon as it looks like they're gaining power over Anna. I hope she eventually works this out and starts playing them off against each other, eliminating the weakest until only one remains.

Playing the latest update couple nights ago at 2 in the morning. When Leonard (The Wig Master) first came on I started to laugh, then all the guys were back stabbing and talking shit about each other, when they're supposed to be best friends. Saying he's a snake, a slug etc. When they're all as bad as each other. I lost it and was laughing hysterically hahaha. Neighbours probably woke up cos I was laughing so much! It was like the round table of morons that are worse than the Mean Girls gossiping & bitching about each other lol. So funny!! The writing is pure gold

 

[RRommel]

This game has a good story and good character interaction, I love it!

 

[Tjssss]

I really like this story, but I personally think it's getting a bit crowded in terms of men who are actively trying to fuck Anna. I'd go for maybe two or three tops, otherwise it seems a bit of a "everyone in the world is conspiring" kind of thing and the impact gets a bit diluted.

That might just be me, and I wouldn't say the writing is bad because of that, this is a very good story.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Man I read every one of those fckn words on this last update and the whole story for that matter and look I'm all for a good story that makes sense and I appreciate that part of this game/visual novel. I understand some things are pivital to plot points and all that. But if that is all I was interested in I'd go read a regular book. This is an adult visual novel and this is just my opinion but I'd much rather see a naked Anna than an old man's dick(and not just one but two of em). And I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who feels that way. So I apologize for being a little disappointed when I see old wrinkly dicks instead of nice perky tiddies and a clean shaved vagina

But Marvin did show you Kendra’s tits and bald pussy

 

[D2taA]

Thing is what most don't think about is once she starts fucking it's all downhill from there. There is no more build up show not much left for a story, she just end up a cum-dump like all the others
Tacos
Couple's duet
Another man's wife

You get the point, it would be nice to see one actually have a storyline after she turn to darkside

 

[Tinez82]

But Marvin did show you Kendra’s tits and bald pussy

Kendra?!! Pfft...Man I ain't worried bout no Kendra. Besides she said she likes big cocks anyways and mines just average

 

[mrobviouspsudonym]

I really like this story, but I personally think it's getting a bit crowded in terms of men who are actively trying to fuck Anna. I'd go for maybe two or three tops, otherwise it seems a bit of a "everyone in the world is conspiring" kind of thing and the impact gets a bit diluted.

That might just be me, and I wouldn't say the writing is bad because of that, this is a very good story.

I mean, even if we put aside Anna the "professional lawyer's" ability to read social cues & context clues being worse than a christian home-schooled 7 year old, at this point it seems like Kendra has unlimited funds & spec ops training not to mention all the time and connections in the world despite being crazy enough to talk about herself in the third person like a porn parody version of a bond villain. So I mean, you do you. But even with the sex scenes edited out, I wouldn't submit this to fanfiction.net or archiveofourown.org without being afraid I'd get laughed off the sites for how stupidly convoluted & spectacularly railroaded it is.

This could only be considered a choose your own adventure novel if every time you tried to make a choice that wasn't on the town bicycle path you got sent to a page that said "fuck you pussy, go back and do it right"

 

[Pi Quantum]

She's like a high functioning sexual autist.

To be fair, the nemesis she's up against (Kendra the Puppetmaster) is quite literally insane. She's done an excellent job of framing David, but her tools are completely untrustworthy and she's trying to enforce loyalty via a gun to the head. At some point her plans are guaranteed to come crashing down, but we don't know if that'll come too late to save Anna's marriage.

A break-up seems to be inevitable at this stage, but a reconciliation might be possible after the truth comes out. Anna will be a very different person by then and David may see her actions as unforgivable, even if she was tricked into them. A more likely outcome is that David leaves her, Kendra goes into the nut house and Anna has to surrender her dignity to Hank in order to get that promotion and support the baby. Leonard, Robinson and Chris will screw each other over, Marvin will go to jail and Jake will still be trying to get into Anna's panties. Stromberger will hopefully die of heart failure after too much fantasising over Anna.

 

[luxilfer666]

Thing is what most don't think about is once she starts fucking it's all downhill from there. There is no more build up show not much left for a story, she just end up a cum-dump like all the others
Tacos
Couple's duet
Another man's wife

You get the point, it would be nice to see one actually have a storyline after she turn to darkside

All games you mentioned are mainly focused on swinging/hotwifing. So, the conflict in the story are less intruiging. Swinger lifestyle is what mainly the influence of those games. APM, however, is under infidelity/cheating category, which is not very different from drama/soap opera, except it has nudity and sex scenes.

 

[mrobviouspsudonym]

To be fair, the nemesis she's up against (Kendra the Puppetmaster) is quite literally insane. She's done an excellent job of framing David, but her tools are completely untrustworthy and she's trying to enforce loyalty via a gun to the head. At some point her plans are guaranteed to come crashing down, but we don't know if that'll come too late to save Anna's marriage.

A break-up seems to be inevitable at this stage, but a reconciliation might be possible after the truth comes out. Anna will be a very different person by then and David may see her actions as unforgivable, even if she was tricked into them. A more likely outcome is that David leaves her, Kendra goes into the nut house and Anna has to surrender her dignity to Hank in order to get that promotion and support the baby. Leonard, Robinson and Chris will screw each other over, Marvin will go to jail and Jake will still be trying to get into Anna's panties. Stromberger will hopefully die of heart failure after too much fantasising over Anna.

Yeah, how exactly did Kendra trick her into letting Chris grope her ass or touch his cock? Or sending Chris nudes? Or letting the neighbor grab her tits? Or letting Marvin grab her ass and her legs and admire her naked tits? Or lying to David about all of that because she totally doesn't lead guys on and is totally right to climb onto her moral high horse when he dares imply that she lets guys get too friendly with her?

Last I checked Kendra barely had to do anything to her. The one person she pushes most of all is Jake and that's entirely incidental to all the other shit Anna's done even if the player tries to have her resist temptation entirely.

Can Kendra really be called her nemesis if it's more Anna's own stupidity and lack of impulse control that leads her to make these decisions rather than any machinations on Kendra's part?

And all of this is even assuming Anna wants to save her marriage: which if you've read my previous posts you already know I'm convinced she doesn't actually want. Because again, even if the player has tried to make her as loyal as David is, she has all the excuses and reasons in the world to keep giving literally every other guy like Chris and Marvin and Roger and Sternberger and Hank all the leeway in the universe but can barely stand having David home without talking about separation and thinking about their marriage like it's already over.

 

[D2taA]

All games you mentioned are mainly focused on swinging/hotwifing. So, the conflict in the story are less intruiging. Swinger lifestyle is what mainly the influence of those games. APM, however, is under infidelity/cheating category, which is not very different from drama/soap opera, except it has nudity and sex scenes.

I mentioned those games because they have a wife featured in them, all wife's in these VNs or games turn hoe. I sorry to break it to you but she'll turn into a hoe

 

[Ass Fan]

This update surprised me now I don't know who is worse Chris or Mr Stenstromber.

Kendra and Anna showing some skin was the great salvation, removing the withered dicks And poor little Marvin..

 

[xert13]

This VN is killing me with the build up. Well done. I respect the Devs for being brave enough to slowly build the story. Hope it doesn't take overly long however to see a mistake on Anne's part. In this case though, I think she will be devastated by any indiscretion.....or will she? Delicious anticipation..

 

[luxilfer666]

I mentioned those games because they have a wife featured in them, all wife's in these VNs or games turn hoe. I sorry to break it to you but she'll turn into a hoe

I get what you mean. I just wanna point out that those three are "intended" to make the wife a hoe. While here, considering Anna is equally a main character as David, you can still choose her to end up being a hoe or not. And, to let you know, I won't be here if I want a romantic vanilla story between married couple.

 

[D2taA]

I get what you mean. I just wanna point out that those three are "intended" to make the wife a hoe. While here, considering Anna is equally a main character as David, you can still choose her to end up being a hoe or not. And, to let you know, I won't be here if I want a romantic vanilla story between married couple.

I no, but it's assumed to play her to be a hoe, pretty sure they're won't be content on vanilla path