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NewTricks

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Ummm...maybe I missed it but where exactly is her conflict here? She quite literally had the senior citizen stick his schnoz in her ass crack and inhale loudly. MULTIPLE. times. And somehow she tries to internally claim there was absolutely no hint he had inappropriate thoughts about her and she was completely blindsided by his later attempt to come onto her at her dad's funeral?

The neighbor grabbed her tits, her husband's best friend grabbed her ass, his other friend waved his dick in her face and grabbed her ass in the bathroom, Marvin has felt her up about three times even if the player themselves has had her shut it down, and now she's forgiving Chris's weeks of begging for more pics and attempts to needle her into doing more sexual things as "she just needs to be ready in case David really cheated" without a single thought or question about his own motives or truthfulness? But in the meantime a single woman approaches her husband and she absolutely cannot find it in her to forgive him without substantial evidence of his innocence?

Yeah, she comes off as reeeeeallly conflicted. *eye roll*

My point wasn't about whether it could realistically end soon, my point was that even when the player tries to make her a good wife, there's a fundamental disconnect between their attempts and how she's written and reacts. Like, how in the hell are they supposed to reconcile after the hard time she's given him if it comes out just how much shit she's been hiding from David and brushing under the carpet? All the years they're together with ALL OF THESE ENCOUNTERS with other guys and she has the temerity to get snippy with him thinking she gets too chummy with them? Who the fuck is she to tell him all about how he's not a fit father who's betrayed this marriage and their daughter when even if the player has tried to make her the most loyal and devoted wife possible, has still giggled when accepting sexual advances from EVERY SINGLE MALE PRESENCE in their life?

Seriously tell me with a straight face how exactly she's going to tell David all about how she doesn't encourage guys and she was right to be suspicious of him when it comes out what she sent Chris and let Marvin and Stenbomber get away with. I would love to hear how exactly they are anything other than absolutely boned if even half of the shit she's pulled comes out in a "reconciliation" ending.

I mean maybe I'm just an idiot who somehow isn't getting the nuances of such "REALISITIC" & "TRUE TO LIFE" characterization but it seems kind of strange to me that a 'loving' wife can somehow come up with six different rationalizations and excuses for every SINGLE other guy's overtly sexual behavior in her life, but meek little David gets condemned as a cheater who's only allowed back into the house by her majesty's good graces because men are such pigs who make rules for women they themselves don't follow. (She thinks and says without a single atom of self-reflection.)
I think that you've picked up what others refuse to, that Anne is a narcissistic hypocrite who lives in a carefully curated reality where she can do no wrong and is always a victim of circumstance. Me and my partner picked it up in her first POV chapter when we were horrified upon hearing her thoughts. At first we just kind of thought she was dumb. Upon hearing how conniving the thoughts going through her head were we realized she was so much worse. David doesn't need a marriage counselor he needs the witness protection program to help him disappear.
 

luxilfer666

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I think that you've picked up what others refuse to, that Anne is a narcissistic hypocrite who lives in a carefully curated reality where she can do no wrong and is always a victim of circumstance. Me and my partner picked it up in her first POV chapter when we were horrified upon hearing her thoughts. At first we just kind of thought she was dumb. Upon hearing how conniving the thoughts going through her head were we realized she was so much worse. David doesn't need a marriage counselor he needs the witness protection program to help him disappear.
THIS. Either in faithful or unfaithful route, she always believes she's in the right. Ignoring his father and David's advice of not getting too comfortable and kind around other people is the prove. So, the potrayal and self thought of her being a naive woman is just her own illusion.
 

SimilarToMe

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I have to agree with some criticism. I really like this game and wish it well, but there are some obviously bad decisions into creating this. Was there not talk about how render making process takes a long time? So then why use those renders into old guys fapping scenes and backstory that could have same effect with just a nice text? I'm sure most people don't care about dreams, memories, fantasy theories in these games - the best feelings always come from the action that is real and happening currently in the games universe.

Changing room groping scene was great for example. Going forward I hope there are better decisions made, people want to like this game and be patient, but after that patience is exercised and you see these results it wears thin and fast.

Use good writing on story building scenes, use good renders on action scenes. This is my opinion!

Good luck!
ABSOLUTELY and TOTALLY agree with you. A huge and unnecessary waste of render-time, considering the fact that in the last update the dev, when asked why Anna wasn't seen during the phone chat with Chris, replied that it would have taken too long to render a scene/animation. And here we are, admiring an animated sausage festival.
 

Taven Val

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ABSOLUTELY and TOTALLY agree with you. A huge and unnecessary waste of render-time, considering the fact that in the last update the dev, when asked why Anna wasn't seen during the phone chat with Chris, replied that it would have taken too long to render a scene/animation. And here we are, admiring an animated sausage festival.
lol we were promised Anna but instead we get dongers
 

marispiper

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The male nudity count in this game is far higher than the female. Like watching a post me-too drama. The 70 year old misanthrope wanking on the bed was a real passion killer, yeah thanks for that. Was an early supporter of this, but it's starting to disappear up its own arse. Supporting Corrupted Hearts atm. Now there's a great NTR story line.
 

Sadowdark

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I don’t think any roadmap was shared but we could speculate:

1) Anna and David reconcile and marriage is saved (lol)
2) Anna stays in the marriage but got side action with any of the guys
3) Anna divorces David
4) Anna gets with any one or multiple iterations with the guys going after her and gets dumped
5) Anna divorces David and marries one of the other guys.
6) Anna turns into a cumslut fucking everything that moves to get back at David

i think #2 and #4 would be my preferred endings. This marriage lost trust and won’t recover especially once she started sending sexy selfies to Chris and let Marvin grope her.
I've already done something like this, search this thread, I just did it % these endings are likely
 

Ragnar

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I really like this story, but I personally think it's getting a bit crowded in terms of men who are actively trying to fuck Anna. I'd go for maybe two or three tops, otherwise it seems a bit of a "everyone in the world is conspiring" kind of thing and the impact gets a bit diluted.

That might just be me, and I wouldn't say the writing is bad because of that, this is a very good story.
That's cause some people take the story too seriously when the dev is making his own version of
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rdtree

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This is getting over the top now. What is this chick the ultimate super villain with connections everywhere, striking fear into everyone who crosses her. Come on. This is the most frustrating game I have ever played which of course, makes this a great game and keeps me playing. Chris is a pig and his demise will be joyful.
 
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For all you unhappy gentlemen complaining about this and that, look at the bright side. You're getting this game/story free of charge. I personally think the story is quite entertaining and the artistry exceptional. That said, my expectations are clearly a little more tempered than others. This is after all, an adult gaming site.
Don't offer me choices,than make them not matter.
 
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Mr_Palmer

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Basically the reason I'm so hard on the plot is because it claimed that the plot mattered but more and more it's feeling like it just doesn't. Maybe it's dumb of me to feel this way but my fundamental starting point is: If it's an ntr game, than just make it an ntr game. Don't blow smoke up my ass saying that the choices matter if it's actually just a choice between "town bike" and "fuck you you're doing it wrong."
Maybe you’re new to this story, but there’s been at least ten warnings that if you don’t like ntr then stay the hell away from this. This story is clearly not for you. You want Anna to be something she’s not, so you will forever be disappointed. Anna is Anna, that can’t be changed. You can influence her decision-making but you can’t change her. She’s a very naive woman with some emotional problems, and now that her marriage has hit a rough patch, the sharks are circling. That’s the story. You’ve figured it out - you just aren’t willing to accept it, which is totally fine, but I’ve been clear what this is and what to expect.

By the way, Anna wasn’t aware Mr. S was sniffing her arse. Perhaps I should’ve made that more clear. I’m definitely not perfect and am not a professional novelist… this is something I do with my free time!
 

Mr_Palmer

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The question is very easy:
the developer is diluting the broth to maximize the income from the followers.
That's it.
There’s 1000 porn games on this site and a near infinite amount of porn on the internet. If anyone is looking for that, they have plenty of options. The vast majority of supporters enjoy the story and want to see it continue. They aren’t dumb… if I had some scheme to rip them off I’m sure they’d pick up on it and stop contributing.
 
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Maybe you’re new to this story, but there’s been at least ten warnings that if you don’t like ntr then stay the hell away from this. This story is clearly not for you. You want Anna to be something she’s not, so you will forever be disappointed. Anna is Anna, that can’t be changed. You can influence her decision-making but you can’t change her. She’s a very naive woman with some emotional problems, and now that her marriage has hit a rough patch, the sharks are circling. That’s the story. You’ve figured it out - you just aren’t willing to accept it, which is totally fine, but I’ve been clear what this is and what to expect.

By the way, Anna wasn’t aware Mr. S was sniffing her arse. Perhaps I should’ve made that more clear. I’m definitely not perfect and am not a professional novelist… this is something I do with my free time!

Not to jump into this,but at least in Anna's cases,you'd be better off making this a kinetic novel till act 3.

Because she's gonna keep justifying all kinds of shit from all the guys no matter what the player choices are correct? Like I found Chris obnoxious as fuck,actively chose anti him options.......didn't fucking matter. Anna's gonna keep being some sort of submissive autist,who can apparently justify ANYTHING. Which is annoying.

That said it's your game,do you,just don't be upset when people vent.
 

Mr_Palmer

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Not to jump into this,but at least in Anna's cases,you'd be better off making this a kinetic novel till act 3.

Because she's gonna keep justifying all kinds of shit from all the guys no matter what the player choices are correct? Like I found Chris obnoxious as fuck,actively chose anti him options.......didn't fucking matter. Anna's gonna keep being some sort of submissive autist,who can apparently justify ANYTHING. Which is annoying.

That said it's your game,do you,just don't be upset when people vent.
By all means vent, but damn, I can vent too when someone has to post ten times trying to claim this story should be something it’s not.
And Chris is meant to make you angry and frustrated if you reject him… I plan/hope to give you a path that ultimately satisfies you.
 
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