VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[Deleted member 7535870]

Fake rehabilitation specialist Rob Cobra is more dangerous than a fake friend. Since Rob Cobra is a hunter in his area, he has fucked almost every married woman in his area of all ages, except Anna. And what does a fake friend have to brag about? He betrayed Anna's friend and brags about how macho he is and how he is still in Anna's friend zone (not counting the masturbation Anna did to him). In addition, the fake friend thinks Rob Cobra is an idiot and a gossip and does not trust him.

My friend, i don't think Chris will understand he's been "friendzoned" what woukd you expect from a dude without any goals
The only dude in this game who is suitable and know how to use his séduction skills on woman without harassing her is Jack
Chris: a Traitor who only know how to grope and make dirty joke to seduce a woman
He have no goals in life unemployed and almost look Homeless(Michelle Fourniret 2.0)
Marvin: he is an old peeping tom with an hight level masturbation skills but seduction skills 0 he can not have sexual favor since His wife had die ie for age (old) problem i am asking how this guy can still walking with 2 century old (My broh is immortal)
Hook:Well i don't think i need to explain much,those dudes typos when they can not score with mature woman the naïve younger one is the perfect target precise that (My broh is a p€dp#..)
The last one Hank well I'll not say much but seriously who will marry a "Lava Hulk" my broh give me PTSD all the Time i look at His body
Hank:"note to self" fuck the gym and long live to the MC Donalds (Typical ugly losers)

 

[TimoF965]

Chris: a Traitor who only know how to grope and make dirty joke to seduce a woman

I would give him at least a little charme. He is playing her well and willing to take a risk. It would hurt him (a little) if their friendship would die because he fucked his wife .

 

[Sadowdark]

Marvin: he is an old peeping tom with an hight level masturbation skills but sesuction skills 0 he can not have sexual favor since

Don't forget the old fish is a registered sex offender. He went to law enforcement to avoid a long prison sentence because he reported his old boss when he told him to install cameras in the bathroom where his old boss was spying on women. One incident reported by Anne and the old fish is back to serve a long prison sentence, with his previous sentence added to it. Jake is a Casnova type who has debts to pay off on his super sports car that he used to pick Anne up from a happy hour event. He was fired but it wasn't reported to the police because that was the deal with his ex-boss at his previous job because he fucked and seduced his boss's daughter. He's in on Kendra's plan because he needs a lot of money, and Anne is just an added bonus to him.

 

[Deleted member 7535870]

I would give him at least a little charme. He is playing her well and willing to take a risk. It would hurt him (a little) if their friendship would die because he fucked his wife .

I know we're talking about a fictionnal game but how about using some logic?
Realistic i mean....) i know what you mean some risk can make people look charming but the risk that Chris is taking doesn't have any, the risk is just stupid,dumb and dangerouse well in the case of David it looks less dangerous kuz MR Palmer whrite him as a naïve beta i don't say he had whrite him bad to avoid any confusion just the beta attitude is too hight take the scene when Hank had groped Anna in front of David, he saw that but our genius prefere to go and confront Anna WTF? a dude you had disrespect me like that in front of my date "Tinder" my first move would be Jackie Channed your head

 

[sslovoe]

lot game give idea where process go
think lot hate wait but at least give fan you are working even if take many month they know
like AMAW or world secret
even if its fake diagram lot look for possible time come relase

 

[Deleted member 7535870]

Don't forget the old fish is a registered sex offender. He went to law enforcement to avoid a long prison sentence because he reported his old boss when he told him to install cameras in the bathroom where his old boss was spying on women. One incident reported by Anne and the old fish is back to serve a long prison sentence, with his previous sentence added to it. Jake is a Casnova type who has debts to pay off on his super sports car that he used to pick Anne up from a happy hour event. He was fired but it wasn't reported to the police because that was the deal with his ex-boss at his previous job because he fucked and seduced his boss's daughter. He's in on Kendra's plan because he needs a lot of money, and Anne is just an added bonus to him.

That's so crazy half of the predator in this game have a Fuck up past well, a wise man had say what doesn't kill you make you stronger i don't know if i can use it as an actual lecture or an irony in the case of Marvin but one thing for sure it's too late for going back even a psychiatre would say this old man's is allready fuck in every inch of His body especially in the head he had avoid eating some Jail food why not a second time (My broh is untoucheable) injustice is his middle name

 

[Deleted member 7535870]

lot game give idea where process go
think lot hate wait but at least give fan you are working even if take many month they know
like AMAW or world secret
even if its fake diagram lot look for possible time come relase
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Wow, that fast

 

[sslovoe]

just to bother you again
i cant stand watch some movie and not think its about anna

maybe this movie
is type blond naive women who lot men try get


anna / marry
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man love her
david / Ted

Woogie

freind of ted is obsessed with her shoes


Pat Healy


man try get her and tell ted she get pregnant and old ugly to not let him know she still fox fake architect





Tucker

pretend he is handycape because she care to poor and handycape pepole and have brother mentel




women tell her go girl Magda is kendra type


even old man want her


man she like


every one want anna


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[Coriolan]

 

[mavikurt10]

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Owwwwwwww omg Who did this? You?

 

[redoubt27]

And after all, isn't there a smaller or bigger Chris in all of us.

No, there isn't.

There's a reason the lowest circle of hell is for betrayal such as Chris's...
It would be perfectly reasonable to expedite his arrival...

 

[Chaosguy]

I love Chris, without him you guys wouldn't like the story as much. You need a good villain and Chris is the perfect one, the pretend friend!

 

[edcl58]

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more action there then the games had, well, in forever

 

[Coriolan]

Owwwwwwww omg Who did this? You?

Of course

 

[only MILF]

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Is this...fan art?

 

[Coriolan]

Is this...fan art?

Yes, there's even my name on the image....I wouldn't dare do it if it wasn't mine.

 

[Jhin00]

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How long do we have to wait to see such scenes in the game? (I think 1 year at least)

 

[DarthSpitz717]

I still feel Robinson is going to be a issue. Due to he is the only one not on that list of men that wants to fuck her that she can decline interest. He definitely wants to fuck her so why is he not on the list. Unless the list expands next update. Any thoughts on that.

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I still feel Robinson is going to be a issue.
One of the problems with these types of games is how many characters are involved. On one hand there is Anna and David and the other the villains Jake, Chris, Leanard (a maybe), Grant, Hank, Marvin, Robinson, and Marcel (another maybe). There are only two ways a porn game can go with these many actors. Fast and furious were the main characters get it on with the other actors quickly, or slow and methodical to build a plot. The latter is a lot of work... we are in what 3 releases in {?} and it's just starting to get interesting.

Now the shower scene and the groping scenes before pizza could have had a little more or been different. In the shower scene, it could have been Chris kissing, groping and rubbing Anna to orgasm and that would have worked with the story plot and would speed up the game ... just as before David coming home Chris could have done a boob grope, and neck kisses.

Due to he is the only one not on that list of men that wants to fuck her that she can decline interest. He definitely wants to fuck her so why is he not on the list. Goes back to the number of studs wanting a crack at Anna. So far some 'teasers' with some Marvin content (low end mischief). Hank laying out his plan when he gets up to bat next (what about 4 or so main Hank/Anna scenes setting up that route).

A big mystery with how Grant/Anna route will develop (still we are totally in the dark on that one because all we know there is 'some' history between the two.) But there is a plot problem with no clues how it will be resolved. Anna hates and distrusts Grant, so some time has to be put in to change those dynamics.

Chris and Jake are somewhat in the same boat. They would be thought of as the normal choices Anna would pick. There has to be a lot of Anna think about the shower incident and Anna having to justify what happened for that route to proceed (the shortest and easiest plot to develop.) The upcoming Kendra/Jake after work drinks with Anna is somewhat problematic. The old saying 2 is company and 3 is a crowd. The developer has to get Kendra out of the way for Jake and Anna to be alone long enough to kindle a fire for that route.

Marcel is at the moment, a distant possibility. Again, too many mysteries where the developer wants to take the audience on that route with only one main clue. It comes from Marcel when he first meets Anna. His is pretty 'white' girl and all the stereo type behind it and getting a sugar-momma out of it.

Robinson has to be re-woven back into the story. Anna thought Robinson as being harmless and safe. But after the boob massage incident, it's safe to assume Anna is weary of him. And of course, there is in motion a conversation coming up between Anna and Robinson. Anna seeking more information about David's comings and goings, and Robinson's scheme (whatever it is) to get closure to Anna. The developer can slowly bring back Robinson into the 'list' as he has Anna experiencing all the other events set in motion, or the developer can give Robinson a whole update just to work that route.


Unless the list expands next update. Any thoughts on that.

Really the only man-out is Leanard. He is the farthest of all the male actors from getting Anna's cookie. It wouldn't surprise me if the developer is the OUT that changes the direction of Anna and Davids marriage and helps save it.

 

[redoubt27]

I love Chris, without him you guys wouldn't like the story as much. You need a good villain and Chris is the perfect one, the pretend friend!

Maybe you wouldn't like the story as much without Chris...
Some can see a really great story (that is more enjoyable) without Chris being the way he's written.
Some probably don't like the current story, just Anna, and curious to see if there's any hope of a "good" path that isn't complete crap...

In context of this story as is, Chris is a "cliche", "mustache twirling" villain character.
He's a "good" villain character in the sense that he's playing his part well.
And yes, it's a "good" angle to this story; which could be done differently and still be good if not better.
Chris the "perfect" villain? Absolutely not.
Voldemort, Darth Vader, even Palpatine are "perfect" villains.
Kendra is closer to the "perfect" villain in this story.
Chris is like Umbridge, also a "cliche" villain character but "good"; you just hate them, no empathy or sympathy what so ever.
They are just pieces of shit that need to die slow, painful deaths...

 

[sslovoe]

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you creat game before why not make new game now with help start your project with group

there writer make good story of anna
and we have 3 or 4 artist in group make lot art of anna
why dont you make side game story of anna
with new story and lot artist you can create own game better than you art go as fan art pic