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And Anna is going on a business trip
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Still unclear on David trip though...Ana will have Sophia next week..so probably next week David might be on trip... this week I guess no sex...Jake might try to touch Ana's pussy in car while dropping her from happy hour...that wil be the main scene after marvin boobjob or whatever he gets on the bar...then on Thursday or Friday..Jake main scene will be there..I am hoping on Friday because Thursday Ana will be with grant.
She told David that hank and her wil be in different room so something will happen there for sure.
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This update didn't make much sense for me. Anna is very reluctant concerning bjs, she doesn't even give it her husband. But then she just sinks on her knees in front of Chris of all places in her garage like a street whore and even sucks on his balls like a pro.
Mr Palmer always emphasizes how much he considers his work to be "art". Sorry, but that was unconvincing porn logic once again. I'm all for finally implementing some sex in this vn, but this bj felt out of Anna's character.
Would she really suck someone in her garage like a pro, although she doesn’t like bjs or would it need some more convincing and maybe another/much more appealing atmosphere for her to finally give a blowjob?
Mr Palmer always emphasizes how much he considers his work to be "art". Sorry, but that was unconvincing porn logic once again. I'm all for finally implementing some sex in this vn, but this bj felt out of Anna's character.
Would she really suck someone in her garage like a pro, although she doesn’t like bjs or would it need some more convincing and maybe another/much more appealing atmosphere for her to finally give a blowjob?
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Especially since she recently started practicing on the banana and immediately became an expert in bj so quickly in such a short time, it's illogical and hopeless,
.Anna hates doing BJ and when someone forces her to do it. She even dumped her boyfriend. Where is the logic in her past. Unless if someone doesn't force her to do it, she does it willingly and is happy.
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Chris should eat Anna 1st in this update "returning the favor after bathroom hj" edge her until midnight, admit that she should be a good girl 4 Chris, then make her burst!
Bj follow after
Bj follow after
Bj on floor? How to get that scene? What choices do I need to click to get that.
The way MP took this VN is disappointing...ending up with BJ
All I can see in upcoming updates is:
Hank: maybe on weekends she will get her ass spanked in her hotel room
Rob: she will give rob massage so again HJ/BJ
Marvin: Boobjob/HJ in bar
Jake: touching groping here n there as a tease.
Leonard: just wanted nudes ....very disappointing
Grant: it will be HJ/BJ/ grant might drug her and dick rub against her body.
Marcel: no clue at all, but I don't see sex there too
Chris: not sure where his entry will be next time..he will ask for nude via text for Leonard but that's it...maybe on Sunday during poker game or whenever he will come to stay at David's home, he will break tease fest of the week to sex.
Yea somewhere it has turned down to tease fest row..somehow...sadly. very very disappointing updates might be upcoming tease wise for this week storyline I guess same as how Awam going. Corruption wise it will be stuck for this week that's my guess.
All I can see in upcoming updates is:
Hank: maybe on weekends she will get her ass spanked in her hotel room
Rob: she will give rob massage so again HJ/BJ
Marvin: Boobjob/HJ in bar
Jake: touching groping here n there as a tease.
Leonard: just wanted nudes ....very disappointing
Grant: it will be HJ/BJ/ grant might drug her and dick rub against her body.
Marcel: no clue at all, but I don't see sex there too
Chris: not sure where his entry will be next time..he will ask for nude via text for Leonard but that's it...maybe on Sunday during poker game or whenever he will come to stay at David's home, he will break tease fest of the week to sex.
Yea somewhere it has turned down to tease fest row..somehow...sadly. very very disappointing updates might be upcoming tease wise for this week storyline I guess same as how Awam going. Corruption wise it will be stuck for this week that's my guess.
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Loyal David+Cheating Anna= floor bj scene
Cheating David+Anna= car bj scene
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I agree about the slowburn. The shower scene in the previous update was already a massive leap and now a full on blowjob with swallowing? Fuck me. The scene at the start with him slowly convincing her to strip and teasing her nips was fantastic but then the BJ just came out of nowhere. Hell, that was more Anna than Chris lmao.
I was hoping more for Anna to share those lingerie pics with Chris while he convinces her to share nudes (talk with Leonard). Kind of dial things down from the shower but apparently not.
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Dude, mark your post as a spoiler because not everyone has played yet. And don't spoil their funYea I was hoping somewhere that this VN might not go in the line of tease fest like other VN...but sadly now that Ana is fine with BJ, this will go in the same line for Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday next 4 updates so 5*4=20 months. If he stick to 4 months deadline then for the next 16 months, it might be tease fest.
what i like in this update - things finally starting with jake, face to face dealing with hank, david being straight forward with anna that he is correct n taking no bs from her, n the story build up
what i dont like - rob character seems unnecessary, anna getting cheesy with chris n other two guys in office
what can be improved - anna need to be stop being cheesy, she knows chris n other men want her, so she should be quick eithr to give in or not....especially with chris, their story can be made more interesting, instead of too many guys wanting anna, rob could be shown as gay and he spy on anna/ chris doing stuffs n telll it to david
what i dont like - rob character seems unnecessary, anna getting cheesy with chris n other two guys in office
what can be improved - anna need to be stop being cheesy, she knows chris n other men want her, so she should be quick eithr to give in or not....especially with chris, their story can be made more interesting, instead of too many guys wanting anna, rob could be shown as gay and he spy on anna/ chris doing stuffs n telll it to david
Well i think this update was underwhelming..Bj to happen is natural and hot and ok but i think at this point of story sex with Chris was logical.I mean come on they already went overboard in the bathroom,sexual tension and all..Bj could have happened during sex but in a garage for her is too much..Massage scene was ok but not in that way after the fight at night..Office scenes,meh... I think the creator want to squezze things in a single update to keep everyone happy and that destroys the pacing and the story..In my opinion he should focus in a single character in each update that is released and follow the story with him until the sex scene.
Five months for a single groping scene and a rushed bj in a garage is too little content. Dont get me wrong i really like the story but come on. if he focused in Chris character , or Jake or Marvin with this amount of time for a sex scene it would have been truly a very nice scene.Yes he wouldnt please all of his supporters at once but withat logic but in the next update they would be satisfied and lookin for more with their choise..With the current pacing in this Vn she will have sex only with one of them before the game ends and i think the creator is Jake oriented...
Five months for a single groping scene and a rushed bj in a garage is too little content. Dont get me wrong i really like the story but come on. if he focused in Chris character , or Jake or Marvin with this amount of time for a sex scene it would have been truly a very nice scene.Yes he wouldnt please all of his supporters at once but withat logic but in the next update they would be satisfied and lookin for more with their choise..With the current pacing in this Vn she will have sex only with one of them before the game ends and i think the creator is Jake oriented...
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Noooo you are suggesting way more slower thing lol like you want to turn APM to AWAM...as of now it might have 16-20 months of tease fest...if he will focus on single character storyline then that tease fest will grow into 4 years of tease fest lol... absolutely negative.