VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[Sadowdark]

Well i think this update was underwhelming..Bj to happen is natural and hot and ok but i think at this point of story sex with Chris was logical.I mean come on they already went overboard in the bathroom,sexual tension and all..Bj could have happened during sex but in a garage for her is too much..Massage scene was ok but not in that way after the fight at night..Office scenes,meh... I think the creator want to squezze things in a single update to keep everyone happy and that destroys the pacing and the story..In my opinion he should focus in a single character in each update that is released and follow the story with him until the sex scene.

Five months for a single groping scene and a rushed bj in a garage is too little content. Dont get me wrong i really like the story but come on. if he focused in Chris character , or Jake or Marvin with this amount of time for a sex scene it would have been truly a very nice scene.Yes he wouldnt please all of his supporters at once but withat logic but in the next update they would be satisfied and lookin for more with their choise..With the current pacing in this Vn she will have sex only with one of them before the game ends and i think the creator is Jake oriented...

If you, my friend, want to have one update 1 character, this game will outpace AWAM in years and will never be finished or will be abandoned sooner.

 

[atrebor68]

PLEASE, I BEG YOU MODDER, MAKE A MOD TO CHANGE THE MUSIC !!
I WANT ONLY TO CUT HER WITH A KNIFE !!

 

[Skywalker1985]

If you, my friend, want to have one update 1 character, this game will outpace AWAM in years and will never be finished or will be abandoned sooner.

I dont think you got me..I hate awam pacing ..what i mean is in the amount of time the creator has he can exploit a character fully including a sex scene for that character..then go on to the next until the conclusion. Not more awam..

 

[Sadowdark]

I dont think you got me..I hate awam pacing ..what i mean is in the amount of time the creator has he can exploit a character fully including a sex scene for that character..then go on to the next until the conclusion. Not more awam..

But it would be terribly boring to have the same character all the time until they are led to sex. It would get boring quickly.

 

[Skywalker1985]

Noooo you are suggesting way more slower thing lol like you want to turn APM to AWAM...as of now it might have 16-20 months of tease fest...if he will focus on single character storyline then that tease fest will grow into 4 years of tease fest lol... absolutely negative.

That is why the VN must focus from the beginning in a certain amount of characters for the main storyline if you want it to be a believable story. No Marvins,Leonards,Robs and Hanks. Unless you have the time which clearly the creator hasnt.

 

[Sadowdark]

That is why the VN must focus from the beginning in a certain amount of characters for the main storyline if you want it to be a believable story. No Marvins,Leonards,Robs and Hanks. Unless you have the time which clearly the creator hasnt.

The characters that are important to the plot are the ones that have stats, the rest are extra

 

[Skywalker1985]

But it would be terribly boring to have the same character all the time until they are led to sex. It would get boring quickly.

And look where that lead..with the current outcome we are satisfied?

 

[Couto25]

I dont think you got me..I hate awam pacing ..what i mean is in the amount of time the creator has he can exploit a character fully including a sex scene for that character..then go on to the next until the conclusion. Not more awam..

She's been exploited at right pace..even slower than what I had expected..for you it might feel BJ is rushed..For me it's like I have to wait for 2 more years to get to sex in individual storyline..so he's doing right thing...BJ is not rushed..from the story point, I was expecting for BJ after sex...as Ana was comfortable with sex rather BJ. But now that she is comfortable with it..we have to wait until the next Chris/Ana alone time without sexting...for the corruption path to exceed BJ.

You can say maximum corruption thing that Ana can do right now is BJ as she was most comfortable with Chris. So until Chris storyline will progress beyond BJ, all scenes will be stuck to that same maximum point or even lesser than that ..like spanking boobshow, HJ , boobjob, masturbation , nudes etc...until Chris get time alone with Ana...and I don't think it will happen until the time where Chris will stay in the guest room again..maybe Sunday or Monday whenever David leave for the trip.

 

[Skywalker1985]

The characters that are important to the plot are the ones that have stats, the rest are extra

I agree but you dont spent render and time on those ..the extras can come later as add ons.

 

[Couto25]

That is why the VN must focus from the beginning in a certain amount of characters for the main storyline if you want it to be a believable story. No Marvins,Leonards,Robs and Hanks. Unless you have the time which clearly the creator hasnt.

I get it what you're saying..but story is moving forward day wise rather characters wise..so even if we want to see the next move of Ana with Chris ....we have to wait for 2 years I guess... 5th update from now might have sex. Yes it is absolutely loong wait but it is what it is...that's why I said slow corruption lovers might like it...they got what they wanted lol...2 years of tease fest with different characters.

Next 4 updates where MP says someone else win Ana will be just a tease fest that I am 100% sure....Jake/Rob/Chris might have best chance to do sex...And Chris comes first in line.

Who will touch Ana's pussy first will remain a question..and we will not find the answer until 5th update from now.

 

[Forzatorna1000]

I forgot about this game, after playing update, I remembered why I discarded it, my snail is much faster than the development of the game and the plot

 

[blacktag222]

what i like in this update - things finally starting with jake, face to face dealing with hank, david being straight forward with anna that he is correct n taking no bs from her, n the story build up
what i dont like - rob character seems unnecessary, anna getting cheesy with chris n other two guys in office
what can be improved - anna need to be stop being cheesy, she knows chris n other men want her, so she should be quick eithr to give in or not....especially with chris, their story can be made more interesting, instead of too many guys wanting anna, rob could be shown as gay and he spy on anna/ chris doing stuffs n telll it to david

Anna simply crossed the line of her ideas of what is good and what is bad. With her husband, blowjob was a bad choice for her, but this did not save her from the fact that her husband allegedly cheated on her. Now she plays a different role and blowjob for her becomes one of the techniques that must be used. Picky choice of partners is a thing of the past for her, she does not love Chris and others, now she has to choose from many and build her own world and this makes her more accommodating. So ahead of her there is a road full of men and this road will never lead her to the love that she felt for her first husband. Everything will become more cynical and boring.

 

[Couto25]

I forgot about this game, after playing update, I remembered why I discarded it, my snail is much faster than the development of the game and the plot

I was actually hoping for sex scene from Chris so that the upcoming 2 years of update will not be boring in other paths...And Ana will be fine with fingering or sex with other characters whenever they get the opportunity...that's why I got disappointed with that BJ scene. Now it is what it is.. corruption point will be stuck no matter how much Ana will gain naughtiness or submissive points....the scene will be stuck max level of BJ for this week of storyline/until Ana and Chris meet next time.

In terms of corruption this story is stuck upto BJ max for this week of storyline... that's the bottom line.

 

[Skywalker1985]

I get it what you're saying..but story is moving forward day wise rather characters wise..so even if we want to see the next move of Ana with Chris ....we have to wait for 2 years I guess... 5th update from now might have sex. Yes it is absolutely loong wait but it is what it is...that's why I said slow corruption lovers might like it...they got what they wanted lol...2 years of tease fest with different characters.

Next 4 updates where MP says someone else win Ana will be just a tease fest that I am 100% sure....Jake/Rob/Chris might have best chance to do sex...And Chris comes first in line.

Who will touch Ana's pussy first will remain a question..and we will not find the answer until 5th update from now.

Of cource its his game his vision but he stated repatedly that he wants a belevable story..A frustrated wife with options would never choose anyone than Jake or Chris for revenge..Not some old fart sex offender or bosses with fat bellys and small dicks,not until she has lost everything else as an option..He said that its a fast developing story but noooooo lets cut the sex in to parts with each character so everyone hopes for more..

 

[Enola Gay]

Considering all of the aspects and character behaviours... it was a fine update.

I hope that this game doesn't turn into unrealistic fuck fest now, leave cheap porn for other games Dev, let's stick with somewhat believable story, pretty please.

Tbh, I find this game sad. Of course scenes are hot, but I don't like it when bad things happen to good people.

Sure, it's just a game and they don't exist, but there are real world counterparts with similar problems and history. And that sucks.

 

[Candy Suxx]

Dev please don't fuck up the story to make the fappers happy. Cause we just went from slow burn to bonfire real fast. Just my opinion

Once upon a time a few AWAM fans wished for the same thing and the rest is history.

 

[Couto25]

The only one that can break the tease fest beside Chris is Jake and Rob...and that too not sex but they might get an opportunity of fingering due to massage scene and Jake move is still unpredictable just because ana is sexually attracted to him..so he can be one of the possibility for fingering Ana..but still no sex for the next 1.5-2 years....but these 2 might cross the tease limit that Chris has set..that's what I can say.

 

[pango173]

can someone exactly tell me whats good on this ? nothin happens in this game its 90210 Beverly Hills story with only chatcity.com stuff. Whats the point that people like this ? im curious im blocking this bad game, no MMF no gangbang no corruption NTR is bad and boring. no possibilities whats it ?

 

[edcl58]

hero gives us link hero please

Only way id play it is for free. I refuse too support someone that offers A GAME for 15-20 dollars o

can someone exactly tell me whats good on this ? nothin happens in this game its 90210 Beverly Hills story with only chatcity.com stuff. Whats the point that people like this ? im curious im blocking this bad game, no MMF no gangbang no corruption NTR is bad and boring. no possibilities whats it ?

Game gets slow updates and it's the continuous tease fest

 

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