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Ragnar

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Too verbose, not enough progression with other characters. Chris content is not my jam but at least things moved forward with him.
 

Menace o Santana

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A very good idea:) with some modifications that could be the one with Chris ending:devilish:
Was thinking the Chris blowjob scene was to me too soon, but giving the DEV the benefit of the doubt he has a plan. Anna and Chris are doing things in the house with David in it high risk of getting caught. They are being careless. Here is a plausible scenario for them to get caught, which can be done many ways mattering on the path. I am going to choose the David confident path. Chris is in the guest room again David is in the bed with Anna. Anna gets up to check on Sophia Chris comes in behind her they are talking about the sex they had and they start kissing. She drops on her knees and starts sucking his dick all of a sudden David walks in. Anna and Chris are shocked then you see Anna look at Davids hand. He is holding the baby monitor with his left hand and his right hand holding the M134 mini painless.Very angry, David demands explanations: "how long have you been having an affair?"
Anna was shaking with fear couldn't even look at David or even answer. With reassurance David said to her; "Don't worry, my mini Friend is not for you only the long time traitors deserve this punishment but for the Cheating wives they deserve to live with the shame and their indignity so I'm going to repeat myself a second time."How long have you been having an affair?"
 

SlapE

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Another Chris centric update... welp, guess I'm waiting even longer. Good thing I'm patient, hoping the next update moves away from that prick who I literally wish would get beheaded.
 

Enola Gay

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Was thinking the Chris blowjob scene was to me too soon, but giving the DEV the benefit of the doubt he has a plan. Anna and Chris are doing things in the house with David in it high risk of getting caught. They are being careless. Here is a plausible scenario for them to get caught, which can be done many ways mattering on the path. I am going to choose the David confident path. Chris is in the guest room again David is in the bed with Anna. Anna gets up to check on Sophia Chris comes in behind her they are talking about the sex they had and they start kissing. She drops on her knees and starts sucking his dick all of a sudden David walks in. Anna and Chris are shocked then you see Anna look at Davids hand. He is holding the baby monitor.
David: "Hmm that's a strange sound coming from Sophie room... no, wait, it's my wife... and Chris!
Damn, now I need to get up, I guess..."


After entering the room:


David: "Guys... really? Near my daughter? Get the hell out of here..."*



*This happens in another universe, where David simply doesn't care.


THE END.

MR. PALMER ends up very rich.
 

Adhdclassic

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David: "Hmm that's a strange sound coming from Sophie room... no, wait, it's my wife... and Chris!
Damn, now I need to get up, I guess..."


After entering the room:


David: "Guys... really? Near my daughter? Get the hell out of here..."*



*This happens in another universe, where David simply doesn't care.


THE END.

MR. PALMER ends up very rich.
Remember David is already looking at legality regarding his daughter if that happens he would get her. The scenerio is plausible.
 
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Couto25

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In between I didn't played faithful route...any difference from the corrupt path? Beside rejecting the move?? Or it's the same interaction?
 
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Garen

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*This happens in another universe, where David simply doesn't care.
Frankly speaking, if the story is intended to be realistic, that does need to happen. On the side where David did not cheat, there has to be a path where he simply stops caring and goes along with the separation.
If your wife continues to accuse you of cheating on her when you know you didn't and even drags your baby into it, surely there's a point where love runs out and you actually no longer want to fix things and get back with a woman like that.

My guy is being screwed over by his previous lover, his current lover and his best friend, all at once. Surely he deserves one ending where he keeps some dignity.
 
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