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catgameryt011

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No payment required. This is free :) But I must also say that my interest in this story is decreasing day by day... Too many unnecessary characters added. Chris, Jack, Hank, and Marvin's paths would suffice. It's okay for the actions in the story to be delayed... But if she's going to have something with someone, I'd rather the plot be well-designed. Like the war going on inside her and why she lost it. I didn't like that she turned into public property in one day.
but is there or is there not an update from you on marvin and anna?
 

Menace o Santana

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When he threaten to go to Robinsons if she didnt show up in 5 minutes, I was like there you go.
That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.
 

Adhdclassic

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That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.
The scene would have been even better when she said she's at Robinsons and they were talking he said OK hung up. Next thing you knew he was knocking on the door.
 
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DarthSpitz717

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That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.
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Oh David definitely overestimates himself, but we are watching a drowning man tying rocks around his neck. Now if he is thinking he is a butt-kicking-name-taking machine, I suppose when a desperate guy is in the throws of panic and emotional upheaval, even a mouse can become a tiger.

Ever hear someone say, "that's not fair"? Fun fact life isn't fair but our hero, David, believes he has certain rights because Anna is his wife... this update made David treat Anna more like property than a person. Further, by asserting his rights of half custody of Sophie and almost to the point of making ultimatums is emotionally enraged David acting out. I wonder how many players of this game out there feels sorry for David?

Would David have come to blows with Robinson had he gone over? I'd say that's a 50/50 possibility. Certainly with 100% likelihood he would have made it clear Anna is his wife and belongs to him. Damn few boys like to share their toys, another fun fact of life.

As to this game regardless of a player's choices, David is a mild semi-insecure man when it comes to his wife. Jealous when there is no call for it, clueless when tact is required, and totally blind (just look at his "friends"). The brief encounters we see of David's father just shows how lacking David is. The father was right in one way, marrying a pretty woman has its own perils and perhaps the old man knew his son didn't have the balls and self-confidence to have married such a goddess.
 

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Good guess but wrong. They were both written separately; but from the same premise.
The outline of a plot including characters was sent to me, and as I later found out, another author on Literotica.
We both wrote our versions without prior knowledge of each other until Temptation was published.
This prompted me to finish my version, which I had started but not completed.
I didn't read Temptation until I had submitted my story.
gotta say both stories were good but temptation was better story was more extensive, and the revenge was nice too.
 

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)I play on a safe path and I am not aggressive with Anna. The treacherous road also has an extra level, but there are some where you are aggressive towards it, but it is still treacherous. And I don't mind drinking.
 

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The scene would have been even better when she said she's at Robinsons and they were talking he said OK hung up. Next thing you knew he was knocking on the door.
Is still too earlier for a Daring action like that.It would be too direct and that would probably make thing worse between him and Anna. A scene like that could fit more when Anna have one evidenc that David was set up and despite this evidence she's still investigating.
 

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Oh David definitely overestimates himself, but we are watching a drowning man tying rocks around his neck. Now if he is thinking he is a butt-kicking-name-taking machine, I suppose when a desperate guy is in the throws of panic and emotional upheaval, even a mouse can become a tiger.

Ever hear someone say, "that's not fair"? Fun fact life isn't fair but our hero, David, believes he has certain rights because Anna is his wife... this update made David treat Anna more like property than a person. Further, by asserting his rights of half custody of Sophie and almost to the point of making ultimatums is emotionally enraged David acting out. I wonder how many players of this game out there feels sorry for David?

Would David have come to blows with Robinson had he gone over? I'd say that's a 50/50 possibility. Certainly with 100% likelihood he would have made it clear Anna is his wife and belongs to him. Damn few boys like to share their toys, another fun fact of life.
Look this may be only my opinion but still i don't think David treated Anna like his property in this update but more like he's claiming his rights.
Again that's bring back the argument of the girl and boy friendship do you think it's normal for your wife spending time with your male neighbor? as innocent and harmless this question could be, first look at the context. The dude is being set up he know he doesn't cheat, he know Anna has huge doubts,he know his marriage had somehow damaged and he know there are other men who want her such as Jack i will not say Chris kuz apparently his too naive to think that they are Friends.
So if David decided to wear the pants now i don't think He's treating her like his prooerty but more like claiming his rigt as a Husband is it too late? Probabely not depends on what path you're playing
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The father was right in one way, marrying a pretty woman has its own perils and perhaps the old man knew his son didn't have the balls and self-confidence to have married such a goddess.
I will not say that his father was right.The problem is not about her beauty.if you're looking for logics it depends on the woman and also in the man behave.In this situation i will say they both at fault Anna is not really doing too much to stop the molester and David was a pussy at the begenning to behave like a real man just look at the meeting with Hank and pregnant Anna.The old fart grabbed Anna's pumpum in front of David, he saw that but instead of shop the guy head he preferred to go and confronted Anna who denied everything, i mean WTF? You saw something with your own eyes how the hell would you go and confronted your wife? maybe she would enjoyed it (slutty reaction in front of hubby) but a normal dude with two Gold balls would confront Hank maybe without violence but trust me the old fart would have some serious explanation to do.This is just a game so i will not complain about those things earlier.
Seeing how David reaction in this update was, it was time for him to grow some pair!
 

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So David is going to have sex with Kendra after she has gone psycho on him twice, the first time she went psycho on him caused the break up of their relationship and the second time she went psycho on him when she is trying to break up his marriage to Anna, by infiltrating his wife's world and setting him up for cheating. Even Jake knows she's a psycho. Kendra makes the women in the movie Fatal Attraction look tame. The funniest thing about Kendra is her rapport with Marvin. No chance she is getting on with David unless she forces him at gunpoint and loads him up full of viagra.
:ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
 

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So David is going to have sex with Kendra after she has gone psycho on him twice, the first time she went psycho on him caused the break up of their relationship and the second time she went psycho on him when she is trying to break up his marriage to Anna, by infiltrating his wife's world and setting him up for cheating. Even Jake knows she's a psycho. Kendra makes the women in the movie Fatal Attraction look tame. The funniest thing about Kendra is her rapport with Marvin. No chance she is getting on with David unless she forces him at gunpoint and loads him up full of viagra.
:ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
Kendra is a psychopathe she have the ability to hide her mental issue and manipulate Anna without her noticed that she's in front of a psycho with huge mental issues. Seeing Kendra's level of psycho if she win this war I'm afraid that David will not have a choice, either he agrees to stay with Kendra freely or have his head kissed against his wil :devilish:
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I wish I could see Kendra having sex with David))))))))
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Kendra is a psychopathe she have the ability to hide her mental issue and manipulate Anna without her noticed that she's in front of a psycho with huge mental issues. Seeing Kendra's level of psycho if she win this war I'm afraid that David will not have a choice, either he agrees to stay with Kendra freely or have his head kissed against his wil :devilish:
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It's going to be impossible to reconcile because if it destroys his marriage with Anna. If David finds out it's Kendra, he'll bring hell to her. Because how could he go back to Kendra after something like that and forgive her? To me, that's unforgivable.
 

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It's going to be impossible to reconcile because if it destroys his marriage with Anna. If David finds out it's Kendra, he'll bring hell to her. Because how could he go back to Kendra after something like that and forgive her? To me, that's unforgivable.
Well, you said it man! You proved that It will be impossible for Kendra to gain David smoothly So "plan A (Operation Delta" Take David smoothly) will succesfully fail:ROFLMAO:
The only choice now is
"Plan B (Operation Kyra the Raider") and trust me the B one is far more umpleassant than the A one:devilish:
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