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Quick thread on interesting plot points Mr Palmer has shared in the story so far and how it could impact future updates:
1. 'Speculation that the poor relationship between Anna and her dad contributed to his sudden decline in health' - probably explains the guilt she battles - but may also be used as a means for Stenstromber and Hank to play into and channel Anna's guilt to coerce her for their benefit.
2. 'Anna's father had seen Strenstromber greet his daughter with a hug and kiss on her lips' - as we saw in the last update this is something that Hank has now taken up, and the fact Anna was used to this previously might explain why she wasn't as disgusted by the situation as she frankly should have been.
3. 'If he wasn't here, maybe I'd consider it. Right now? No way.' - Whilst Stenstromber clearly has a long way to go to build bridges with Anna, the fact their intimacy had previously almost reached a level where she considered 'relieving' him shows how close they were.
4. 'Too bad she's not wearing a skirt' - Maybe a moot point but we know Dale and Anna are set to have a run-in, with Anna wearing a skirt this time round. Will she be wearing the thong underneath that Dale mentioned last time? Maybe an insight into what their interaction could be for the next update.
5. 'Maybe Hank could refer the best family litigator in town' - going forward Hank's ability to manipulate Anna will increase on the David/Anna broken relationship path as he can use his power to be an ally to Anna as she navigates a potential divorce. No better proof of that then when Anna says straight after - 'Keeping Hank happy may benefit me in more than one way'
6. 'I want a pair of her dirty panties...and I want naked pics of her.' Leonard makes his demands clear and we know Chris/Anna haven't sexted for a while. Depending on the path chosen by those playing maybe nudes could be on the horizon. Chris himself says he can't guarantee the nudes but the panties might be easier to come by...could the lingerie pics, if shared with Chris, be a decent compromise for Leonard?
7. 'And I'm saving your husband's ass from a major lawsuit' - ssd Hank holds multiple cards, from helping Anna with litigation, to helping mentor and groom her for partner and arguably most significantly, saving David's bacon. Depending on the path taken with Anna/Hank this could be a saving grace that helps get Anna/David's marriage back on track or a tool for Hank to tear their relationship further apart and bring Anna closer to him - in fact, Anna might even prefer this to be the case on a certain path if it helps her keep custody of her child.
8. 'But whatever...I want to leave this city anyways.' - Feel like more should be made of this declaration by Chris. May have been a path dependent line but it's clear he is intent on getting Anna at any cost, given his future lies elsewhere. But does that mean there is no future where Chris/Anna's relationship develops into something beyond just lust, e.g. a second marriage/pregnancy with Chris? Plans can always change, right?
9. and last but not least... something that's not really a plot point but I find hard to believe - Hank is a tits guy?! Always thought he preferred Anna's ass more given how much he bangs on about it but replaying this scene says otherwise apparently...
1. 'Speculation that the poor relationship between Anna and her dad contributed to his sudden decline in health' - probably explains the guilt she battles - but may also be used as a means for Stenstromber and Hank to play into and channel Anna's guilt to coerce her for their benefit.
2. 'Anna's father had seen Strenstromber greet his daughter with a hug and kiss on her lips' - as we saw in the last update this is something that Hank has now taken up, and the fact Anna was used to this previously might explain why she wasn't as disgusted by the situation as she frankly should have been.
3. 'If he wasn't here, maybe I'd consider it. Right now? No way.' - Whilst Stenstromber clearly has a long way to go to build bridges with Anna, the fact their intimacy had previously almost reached a level where she considered 'relieving' him shows how close they were.
4. 'Too bad she's not wearing a skirt' - Maybe a moot point but we know Dale and Anna are set to have a run-in, with Anna wearing a skirt this time round. Will she be wearing the thong underneath that Dale mentioned last time? Maybe an insight into what their interaction could be for the next update.
5. 'Maybe Hank could refer the best family litigator in town' - going forward Hank's ability to manipulate Anna will increase on the David/Anna broken relationship path as he can use his power to be an ally to Anna as she navigates a potential divorce. No better proof of that then when Anna says straight after - 'Keeping Hank happy may benefit me in more than one way'
6. 'I want a pair of her dirty panties...and I want naked pics of her.' Leonard makes his demands clear and we know Chris/Anna haven't sexted for a while. Depending on the path chosen by those playing maybe nudes could be on the horizon. Chris himself says he can't guarantee the nudes but the panties might be easier to come by...could the lingerie pics, if shared with Chris, be a decent compromise for Leonard?
7. 'And I'm saving your husband's ass from a major lawsuit' - ssd Hank holds multiple cards, from helping Anna with litigation, to helping mentor and groom her for partner and arguably most significantly, saving David's bacon. Depending on the path taken with Anna/Hank this could be a saving grace that helps get Anna/David's marriage back on track or a tool for Hank to tear their relationship further apart and bring Anna closer to him - in fact, Anna might even prefer this to be the case on a certain path if it helps her keep custody of her child.
8. 'But whatever...I want to leave this city anyways.' - Feel like more should be made of this declaration by Chris. May have been a path dependent line but it's clear he is intent on getting Anna at any cost, given his future lies elsewhere. But does that mean there is no future where Chris/Anna's relationship develops into something beyond just lust, e.g. a second marriage/pregnancy with Chris? Plans can always change, right?
9. and last but not least... something that's not really a plot point but I find hard to believe - Hank is a tits guy?! Always thought he preferred Anna's ass more given how much he bangs on about it but replaying this scene says otherwise apparently...
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Scenario I think would be a great. ACCIDENTAL PENETRATION. I will use jake in the office skip past the foreplay and get to the how. Jake has her bent over the desk skirt up panties off. Jake slides his dick between Annas thigh and starts stroking back and forth. Anna is moaning as Jakes cock glides against her soaked lips and clit. Anna turns her head and tells jake be careful don't put it in. Jake assures her he won't. This act goes on for a couple of minutes. Jake speeds up Anna is dripping wet, Jakes says I'm going to cum as he speeds up, he gives one rough stroke he penetrates Anna as she screams Jake cums in Anna. Jake pulls out fast and rough Anna and his cum splashes on the ground, she drops to the ground panting and drooling. His and her cum pouring out of her on the floor. Jake starts apologizing, Anna in a low voice tells him to leave. Her body shaking from the mini orgasms that don't seem to have any signs of stopping. She yells out leave Jake puts his pants on apologizes as he rushes out. Anna still on the floor tries to gain her balance she walks to her chair gets wipes and proceeds to clean herself up. As she sits down another waves spasms pass through her. She has never felt anything like this before. Shame starts to pass over her, but it is quickly washed away by curiosity and lust. When she finally calms down, she gets her stuff and proceeds to leave, before she does, she looks at the floor and sees the puddle of her infidelity lying bare for all to see. When she leaves the building, we are bought to the basement of building to find Marvin jerking off while repeatedly watching Jake and Annas sexual escapade. Guess Marvin got the camera working.
Very good scenario, except for the Marvin part. Leave Marvin out and this is great!
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Chris allready have a BJ lmao!and even haters! XD
And the other dudes are hangin' around with their dicks in their hands fan art and other fan art if it is Chris who's diggin' the holes then my blueballs while stay until infinity
Can't stand Traitors and f*ck that guy!
- May 14, 2023
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I'm always open to different stories.Chris allready have a BJ lmao!
And the other dudes are hangin' around with their dicks in their hands fan art and other fan art if it is Chris who's diggin' the holes then my blueballs while stay until infinity
This is not my idea, I’m just implementing it as i see it, if you have your own, i’m ready to listen to it!/
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Will keep that in mind! And i have some questions
Do you have a specific Tread were you posted you Stories? or you posted them in the game tread related to the fan art?
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https://f95zone.to/threads/itsnotus...l-post-here-all-my-works-past-and-new.222794/
Here are all my works - and a couple of stories about this game.
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Just a quick question....
Are you involved in your own project for a game? Or is your art more a hobby you enjoy?
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ItsNotUs art he is better than lot game i see he very talentn and creative also he have imagination to creat funny story or make creative idea
some is worst art creat and they develop game and worst art
see lot fan artist with talent but they like there art creat not think make business or work own project
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Nope.
I have written more than once that my page was not approved on the subscriber - it is not possible to use the site for a "model" that would bring at least some kind of income. So for me now it’s like a hobby - i’ve been drawing since childhood - so you can say i have a passion for it!
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Why not use Patreon then?
Even some game developers have issue when it come for their account to be aproved on SS so SS it's not a good choice. Patreon is more simple if you ask me...... You could Always post your work here and also on Patreon
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To leave Marvin out would be terribly boring
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1.Anna has a strict, demanding father who is unable to rejoice in his daughter's successes and is unable to show feelings. He only demands absolute obedience. It has nothing to do with health. He was poisoned out of revenge(because he didn't let me fuck his daughter) and robbed by his business partner. Anna naturally wants to be nice to everyone and does not like to get into conflict with others. She likes old grandparents because they remind her of her father whom she had to obey.
2.3, Father Anna saw that the old fox was playing the good uncle and treated Anna like his niece and spoiled her. And he was getting more and more into Anna. He tried to fuck her but Father Anna interrupted him. And for that he decided to rob him first. And then poison him. The old fox secretly took photos of Anna in a bikini. He affectionately called her his peach.
4. It depends on which route
5. It depends on which route
6. the panty man has a fetish for a new pair of panties, and pictures of naked Anna - let's see how the fake friend will deal with that.
7. We'll see what happens in this update
8.False friend the creator showed what possible choices we will receive for him but it's hard to say whether this will be the case?,,
You now know Chris has learned the truth. This is a big deal. Looks like there’s three ways this could go. 1) he simply tells Anna and David the truth of what he’s learned; 2) he doesn’t say anything... instead he tries to conquer Anna while she and her marriage is at a low point; 3) he dangles the info in front of Anna, but he won’t disclose the truth until she gives him something in return.
Knowing Chris, it doesn’t seem likely he’ll go with option 1. Rather, it appears option 2 is his preference. However, if Anna’s more reluctant towards him, he may go with option 3.
For those of you who have rejected Chris, the remaining summary for Chris isn't relevant to you, and you can move on.
For those of you that have encouraged Anna to accept Chris... you have to admit Chris has played it brilliantly with the friend angle. He knew it would give her an excuse to indulge in his pursuits because she just rationalizes that “he’s just a friend, nothing more” and that she trusts he'll keep them secrets, just like all the other stuff from the past between them. She feels the “favors” are meaningless, that they’re only to keep Chris happy and a means to an end for getting info and ensuring she’s in the best position possible with David if a divorce were to happen. Chris plays into this.
Anna is no stranger to this rationale either... in her past, long before she met Chris and David, she’d reluctantly done “favors” for men in several scenarios to take the easy way out, so while the concept seems absurd that she’d subject herself to this behavior, it’s not unfamiliar to her.
At the same time, she ignores that there are moments during these “favors” where she’s excited and she likes it... they bring out her depraved tendencies. She pushes that aside in her rationalizations out of convenience, as we humans tend to do with many things in life. But she’s playing with fire without realizing it. And Chris sees it playing right into his hands.,,
9. Maybe he wanted to know about breastfeeding
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Well you got the art talent and if you got the programming skills that is 2/3 of what you need to start your own project... LOL! maybe even call the game "ItsNotUs"
...but serious you would just need a workable project like "A perfect Marriage" or some other knitch that gains a serious following.
Thereafter it comes down to a working business model. If you keep the product of a high quality and avoid many of the pitfalls of the industry itself, it might even lead to a serious studio that has real profits worth making it a business. And in there lays the main problem of the industry, size, scale, funding, and staffing. Each with a solution of their own:
SIZE--number of titles under development
SCALE--turnaround time of each project
FUNDING--has its own fix with the above two items covered
Staffing--artist and programmers with good writer(s) and one financial admin
The only thing to keep in mind is having something that is less like work and more like fun. And that is where whatever knitches you decide to tackle helps a lot
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I just want Chris to fuck Anna by luring her in his trap!
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I just want Anna to finally get some actual pleasure for herself. Giving out handies and blowies is nice and all, but she needs someone to service her properly and give her a taste of how awesome cheating on your husband can be. She needs to stop looking at it like a chore or tool and seek out lust!