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For example, he would create a scene where Anna drinks wine with Kendra at the pool and then the old fish joins in. Or there is a choice whether Anna should go to the pool again.
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it'll be a bar scene...where Marvin try to put his hands on Ana legs...he might try to move his hand further more this time..Pool is weekend holiday party. If I would be a developer and wanna take these scene in slow corrupt way...that would have been in my guess...Ana want to drink more or not, that would have been an option provided marvin trying on her again for faithful and corrupt route....Then whatever MP wanna create with marvin HJ, Boobjob etc. he can end his way in the bar or washroom of bar obviously because they wont be doing it on the seat....But in the end I would have ended with a surprise scene where Jake drop Ana home like last time...And drunk Ana in corrupt path might flirt with him or tease him and touch his package or give a HJ there inside car lol.......Then installing cam and Ana scene in the office would make more sense on Thursday storyline where Jake would gain some confident too that he can get Ana. As of now i dont think Jake can think that way that he can score with Ana....as he didnt even manage to touch her in the corrupt route too.
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i think he use this type style or game not as we see in peek from long time
when everyone think shop be erotic part result was nothing
different with rob no one think will be nude massage
and in past with pool with marvin there no swim or nothing big
his way from start give move other side predict happen
this one pic peek i wait to see what happen here
i thought he caught her chat chris at phon
think will be hot idea he expose but not want fight and secret watch spy check her phon msg
but after many month wait... was nothing she just ignore him use phon
It's good that he do give unpredicted scenes ...that's really good ...But the thing is it doesnt fit with the mood of the storyline or the situation...It feels like the situation is forced..Like howcome anyone will predict chris is in garage when Ana was about to sleep crying...or howcome Ana will get a scene in the morning...Scenes were good no doubt but the erotic mood that was created with the flow of storyline couldn't carried forward..Like if scene with the Chris in kitchen would have continued to Handjob, it would have dealt more impact...because situation was already created upto the tease level..then David arrived lol ...just saying like yea keep the scene in the end but when the erotic flow has been created with tease and scenario...dont break it unnecessarily just because people have guessed it or predicted it.
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When MP says there will be a big scene, it usually isn't. Or it's better not to expect anything and you might be positively surprised.
See when he talk about the scene...it's more like a antagonist meeting with Ana...Like when he said he was working on Hank scene...that time he was working on Ana/Hank path...now whether there will be HJ or just chats with tease. That's what he means usually. Obviously it's a tease..I am not saying that I am not surprised...I said its out of the blue but it fail to create the erotic flow that he created in previous scene with the storyline...and that break the erotic flow continuity. it will be like a surprise BJ or surprsed HJ kind of stuff...but if he would have continued previous scenes upto HJ/BJ...he might have taken less time to launch the update because then he didnt had to create another scenario that no one has predicted. Second, it would have been more impactful because that scene comes with the flow of story tease and not as a surprise.
Just as an example...If Ana would have given HJ to Chris in the Kitchen ....the tease started right from the beginning where chris arrived in the house and started poking Ana from the back and the flow would have continued...plus he would have saved alot of renders and time that he took just to create a different HJ scene in the bathroom without any story, out of the blue...that has no meaning in the end. Result would have been same in the end that Ana gave HJ to chris in the update both ways...now you like with the flow of story or as a surprise is on individual.
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I like the yes and no 50:50 plot. I don't like it because the paths don't differ much. We have three paths 1. Faithful. 2. Unsure. 3 Whore. And these paths lack key choices in scenes or if you don't have points with some sexual predator, you don't have a hidden choice and the action happens automatically. There are a lot of mistakes in the dialogues or they are illogical. For example, Anna says that she always wanted to dress boldly, which is not true, CH 1 suggested it to her already Kendra and in CH 3 Pigwin. And she claims that it was her decision. During the masturbation scene in the shower, Anna thinks about all the guys she dreamed about last night. On the unsure path and the whore, I understand. But why is there the same dialogue on the faithful path and says there is no place for David there, it's illogical.
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Someone in this tread had say there is no real Faithfull path in this game and he/she is right...... you're free to call it Faithfull if you want because there is not penetration,bj or hd in this path....everyone and his point of view but for me Anna is clearly not a Faithfull one.
And in all the path Annna is horny as hell reason why i think the night scene and the bathe shower scene is logic kuz this path where she doesn't cheated is more Anna in a 1V indetermined.She is sexually unsatisfied.....she's fighting her huge and desires.... she's tryin' to resist somethin' that she need very badly that's how that path is....the more apropriate name i could use for this path would be Anna's futile resistance lol
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It is clear no NTR content In here only faithful or cheating and revenge path.
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anna : marvin you sooo good
try make bad move from marvin to anna make all part move is frsutrated and pc froz at end
just for fun all artist be nice not laugh am new at this
try make bad move from marvin to anna make all part move is frsutrated and pc froz at end
just for fun all artist be nice not laugh am new at this
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The thing that you and few others are predicting and sharing art....those tease suits the storyline and its actually exciting...but MP chose not to add scene during these situation...he create unpredictable situation for scenes.... Going off official released teasers and following the general writing style was what throw me off. In the last update I thought the opening would be (from the teasers) a bunch of office staff noticing Anna's attire and Anna getting lots of compliments--AND THEN ENTER TIMOTHY AND DALE. Was I hedging a guess Chris would be skulking around the Parker's residence in hopes of talking to Anna-- I thought that would happen at some point... just thought he would text or call Anna in the middle of the night, and they would talk in his car... that would be strike two on my part of guessing and on F95 I went on the record stating some of my ideas.
The thing is those situations that MP creates for scene doesnt feel fit with the storyline......and whatever people shared or suggested, he give blue balls in those storyline.. You're almost saying MP is acting out of spite
it doesnt get along with the theme of the story and couldnt hit upto the max point erotically. Not against art and dialogue ...but out of the blue situation and scene thingy doesnt feel erotic if its dropped as a surprise. The problem with Correctly predicting any given scene is anti-climactic in some regards. Just an example no one has thought/predicted Chris scene location in the last 2 updates..So even if he did added, it feels like it missing something or it should have happened somewhere else with the tease flow like kitchen or in the night bed while chatting from mobile. Yes, no and maybe... The story already had a shower scene earlier and Anna got to see the Anaconda. I'd grade the whole Chris thing scenes B+ to A-. Anna from the first ass grope while showing off baby Sophie all the way up to the BJ was a steady stream of Anna progressively escalating events. Would I have written the events differently--yes, as would any other writer. The only thing keeping the Chris path being A to A+ is two plausibility problems and one too many scenes and the content of how what should be the main scene occurred.
Plausibility:
A: The shower scene of Anna giving a Chris a HJ. Earlier the night before Chris felt up Anna; that whole scene had a time limit of David arriving home and ran the risk of David getting home too soon. But changing the dynamics of time and opportunity, Chris could have arrived earlier... Chris would still grope Anna BUT Chris would kiss and nibble Anna's neck as he gropes Anna... **the game at that point would have 2 choices, stop or keep on going** If the later, Chris would have naughty talk and sexy compliments of Anna while he works his hand past her pants and running her pussy-- Anna in the throes of pleasure, passion, the naughty situation would slip out Chris' anaconda and jerks him off. (no shower scene, just Anna stunned and in shock thinking of the night before coming to grips with it while showering). One Plausibility and that scene that was one too many. Second plausibility concern would be the BJ in the garage. At some point I figured Chris and Anna would have had some car sex at some point. And yes, Chris calling or texting Anna to meet him after midnight when there was near zero chance David would be awake-- Chris and Anna talk, and it leads to a BJ but only after some passionate making out to get Anna in a playful mood and aroused.
And wherever people predicted scene like Rob massage, Jake lingerie shopping and were excited about it, They totally got blue balled by MP lol...David called during massage and we saw just Jake dick during shopping lol. Actually, the Robinson thing was solid. About a grade of A. With David being awake, always paranoid and suspicious as I played, I wasn't expecting much to come from Robinson/Anna meeting. The only thing that detracted from the whole encounter was Anna being too upfront with Robinson and not playing the coy woman allowing herself to be seduced and being aware of it. David's cell phone call that was totally predictable. The Jake thing... hard pass on the route. If Anna was developing feelings for Jake and then starts to lust after Jake, I'd care about the content.
So lets not share bar scenario thoughts about Marvin situation and let MP create one with the flow
You are so right-- it's a bar, full of people, limited privacy and something seems missing at this point between Anna and Marvin, though this could be the catalyst that moves that route along....else he will create surprise Marvin scene somewhere else that might be good but it will not be what we are expecting lol. So...just for this time try and create all fantasies of Ana with everyone beside Marvin lol ...then I hope he will create a scene that will fit perfectly as per the normal storyline whatever we have in our mind. The "going to the bathroom" trope is out... in all the bars I been to with lots of people, there never not occupied for any length of time. Stepping out back, and you find the staff and patrons smoking... can you get some naughty in a bar-- OH HELLS YES. But just "some" naughty. Real naughty happens when you drive off from the bar and go elsewhere.The saying goes, "The devil is in the details." And Mr. Palmer has crossed his t's and dotted his i's and by and large a top 10 game. Since the start of following AMP, I looked at a lot of NTR games just to see if there was any quality. Some wickedly good art out there, but storylines my pet ferrets could do a better job of. In general,... of all other adult games I am hard pressed to name one with good art and a good story.
But we all have our own ideas how each path and character should turn out... just we don't really get a vote in those outcomes. Just with JRR Martin... he doesn't listen when it comes to his most popular characters
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I wonder just how wrong I'm going to be when I guess what Mr. Palmer is going to release. BUT....
With those MP surprises, I hope whatever they are as good as the Timothy/Dale surprise. Forget what happened in the scene but how the event defines Anna's character.
That whole scene fixes and establishes most plausibility problems that are coming up. It just comes down to how Mr. Palmer keeps Anna in character, the nature of future Anna encounters, and how MP evolves Anna's character. Am I expecting Anna to becoming the office slut? No... but more vulnerable to her own desires, YES!
The game has Anna having 3 main paths, faithful, submissive, and naughty. The faithful path is Anna being tempted into compromising herself.
The submissive path is a double edge sword. Anna could be a victim of her own urges, desires, and wants where she is aware of them and actively pursues them. Or she is powerless to her own sexual desires and surrenders to temptation.
Naughty is Anna being the willful party girl going out of her way to get herself into situations.
Thing is those 3 main paths seem to be on a sliding scale. You have faithful dominating Anna's actions (mostly for the wrong reasons) buying into the conventions of being a married woman. Submissive and naughty in the beginning are just normal sub traits of being human. But without a strong-willed mind set Anna was able to keep some of her inner demons under control. The blow to her marriage and faith in David removed her will to behave... and those inner demons are reaching for every excuse to get Anna to let them out
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And if someone has the status of,, Anna wants to remain faithful and wants her marriage to work. So what is this path of faithfulness or resistance? Because to me it looks like a path of faithfulness.
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Cheating always starts in the head. The moment she started thinking about other men is the moment when she started cheating on David.
Having sex is just a final step, deed done - nothing to rescue after that.
Well I think the most good looking antagonist of this VN ...Jake storyline who can compete with David ...like he care about Ana, and He didn't teamed up with Marvin when Marvin asked Jake to share Ana's nude on the group etc..He opted out and didn't wanted to be a part of that Marvin group...and additional physical package to which Ana might get attracted to. Now I guess that path in corrupt route has taken a serious detour in last Lingerie shopping...____________________________________+++++++++++++++_____________________________________________
The thing that you and few others are predicting and sharing art....those tease suits the storyline and its actually exciting...but MP chose not to add scene during these situation...he create unpredictable situation for scenes.... Going off official released teasers and following the general writing style was what throw me off. In the last update I thought the opening would be (from the teasers) a bunch of office staff noticing Anna's attire and Anna getting lots of compliments--AND THEN ENTER TIMOTHY AND DALE. Was I hedging a guess Chris would be skulking around the Parker's residence in hopes of talking to Anna-- I thought that would happen at some point... just thought he would text or call Anna in the middle of the night, and they would talk in his car... that would be strike two on my part of guessing and on F95 I went on the record stating some of my ideas.
The thing is those situations that MP creates for scene doesnt feel fit with the storyline......and whatever people shared or suggested, he give blue balls in those storyline.. You're almost saying MP is acting out of spite
Just an example no one has thought/predicted Chris scene location in the last 2 updates..So even if he did added, it feels like it missing something or it should have happened somewhere else with the tease flow like kitchen or in the night bed while chatting from mobile. Yes, no and maybe... The story already had a shower scene earlier and Anna got to see the Anaconda. I'd grade the whole Chris thing scenes B+ to A-. Anna from the first ass grope while showing off baby Sophie all the way up to the BJ was a steady stream of Anna progressively escalating events. Would I have written the events differently--yes, as would any other writer. The only thing keeping the Chris path being A to A+ is two plausibility problems and one too many scenes and the content of how what should be the main scene occurred.
Plausibility:
A: The shower scene of Anna giving a Chris a HJ. Earlier the night before Chris felt up Anna; that whole scene had a time limit of David arriving home and ran the risk of David getting home too soon. But changing the dynamics of time and opportunity, Chris could have arrived earlier... Chris would still grope Anna BUT Chris would kiss and nibble Anna's neck as he gropes Anna... **the game at that point would have 2 choices, stop or keep on going** If the later, Chris would have naughty talk and sexy compliments of Anna while he works his hand past her pants and running her pussy-- Anna in the throes of pleasure, passion, the naughty situation would slip out Chris' anaconda and jerks him off. (no shower scene, just Anna stunned and in shock thinking of the night before coming to grips with it while showering). One Plausibility and that scene that was one too many. Second plausibility concern would be the BJ in the garage. At some point I figured Chris and Anna would have had some car sex at some point. And yes, Chris calling or texting Anna to meet him after midnight when there was near zero chance David would be awake-- Chris and Anna talk, and it leads to a BJ but only after some passionate making out to get Anna in a playful mood and aroused.
And wherever people predicted scene like Rob massage, Jake lingerie shopping and were excited about it, They totally got blue balled by MP lol...David called during massage and we saw just Jake dick during shopping lol. Actually, the Robinson thing was solid. About a grade of A. With David being awake, always paranoid and suspicious as I played, I wasn't expecting much to come from Robinson/Anna meeting. The only thing that detracted from the whole encounter was Anna being too upfront with Robinson and not playing the coy woman allowing herself to be seduced and being aware of it. David's cell phone call that was totally predictable. The Jake thing... hard pass on the route. If Anna was developing feelings for Jake and then starts to lust after Jake, I'd care about the content.
So lets not share bar scenario thoughts about Marvin situation and let MP create one with the flow
The saying goes, "The devil is in the details." And Mr. Palmer has crossed his t's and dotted his i's and by and large a top 10 game. Since the start of following AMP, I looked at a lot of NTR games just to see if there was any quality. Some wickedly good art out there, but storylines my pet ferrets could do a better job of. In general,... of all other adult games I am hard pressed to name one with good art and a good story.
But we all have our own ideas how each path and character should turn out... just we don't really get a vote in those outcomes. Just with JRR Martin... he doesn't listen when it comes to his most popular characters
It came out Jake tease Ana like Johnny Bravo cartoon character lol during shopping. No touching with Jake, and I don't think that in corrupt/faithful route Jake has made an attractive reputation towards Ana like where Ana is seriously attracted towards Jake ..As per Ana, Rob is the guy she like to prefer to go for dating. No such attraction towards Jake side..I don't know how the story will go on his path in the upcoming update..but by far I guess from Chapter 1 till now Jake hasn't make any progress towards Ana corruption wise. And I think he's the only character that didn't saw Ana naked/groped her including Marcel who had made only 1 appearance with Ana since chapter 1. Jake corruption storyline is a disaster even when his storyline with Ana is covered in almost all updates..beside weekend one, Jake had made an appearance in almost every update and still failed to create any bond with Ana unlike other antagonist like Hank/Marvin/Rob / Chris etc. I am comparing with these antagonist because these antagonist storyline is also covered in almost all updates and see where their corruption with Ana has reached now and where Jake path stand in terms of corruption with Ana. Jake still remain like a johnny bravo cartoon character for Ana.
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model garvin name good guy ?
really
even before see his character in game just look his face and smile you know this man is dirty man
really
even before see his character in game just look his face and smile you know this man is dirty man
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The famous whrittin' strategy..... Don't quit know what Faithfull mean to Mr Palmer....nor even Anna. And she want to remain Faithfull fine....but a Faithfull one will not send a lingerie pic to someone else.. for what?..... Surely for Chris to remember it as a good souvenir of their friendship! But Anna is not that naive she knows Chris intention with the picture.
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The creator once said that he has a different definition of NTR than everyone thinks and it's not rigid. He once said that sending lingerie pics to a fake friend is not cheating for him. Besides, he gave you the choice of how Anna reacts to sending a picture. And then in Ch2 you can still send pictures to the fake friend yes or no because Anna, for example, realized her previous mistake.