I am not a Patreon member for nearly three months now. But still I am getting notifications with preview of the image(but once i open the patreon its locked)
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Yea now I am thinking where's Ana right now lol...we didn't see that repairing room before. Marvin?? AC maintenance room or some garage? She's definitely somewhere out of her house...whose house it can be?
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look like Garage there house but why she dress like that did she Chang remove cloth
her nipl look hard even she look cry
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Hmmm garage with that dress and crying? I can see tears in her eyes.. Can't guess anything out from that sneak peek..Maybe Rob gave her bad news about David.
I define corruption a little differently!
Corruption is when you give up/suppress a conviction or betray/betray other people who trust you or for whom you have a duty of care for a short-term or long-term personal advantage.
People who do not feel guilty about this are psychopaths. I think Anna is second choice in terms of character and life experience, but I wouldn't rate Anna's personality profile like that.
The path you are talking about is the path of pure, unadulterated revenge on David. This path would indeed be free of the feelings of guilt that you find so uncomfortable. On this path, the corruption would only affect your own sense of shame, Anna's public image and perhaps her obligation to her daughter and Anna's family.
Now moment like these where Ana cry and feel angered...and whatever action she takes on her dark side will only make sense if someone play David path as corrupt too / David is not understanding or doubting or telling her off...Then Ana falling for Dark side makes more sense to me. Either play both as faithful where Ana will feel guilty and apologise David for misunderstanding later on...or both paths as corrupt.. The thing in the middle while playing David as faithful and Ana as corrupt one will feel like Ana is slut which she's not....But this customised kind of gameplay will allow Ana to cheat like a slut even if David is faithful while her inner feelings remain insecure and all.
It might be hard for MP to write an individual dialogue in all paths and some lines in few scenes might be duplicated as per full faithful or full corrupt route. Where Ana might feel like a slut. The VN corrupt route will make more sense when it will be played as David's negative action makes Ana to react that way. But it's on individual fantasies lol whatever they like they can play accordingly.
It might be hard for MP to write an individual dialogue in all paths and some lines in few scenes might be duplicated as per full faithful or full corrupt route. Where Ana might feel like a slut. The VN corrupt route will make more sense when it will be played as David's negative action makes Ana to react that way. But it's on individual fantasies lol whatever they like they can play accordingly.
The path is not of utter revenge on David... It's the path where Ana is reacting or falling to the dark side depending on how she's being treated on basis of David action towards her..If you play David as non understanding, where he tell her off and keep doubting ana about her office people...while hiding major things from Ana like business bankruptcy and in the meanwhile going for Alexia ..yea he didn't cheated but he did gone for it and denied her later. Well obviously it won't be revenge but she will not like to stay with an immature David side ..How can a person will live with a kid with an immature man who doesn't communicate to her own partner? She'll go for a divorce and search for better path for herself and her daughter rather staying with a failure and immature husband who kept doubting her and cannot even satisfy her sexual needs. And on this path she's free to be with whoever she wants to be looking for other options rather than feeling of guiltiness of being cheated. More like an independent woman. So as an independent if any character like Hank demands Ana to submit...she has to .. because in her mind she and her kids has to survive and she doesn't wanna lose job when David is out of money..people do submit or kiss ass of their boss for promotion or to earn more...that doesn't mean they are slut, it means they try to do their best to achieve higher position in the company when they know they don't have anyone to support them. But yea it's badluck for Ana that she's surrounded by perverts.
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Wow I wish my garage was that clean and organized. Maybe Anna got this dress from Jake “the snake” when she was trying on outfits for his mysterious girlfriend, maybe he told her it fits you like a glove and I’ll buy it for you if you wear it to the office
Part Seven...
The young lawyer, who narrowly escaped fainting, was in incredible mess. Her chest heaved exaggeratedly while she trying to catch her breath and she still gagged occasionally. Her dark eyeshadow and mascara were completely ruined and running down her cheeks. Sweat, saliva, snot, make-up and cum were mixed together on her turned bright red face. The veins on her neck and forehead, which were normally invisible, had swollen and become clearly visible due to her violent gaggings. The a dense and enormous mass of semen that covered almost her entire forehead was creeping very slowly between her eyebrows and moving on her nose. The thick rope of his cum that stretched from above her left ear to her chin was slowly loosing while some of it had flowed from inside her ear and covered her earring. Another giant mass was stuck to her voluminous blond hair. A very thick rope descended from her semen-covered chin and hung down to her breasts, suspended in the air. She felt how weight the huge globs of his cum were as they crawled ever very slowly over her face, neck and hair. The yellowish, slimy stuff wasn't runny and had an almost chewy consistency. She couldn't believe her stomach was full of it. She didn't know how she could swallow something like that without choking.
The old pervert watched at the blonde goddess on whom he had created an incredible mess on her. He was proud of his work. This version of her was even sexier than usual for him. For a moment, he thought about bending her over onto her knees and hands and fucking her from behind like a dog. But they had been here for a long time. Employees were starting to return to the office. So he put his dick back in his pants, even though it was still hard, and he pulled himself together. But the same was not true for the young lawyer. She needed time to recover and clean up. She looked at the old pervert. The hunger in his eyes was still the same, it was clear that he was not satisfied. She knew that every second she spent alone with him was a huge risk. He could move into round two at any time. She couldn't let this happen.
"Please, go outside and don't let anyone come this way." she said in panting.
Marvin nodded and he reluctantly walked out.
When he left, she looked around in panic. Luckily, some of materials she needed to cleanse herself was available there. She had used up five or six large packs of paper tissues, but she still couldn't clean herself completely. She was especially having very hard time getting rid of the large slimy mass that had gotten into her hair. Every time she intervened it would spread further. She consumed a few more large packages just for that. Even so, she could still feel some of it deep within her hair. The only way to get rid of this was to take a long shower. Since this was not possible under current conditions, she had to make do with what she had. She gathered her disheveled hair into a loose bun on top of her head.
As she was finally getting ready to go out, another feeling hit her hard. Despite all the hardships she had gone through, her aroused body was on fire. The white satin fabric of her panties was soaked wet and leaking. Marvin had brought her to the brink of cumming without ever touching her pussy. His insatiable hunger for her was affecting her badly. Although his rough handling was physically very challenging for her, it was mentally very exciting. She was on fire.
When Anna finally came out he scanned her from head to toe with his lustful stare. There was an awkward silence a moment when their eyes met.
"Good job!" he said sarcastically.
She didn't answer him. She had wasted too much time. She wanted to get back to her room before anyone noticed her absence. Marvin accompanied her as she walked down the hallway. When he wrapped his arm around her waist and brought his hand down to her ass, she stopped with deeply sighed.
"Pls, wait here until I went to my room. We must not attract attention. ."
He glared at her beatiful face. He had a insidiously expression on his eyes.
"Okay, so be it. But you better be prepared for a tough evening shift." he said clearly.
His words shocked her. She couldn't think straight. She didn't know what to say. Without answering, she walked away from him with quick steps. He clenched his yellowish teeth as he looked at her upterned ass swinging in her skirt from behind. He was crazy about her.
Anna luckily managed to get to her room without being seen by anyone. When she sat in her chair, She took a hand mirror out of her bag and looked at herself. She looked fine, but her makeup was completely gone. She began to rub the sides of her jaw with her palms. It ached from being forced to remain open to its limit for so long. She was having difficulty swallowing too. The mechanism in her throat, which had been tampered, didn't seem to be working properly. She took out the makeup products she carried in her bag and started to freshen up her makeup. The words he had said about working overtime echoed in her mind over and over again. She shivered with a tingle feel running down her spine. She felt the soaked satin fabric of her panties stick to the lips of her pussy by tickling her insides. She desperately needed to cum. For a moment she thought about satisfying herself, but someone could enter the room at any time, it was very risky. That's why she gave up. She shook her head and tried to snap herself out of it. She sat back in her chair and turned the air conditioning up even higher. She was burning.
Marvin went down to the basement to check on his half-finished work. A pipe was still leaking. While trying to fix it, all he could think about was what she would do. Would she leave when that shift was over, or would she stay? He couldn't have learned that while he was here. That's why he decided to return to the office after finishing his work. No matter what he did, he couldn't suppress the insatiable hunger he felt for her. He was dying for her.
The young lawyer could not concentrate on her work. With his dense, huge cum still churning in her stomach, she could smell and taste its foul flavor. To shake off this feeling, she went to the kitchen and made a cup of coffee with plenty of cream, then returned to her room. While she was drinking it, she frequently glanced at the clock. Tick Tock... Tick Tock... time was passing. Every second was making her more nervous. Meanwhile, Keandra walked in her room.
"What's up, sexy" she said as she sat on the chair across from her.
"Mmm, Not bad!"
"Why didn't you come?"
"I had a lot of work to do"
Anna looked very uneasy and giving her short answers while Keandra tried to make conversation her.
"If you have an appointment, I can go."
"Why did you say that?" she in surprising.
"Because you can't take your eyes off the clock. What the hell are you doing without me? Tell me!" Kendra said laughing.
Anna panicked for a moment, not knowing what to say.
"Nothing like that. The shift is almost over and I still have some work to do."
"You're working too hard, honey. You should take some time for yourself. Have some fun and relax, okay?"
She nodded in agreement.
"How about having a drink tonight with me? Maybe Jack will join us too."
"I'd love to, but not tonight. Maybe later."
"Okay, whatever you want."
Although she was suspicious of her attitudes, she did not push her further. When Keandra left the room, the young blonde took a deep breath.
Marvin was pacing around the kitchen excitedly. He didn't know if Anna was still in the office. He couldn't take it anymore, he had to learn. Just as he was about to go to her room, Kendra walked in the kitchen.
"What's up pervert?" she asked sarcastically.
"Go to hell! I can't deal with you right now."
"What's wrong with everyone?"
"What the hell are you talking about?"
"Everyone is weird today."
"Who are you talking about?"
"Anna."
"Is she here?"
"Of course! Where else would she be?"
"Anyway, forget it."
Keandra was a little suspicious by his strange behaviors, but she didn't care. He was always a little weird anyway.
"See you later, pervert." she said before leaving the kitchen.
He didn' nswer her.
"Your turn will come too, bitch," he muttered quietly while looking at her ass.
When he learned that Anna was still here, his impatience grew even greater. His cock began twitching in his pants. He was so excited that he couldn't stand still as he waited for everyone to leave the office.
Anna couldn't take her eyes off the clock during the last minutes of the workday. Her nipples were hard as bullets and the lips of her tight pussy were throbbing. She had been in this state since almost noon. She aware that if she didn't leave there, she would be in a big trouble.
"I have to go right now" she thought.
She put her cell phone and other personal belongings in her bag. Just as she was getting ready to leave, she saw the doorknob start to turn. At that moment, time stop. Her heart began pounding with excitement. As Marvin walked in and slammed the door shut loudly, the young lawyer jumped where she stood.
"What do you think you're doing, are you out of your mind? Someone will hear." she said with her voice trembling with excitement.
He fixed his hungry eyes on her.
"Everyone has already left. We are completely alone in the whole office" he said by emphasizing the part of "alone".
There was a madly expression in his eyes. Anna little panicked, she didn't know what to do for a moment. But then gathering all her will, she stood up and started walking towards the door.
As she passed him, she said, "I have to go" and reached for the doorknob. But Marvin put one hand on the door, preventing her from opening it.
"Why?" he asked
They were standing so close. She could smell his foul body odor.
""What, why?" she answered his question with an another question.
"Why do you have to go?" he asked more clearly.
The young lawyer thought for a few seconds before answering.
"David is waiting for me so I have to go right now"
She was telling the lie, but already who cared. He grabbed her by the arm and turned her towards himself.
"Call him and tell you'll be late. We have unfinished business." he said to her face.
With that, he grabbed her left breast tightly through her shirt, causing her to gasp.
"No, stop, I can't do this,"
But he ignored her objections and pushed her until her back against the door. Then, without wasting any time, he locked his mouth on her neck and started kissing and licking it.
"Marvin! Ohhh! let me go! Ohhh! I have to go."
Her breathing became irregular and she began to breathe noisily.
"You're not going anywhere until I'm done with you." he said while squeezing her breast hard in his palm.
He was putting pressure on her with his determined attitude in order to gain psychological advantage over her. And it was working.
"Ahhh! Please... Ohhh!.." Her objections were becoming more and more shallow.
As she placed her hands on his loose chest, Marvin grabbed her wrists with both of his and pressed them against the wooden surface of door just above her head. Then he brought his face close to hers. He locked his eyes on hers as they breathed into each other's faces.
"Isn't the mess you've created today enough for you?" she asked him by accusingly.
He was a little surprised by her straightforward attitude, but on the other hand, this made him more horny. He put his weight on her, pressing her tightly against the door.
"Never! Even if I locked you in a room and fucked you for days without never coming out, I still wouldn't get enough your hot body."
His dirty words hit her once again. She knew he wasn't lying. He was a fucks machine. When he moved to kiss her, she turned her face to the side. But he was determined, he attached his lips to the corner of her lips and started kissing her from there. His thick cock was sandwiched between their tightly adhered bodies, and she could feel it twitching against her flat stomach . She couldn't hold back her moans anymor.
"You're...... really... obsessed... with... me!... aren't you?"
Every time she opened her mouth to speak, he plunged his tongue into her mouth, so her words were choppy.
He brought his mouth against her ear, his hot breath searing her.
"Yes!... Since the first moment I saw you. I haven't spent even a single day without jerking off dreaming of you for years. You know, the cums I squirt thinking of you could fill that pool where you came to visit"
"You are a sick horny old pervert... You know that right? " she said breathlessly.
Marvin brought his face in front her beatiful face, every particle of which he had fucked a few hours ago and looked into her blue eyes.
"Yes I know."
Without breaking eye contact, he suddenly grabbed the collars of her stylish white shirt with both hands and tore it from end to end with single powerful pull. As broken buttons flew in every direction, scattering them across the room, her bag slipped off her shoulder and fell to the floor. She gasped against his wild action. She was petrified with excitement, and even though her hands were free, they still remained above her head. While looking into each other's eyes, the only thing that broke the tense silence was their deep, irregular breathing. But this was just the calm before the storm. The old pervert, driven mad by lust, roughly pulled down her bra, complety revealing her big, perfect breasts. Then he took one in each hand and squeezed it hard. Her already hard nipples swelled as her firm flesh spilled out from between his fingers. She couldn't stop a moan from escaping her mouth.
"Ahhhhh!"
Then he stuffed as much of the breast meat into his foul mouth as possible and started sucking it hard. Anna was still afraid that someone might be in the office and hear them so she tried to stay as quiet as she could. But when he attacked her nipples she couldn't take it anymore. She whimpered, moaned and squealed as he took them one by one into his mouth, sucking and nibbling on them. Soon redness began to appear all over her breasts, which were soaked with his sticky saliva. He continued to plunder them with hunger for long minutes. He was even wilder than yesterday.
Marvin couldn't wait to fuck her. He straightened up and looked her beatiful face again. The hunger in his eyes made her uneasy. Suddenly he grabbed her by the arms and roughly spun her around, and began to drive her towards the table. While walking, his foot hit her bag and some of the items inside it spilled out with her phone. He continued to lead her from behind without caring. When they arrived he put one hand on the back of her neck and bend her roughly onto the table. Out of breath, the young blondegripped the edges of the table tightly, her face was turned to the wall opposite her.. While he continued to bend her over tightly on the table with one hand, he quickly unbuckled his belt with the other and pulled his pants down to his calves. Then he dipped his hand under her skirt, hooked his fingers the waistband of her satin panties, and pulled it down. He had completely lost his control. His movements were very hasty and rude. Anna could hear he snorting like an angry bull. She was aware this evening was going to be a tough one. She tried to prepare himself as much as possible. But yet, when he buried his cock in her tight pussy in one thrust with absolute determination, her blue eyes opened wide and she couldn't stop the loud scream that escaped her mouth. Indeed, it was not easy for the young lawyer to handle his gnarled, thick, huge cock.
"AAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!"
This was just the beginning. While he held her neck with one hand, he grabbed her waist with the other and started working his dick in and out of her. He quickly established a fast rhythm. His flaccid hairy crotch was hitting her firm ass-cheeks, making sharp slapping sounds.
"AAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!... AAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!"
He called out to her as she let out long screams.
"That's it Anna!... That's it!... Take it all, take it all!... I will fuck you everyday making you scream like this... I'll show you what you were created for."
With that, he increased his speed and started fucking her with even harder. Every hard thrust of his was shaking her fit body. Her firm big breasts were swaying back and forth as the large wooden desk creaked.
His immoral statements hit her hard. The young blonde, who had already been horny all day, was going crazy with the effect of his brutall fuck. Her screams stopped and her body began to tremble from head to toe. Realizing what was coming, the old pervert buried his dick up to the hilt in her pussy and stayed there.
"Yes Anna!... Come on!... Cum on my dick... Squirt on my balls... Come on!... "
As if waiting for his instruction, she started squirting her body fluids all over the base of his cock and his hairy balls. As she writhed on the table, her arms and hands flailed uncontrollably, knocking the items on the table onto the floor. The desk lamp broke with a bang, scattering pencil case with pencils inside and other objects everywhere. That wasn't enough for him. While his dick was inside her all the way to the root, he grabbed her waist tightly with both hands and he started to crush her firm ass with his crotch, making circular movements. This drove her even crazier. Her nails scratched the surface of the table as she let out guttural moans. Wave after wave of orgasm hit her again and again. Her pussy, tightly clamped to the base of his cock, continued to squirt, twitching over and over again. His hairy balls and groin were soaked with her bodily fluids. While her body was shaking with powerful spasms, she straightened up a little, supporting herself with her hands. Seizing the opportunity, Marvin reached forward with one hand, grabbed her left breast, and began to knead it roughly in his sweaty palm. When the young lawyer's orgasm finally began to subside, he placed his hand on her back again and laid her back down on the table. He slowly pulled his cock out until only the head remained inside her. Then suddenly, with all his might, he thrust his hips forward and stubbed his cock up to the hilti nto her pussy. Her entire body was thrown forward as her tight ass cheeks rippled. Caught off guard, the young blonde a long screamed from the top of her lungs. While her scream still echoing throughout the office, the old pervert repeated his move in the same manner. He started fucking her with long, hard and very deep thrusts. His blows were so hard that the slapping sound made every time their flesh collided were ringing in their ears.
Marvin gazed in awe at her rippling ass. Slowly sliding his hands from her waist, he grasped her ass cheeks tightly and pulled them apart in opposite directions. It was amazing. There was nothing resembling a hole in sight, but instead there was a very tightly closed tiny starfish. It was very obvious that it had not been touched in any way. One of the things the old pervert was obsessed with was anal sex. There were two essential subject in all the porn he watched: blonde and anal. He was already heavy obsessed with Anna. Her perfect ass had been the focus of his dirty fantasies for many years. He was dying to fuck her in the ass. But he knew it was too early for that; one wrong move and he could lose a lot. He had to be patient to achieve his ultimate goal. It was the last castle to be conquered.
As he examined her tiny starfish, he could no longer hold himself back. He raised his right hand and sliced the air with his fingers, slapping her ass cheek. Then once more, and once more. He continued until there were distinct red finger marks on both of her ass cheeks. The young lawyer jumped in place with squealing every time. Then he grabbed her waist again with both hands and increased his speed. His grip was so tight that she felt she were trapped in a vice. The old pervert started fucking the young blonde like there was no tomorrows. She gripped the edges of the table as if her life depended on it while he roughly thrust into her, again and again. Her breasts were squished on the table and her face was facing the wall opposite. Her voluminous blonde hair flew in waves as her entire body jerking. The chaos they created was incredible. Large wooden desk creaked while violently shooking, and its drawers were swinging open and closed noisily. Her screams and moans echoed at all over the office.
He continued to keep his cock up to the hilt inside her twitching pussy as she trembled from head to toe with her second massive orgasm.
When her crazy orgasm finally subsided, he lifted his left foot and placed it on the table and leaned over her. He reached out with one hand, grabbed her by the hair, and turned her face towards him.
"Look at my face while I fuck you," he called out to her.
When she looked at his sweaty, flushed face, she saw the insane look in his eyes. Then he immediately started working his dick in and out of her.
"Yesss... That's it sweetie.... I'm gonna fuck you all night long... Yess... Take it all..."
He grabbed one of her breasts with his free hand and crushed it in his palm without letting go. Using his grip on her hair and breast as leverage, he increased the speed. His flabby crotch hammered against her tight ass while his swollen hairy balls were slapping the backs of her legs.
Anna was once again shocked by his sexual power and stamina. His thick, knotted cock was already giving her enough trouble. As if that wasn't enough, she was also being extremely overwhelmed by his rough treatments. But she still couldn't deny that she was big enjoying every second of his hard fuck.
The old pervert watched her expression as he continued hammering her pussy with everything he had. Her grimaced face was contorted into a mess. She was moaning, whining, squealing and screaming in different tones depending on the violence of his thrusts. The effect he had on her was driving him crazy. Finally, the young lawyer was having her third major orgasm while he squirts those huge masses of cum deep inside her pussy. They let out guttural moans as their intertwined bodies writhed for minutes. When he pulls his dick out of her, his thick sperm was slowly rolling down the inside of her legs. Anna collapsed on the table like an empty sack.
Marvin hadn't had enough yet. He watched her from behind as he slowly took off his shirt and pants. She was still moaning as she tried to catch her breath and her body continued convulsing on the desk occasionally.
I know how you play David. Your David just has to be as bad as you describe/see him so that the other losers/beta males in this game can at least shine a little.
But keep in mind that we've only seen two weeks of Anna/David's life at best.
And as I said, my post was more about your definition of corruption.
Lol she will not be crying for trying dress lol. But in the sneak peek she's crying.Wow I wish my garage was that clean and organized. Maybe Anna got this dress from Jake “the snake” when she was trying on outfits for his mysterious girlfriend, maybe he told her it fits you like a glove and I’ll buy it for you if you wear it to the office
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She's crying but why? I wonder how this outfit looks in its entirety. It reminds me of an elegant evening gown, or a gym outfit. Either she got this dress from Penguin and is crying that she's like a cheap whore selling herself for gifts, or something did that fake doctor Rob Cobra do to her and she ran out of there in just her bra. Or something happened at dinner with the old fox. And she can cry with happiness because David didn't cheat on her after all.
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I think there was touchy touchy in her happy spot possibly in front of her baby.
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Seriously I am riding with 2 scenarios. 1 she is crying because more information of Davids infidelity has been relayed to her and she is breaking down. This scenario will lead to her finally cheating. 2 she got information that leads her to heavily believe David didn't cheat and now she is feeling remorse for hand jobbing Chris. This would be the path where you can choose to let him shower or not, I'd call it the redemption path. But I am more inclined to believe that my first theory is more plausible.
Well what david doing to Ana make her feel suppressed too as per your definition... She's not at all responsible..I want Ana to cheat so for me that play is required...it doesn't mean my corruption path is psychopath or free of guilt..I am playing porn where I want Ana to cheat without having a feel of guilt.
We won't be seeing more than a month of this VN anyways.. your judgement is wrong mister... it's the VN that's designed in that way. I am not here to play love story of husband and wife on porn website.