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L0b0ts
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Anna in her office getting it on with Jake is a trap. Hank the Tank gave Anna a warning about the kind of person he wants for a business partner, so this may dissuade her and David barging in on her would also dissuade her, as she wouldn't want David barging in on her unannounced. So if Anna gets it on with Jake it may happen but in a different location thwarting Kendra and Marvin's plan to destroy her. Also having all this sex and not having birth control because she wants babies with David is also an issue, because guys won't be able to hold their load with Anna and she can't risk pregnancy with some random, so this means she must go anal only. 
Sleepwalker59
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I just found this title, but before I start, and without getting into spoilers, I wanted to ask...
-Is it one of those games where the female protagonist can act like a whore, but at the slightest that the husband does something wrong, she gets angry (as happens in "Pandora's box 1")?
-After a quick look at the main characters' attributes, I see that there are only punishments for David, so Anna can do whatever she wants without any consequences? Is that so?
That's all.
-Is it one of those games where the female protagonist can act like a whore, but at the slightest that the husband does something wrong, she gets angry (as happens in "Pandora's box 1")?
-After a quick look at the main characters' attributes, I see that there are only punishments for David, so Anna can do whatever she wants without any consequences? Is that so?
That's all.
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it's the other way around, the slightest thing Anna does makes husband angry but plot twist causes wife revenge on husband. NO SPOILERS VERSION.
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This is why Jake didn't try to get a good show from Anna lingerie shopping, he is following Kendra's instructions to the letter.
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I replayed the game from the start and have max naughty points and no submission point meaning she is more dominant and the latest Hank the Tank scene plays exactly the same way, and no options in this scene.
With these stats she should have been more confident and when Hank approached her and asks for a kiss, Anna looks directly in his eyes and instead of crying she should have cupped his balls with her hand gave it a rub through his pants and she should have said "like this Hank, is that what you want?" and he would have been putty in her hands and than she should have said, I have a busy schedule, I have got to go and she should have just walked out and that would have left Hank tripping right out and Anna in control.
With these stats she should have been more confident and when Hank approached her and asks for a kiss, Anna looks directly in his eyes and instead of crying she should have cupped his balls with her hand gave it a rub through his pants and she should have said "like this Hank, is that what you want?" and he would have been putty in her hands and than she should have said, I have a busy schedule, I have got to go and she should have just walked out and that would have left Hank tripping right out and Anna in control.
Sadowdark
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Except that Anna waited out Jak. And it was him who leaked in his pants, not Anna in her panties.
I noticed part 3 is still the same. The stake is overwhelming against MCs as usual. To the extend I think skipping the pages doesn't do much difference to the game.
It gets bored if this continue with everyone trying to take advantage of the mc scenario. It will be good if MCs has some reliable friends helping them out too. If not, it is really like another grand alliance of creeps game.
It gets bored if this continue with everyone trying to take advantage of the mc scenario. It will be good if MCs has some reliable friends helping them out too. If not, it is really like another grand alliance of creeps game.
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Warning: This is even longer than a DarthSpitz717 comment lol.
I wasn't sure what to make of this update. Parts were great, parts were bad and everything inbetween. I don't know why the dialogue, internal monologues and narrator speech is so simple and as if every little thing needs to be explained, like it's written for children to understand. I saw a little bit of this in the previous update but now it's constant. Anna's internal thoughts are always shown, even when in conversation with others for no reason. We can already see how she's acting. No need to write each emotion she's feeling every second line. Mr Palmer originally never wrote like this and even in his Literotica short was much more nuanced with smarter writing. Is he actually still writing this? To me it seems completely opposite from before, when he did such an amazing job of plot development and conveying great emotions through characters. This new style reminds me of how European devs write the dialogue for their VNs. By over explaining things which are already obvious. Exposition dialogue is shown so blatantly, not even tried to blend in with conversation. Even the previous built up reasoning behind characters actions and some plot points have been thrown to the side with no care. I'm hoping that the worst hasn't happened!
I wasn't sure what to make of this update. Parts were great, parts were bad and everything inbetween. I don't know why the dialogue, internal monologues and narrator speech is so simple and as if every little thing needs to be explained, like it's written for children to understand. I saw a little bit of this in the previous update but now it's constant. Anna's internal thoughts are always shown, even when in conversation with others for no reason. We can already see how she's acting. No need to write each emotion she's feeling every second line. Mr Palmer originally never wrote like this and even in his Literotica short was much more nuanced with smarter writing. Is he actually still writing this? To me it seems completely opposite from before, when he did such an amazing job of plot development and conveying great emotions through characters. This new style reminds me of how European devs write the dialogue for their VNs. By over explaining things which are already obvious. Exposition dialogue is shown so blatantly, not even tried to blend in with conversation. Even the previous built up reasoning behind characters actions and some plot points have been thrown to the side with no care. I'm hoping that the worst hasn't happened!
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Sadowdark
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For god's sake, we have so many stats and points when the only difference is a link to another dialogue or a hidden choice. I still think there are kinetic choices. And it was supposed to be the end of Ch3 of kinetic choices. But the creator said not to waste time on the game. He is working on the same scene with different dialogues. But they could give other choices. In my opinion it should work like this. You get points for submitting to Penguin for your previous choices related to him. Anna is submissive to him, you get choices related to submitting. Depending on the path you take. For example, he could have given a choice in the faithful path that Anna stops Penguin from approaching her, so he doesn't come near her because he'll start screaming or something. Dude fish Anna could have shut the door in his face.
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Writing wise, I felt a standard got a little lower than previous updates..Hank storyline I find funny rather emotional...and the flow from one scene to other I felt was not continued as previous update...it felt like Ana getting teleported from one location to other with different characters until the night storyline.
He could have used 5/10 renders where Ana thinks on her way to other location instead of putting all her thoughts in one scene. Like in the office , Ana was talking to kendra, and poof she was in canteen then again with kendra then poof with Hank then poof topless in her office..then she went out of her office and poof in the shop with Jake, then poof directly home...he could have shown like Ana leaving office, Jake and Ana leaving the office entering the car driving to shop and dropping her back to home.....something like that it feels continuity. After she came back to home the story feel continuous.
He could have used 5/10 renders where Ana thinks on her way to other location instead of putting all her thoughts in one scene. Like in the office , Ana was talking to kendra, and poof she was in canteen then again with kendra then poof with Hank then poof topless in her office..then she went out of her office and poof in the shop with Jake, then poof directly home...he could have shown like Ana leaving office, Jake and Ana leaving the office entering the car driving to shop and dropping her back to home.....something like that it feels continuity. After she came back to home the story feel continuous.
Adhdclassic
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The one thing APM does which I like is the ability to choose a chapter and just do the choices then it starts the new chapter. Wish CH, AWAM, JOHN and other games like it do that . After I play APM I delete it to save space I couldn't do it if I couldn't do the choices. All seriousness after finding all the stuff the chapter has to offer the replay after that is 0 so no purpose of keeping it in my computer,
can you share the link of that perticular story on Literotica.com that your referring to? thanks.
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we need your beautiful and touching story, I can't do it anymore, I can't live on your literature, I need my dose, if you want I'll pay you.
