VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.5b] [Mr Palmer]

[Couto25]

I understand, I'm interested in the whole plot and how it will be resolved, and also who Kendra's boss is

Yes sure. I don't think there is any boss over Kendra except Hank. Kendra is boss herself on her own. She is just tryn to take revenge on David for rejecting her. The plot will be mostly developed on a cheating theme. Yes you can play on faithful path obviously but you will certainly miss all the efforts developer put on this VN on cheating theme.

If there will be some scenario in future where Ana will come to find Kendra plot whilst she is on a corrupt route then that will be interesting to find out and how Ana will react that time and what will she do after finding out the truth. I think Leonard is the one who saw and took Kendra pic too. And I dont get the David character completely too if I play him in a corrupt path... as no other girls has been thrown on his side as of now beside Alexia.

What if in corrupt route of David, Kendra comes along and David been given an option to fuck Kendra. Will anyone blame Ana as a whore that time? If David is also the same way, we all will say like yea Ana did the right thing to move on from David. Because that is also a possibility MP mentioned that David might get back with Janet.

 

[Sadowdark]

I don't think story wise Chris will be the naughtiest cheating story for Ana in this VN. Yea Chris is one of the guys with whom she can easily be corrupted due to his role as a best friend. Same with Marvin who might get sex because of sympathy.

I think most seductive/dominating one might be with Hank / Leonard / Jake because of roles and power of info that they have in this VN and how they can use it that will be interesting to know. Irrespective of how they look lol..they will be dominating over her. Grant and Rob are kinda so so....Grant can take advantage of her in a worse way. Marciel maybe if someone has interracial bbc fantasy, they can enjoy..plus he also have Alexia info..as of now we didnt saw much of Marciel so idk what kind of role he will have over Ana.

Chris has all the keys to Anna's secrets and it's easier for him and he can use it against her at any time.

The old fisherman won't have sex with Anna out of sympathy, he'll blackmail her with compromising footage of her and force her to have sex with him.

The penguin will dominate, if Anna doesn't listen to him, he'll punish her sexually.

The panty guy (Leonard) can have sex for a fresh batch of Anna's panties. There'll be sex for information, footage he has.

Jake will seduce her like Casanova.

The old fox poisoner will use trickery.

The fake rehabilitation doctor Rob Cokobra can have sex with him out of sympathy because her marriage is not working out.

Marcel is the BBC

 

[Adhdclassic]

So far there is 3 chapters how many are scheduled.

 

[Sadowdark]

Yes sure. I don't think there is any boss over Kendra except Hank. Kendra is boss herself on her own. She is just tryn to take revenge on David for rejecting her.

Kendra definitely has a boss, she even spoke to him on the phone and says she took advantage of David's father's naivety to get him to invest in a fake website about his favorite hobby, which he put a lot of money into, and David's company is on the verge of bankruptcy because of David's father. Otherwise, how would he have enough money to pay for a luxury escort Alexa. How would he have the money to pay Jake after seducing Anna. I don't think her own salary would have been enough to cover all of that.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

The creator clearly said here what the married. path will be.
,,Generally speaking, I want the reader to have three experiences depending on choices: 1) A marriage that has a chance to succeed, with a wife who fights to remain faithful, 2) A marriage on unsteady ground, leaving the wife confused and vulnerable to other men, or 3) A marriage on the rocks, which has the wife scorned and angry. There are other factors to consider, such as Anna's level of naughtiness and submissiveness, and the men that Anna lets get close to her.,,

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The creator clearly said here what the married. path will be. Good that you nailed down the developers' motives in how the game can be played. But Mr. Palmer has made other statements previously. So one has to take all that's been said from the developer into account.


,,Generally speaking, I want the reader to have three experiences depending on choices: 1) A marriage that has a chance to succeed, with a wife who fights to remain faithful, **very consistent from prior comments.

2) A marriage on unsteady ground, leaving the wife confused and vulnerable to other men, or To be fair to Mr. Palmer, he can't just repeat every prior statement or idea to narrow everything to a pinpoint. Otherwise writing a "press release" {Yes Sophia TV on YouTube has read word for word the most recent notes from the developer}, would get in the way of programing the game.

These are just general overviews of the game. But we got to keep in mind that Anna (as far as being a faithful wife) is her own worst enemy because of her repressed urges and desires. An earlier statement from Mr. Palmer said Anna is using David's cheating (sic) as an excuse. Further the only thing keeping Anna's passions from wondering else wear was Anna holding on to societal convention of being married; then later on in a statement, Mr. Palmer said the "marriage shield" is gone (after the last release came out and there was some Chris and Anna alone time.)

3) A marriage on the rocks, which has the wife scorned and angry. There are other factors to consider, such as Anna's level of naughtiness and submissiveness, and the men that Anna let's get close to her. Again, the developer is just using broad statements without being painfully detailed. Simplify there are a host of emotions Anna's character is going through. Jealousy is one very overlooked that most are missing out on in this forum. Anna has mentioned several times the woman David cheated with was young and beautiful, and Anna has mentioned it several times about her mom body after giving birth. That all points to self-confidence issues which leads Anna to seek validation and reassurance she is still a hottie. Plus in Anna's own words she enjoys the attention of men.

To sum it all up, you got a woman with repressed sexual urges and desires, insecurity issues, a good excuse all leading up to her taking a Kitchen Pass and heading for the door.

 

[Sadowdark]

So far there is 3 chapters how many are scheduled.

Probably CH4

 

[Adhdclassic]

Probably CH4

1 chapter to get all that done. Wonder like the book are they going to focus on one person at a time. Then create at second series. Alot to drop in 1 chapter

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Chris has all the keys to Anna's secrets and it's easier for him and he can use it against her at any time.

The old fisherman won't have sex with Anna out of sympathy, he'll blackmail her with compromising footage of her and force her to have sex with him.

The penguin will dominate, if Anna doesn't listen to him, he'll punish her sexually.

The panty guy (Leonard) can have sex for a fresh batch of Anna's panties. There'll be sex for information, footage he has.

Jake will seduce her like Casanova.

The old fox poisoner will use trickery.

The fake rehabilitation doctor Rob Cokobra can have sex with him out of sympathy because her marriage is not working out.

Marcel is the BBC

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Chris has all the keys to Anna's secrets and it's easier for him and he can use it against her at any time. Actually, I think Chris is just Chris, bold, loud and obnoxious. Chris hits on woman and like the old saying goes, "even a blind squirrel will eventually find an acorn." I think the developer is trying to get at is it's all about ANNA. Remove Anna's character issues of wanting men's attention, has repressed sexual desires, and Anna's motives, just like with most women, Chris would strike out with her.

Remember Anna's hold on being a faithful wife was she held on to the principle of being married and what society expects of her. Imagine if the real Anna didn't have those constraints or inhibitions. Likely would need a DNA test as to who Sophia's dad is. Further the whole marriage would be a pending disaster right after the honeymoon. It took a wildly set of bad luck to have a psychopath to engineer one hell of a revenge plot to remove Anna's only real safeguards.

Where in all the narrative has Anna ever voiced it's morally wrong or that her love for David would keep her from straying?

The old fisherman won't have sex with Anna out of sympathy, he'll blackmail her with compromising footage of her and force her to have sex with him. I see the whole Marvin and Anna thing as the only real kink to the whole story. Almost everyone else Anna's interactions with them would be vanilla as you would expect. This Marvin/Anna route I believe is Anna's real perversion she holds.

Think of it as Anna wanting to be desired and wanted by men, but unlike most women who get off on that, the other side of that coin being "want all you like but you are getting none." For Anna its part power because if she snaps her fingers Marvin would be out of his pants faster than the Flash checking his mail. Some people are exhibitionist (don't know why but they are), and it might be Anna gets off on seeing others, especially bottom feeders, taking delight in her. There are just too many perversions that I don't fathom or hope to understand the why or when fors but they are out there.

The other reason I don't think there will be Marvin using blackmail, is even without any goods on Anna he has felt up her thigh, got a good ass grab in and had Anna herself teasing him with her tits. Now I still think Marvin will be the last one to get his wick wet, but that is only because there will be a lot of naughty and mischief that will lead up to it.

The penguin will dominate, if Anna doesn't listen to him, he'll punish her sexually. I'm thinking yes you are right Hank will play the domination card, but I'll be willing to bet Anna blackmails herself into calculating to allow Hank have her and use it as an excuse. That would fall neatly into a "rape roleplay" fantasy for Anna. Might even get as interesting as Anna blaming David for putting her in that position to have to accept Hank.

The panty guy (Leonard) can have sex for a fresh batch of Anna's panties. There'll be sex for information, footage he has. Yah but more so that that footage helps David more than it does Anna. Plus His route is so far underdeveloped it would be like AWAM with so many plot arches that it would be years before he really has any sort of chance. And the developer needs the "happy ending" to the game and this is the fastest most viable way to achieve it.

Jake will seduce her like Casanova. Vanilla no matter how it goes down

The old fox poisoner will use trickery. The one and only real plot weakness in the whole game, especially if the developer is on a strict timeline of events. Grant is on the outs with Anna, and he has to rebuild the bridges he burned. That alone is one or two releases with him mostly featured in an update.

Yet the developer has it that Grant thinks soon he will have Anna. That's a problem for one Grant doesn't know about Anna and David's marriage issues. So how can someone be so confident at getting the prize knowing the prize most likely happily married with a child, has a good paying job and living a good life? See the plot problem? Think of it as walking blindfolded in a mine field knowing you're going to make it through. So what might be the big reveal the developer has in store for us.

The fake rehabilitation doctor Rob Cokobra can have sex with him out of sympathy because her marriage is not working out. A mercy f**K? Now that would be a stretch. Robinson would have banged a pregnant Anna if he could have and would do so presently. But sympathy, I think you are on to something.

Suppose Robinson acts like a real friend totally opposite of Chris and does offer real comfort and is a better actor than Chris in supporting Anna's marriage. Something comes up and Anna is in desperate need of comfort and stupidly visits Robinson at his house, talks about her troubles over wine, light reassuring comforting touches progress to the naughty side and....

Marcel is the BBC

 

[Couto25]

So far there is 3 chapters how many are scheduled.

There are only 3 what MP said before... Third part was supposed to be kinetics based on whatever decision we made for Ana and David in part 1 n 2....but 3 updates gone in part 3 n still Ana is not been corrupted yet upto the point of sex due to slow corruption theme. Maybe the upcoming update might have something...but still characters storyline wise corruption has to be developed with other characters upto groping and touching part beside Chris n marvin...Jake, Leonard, rob, grant, Marciel , even hank has not made any significant move towards Ana in present ongoing story if we leave flashback aside.

 

[Adhdclassic]

There are only 3 what MP said before... Third part was supposed to be kinetics based on whatever decision we made for Ana and David in part 1 n 2....but 3 updates gone in part 3 n still Ana is not been corrupted yet upto the point of sex due to slow corruption theme. Maybe the upcoming update might have something...but still characters storyline wise corruption has to be developed with other characters upto groping and touching part beside Chris n marvin...Jake, Leonard, rob, grant, Marciel , even hank has not made any significant move towards Ana in present ongoing story if we leave flashback aside.

I saw somewhere that the current saves will be obsolete due to they changed something in the stats regarding David, but there going to have like a choice playback wonder if that will be accurate.

 

[metagrossrj]

It's pretty clear by now that the game is about NTR/corruption but yea you can avoid paths with some characters that you don't like. The game is not about staying in faithful path n avoid all corruption because there will hardly be any content on that path...the best you'll get is save marriage by avoiding everyone moves.

But that's not the game is about. There will not be any content on faithful path maybe during the end, but it will mostly be avoid everyone's moves...The game is mostly to corrupt Ana, and enjoy whatever fantasies one has in any path.

It will mostly like making a wife forcefully staying faithful if whole theme is built to cheat. More like if you're playing unfaithful movie as Diane lane and rejecting all phone calls and rejecting meeting with the guy who cheat lol..what's the point in that? When developer/writer build a content for Diane lane/Ana in this case to cheat.. what's the point to force her from not doing that lol.

Not sure about you, but I always reject everyone, except Jake. Since he is the most realistic option. But yeah, it's your choice. I don't play any other paths either.

 

[Couto25]

Chris has all the keys to Anna's secrets and it's easier for him and he can use it against her at any time.

The old fisherman won't have sex with Anna out of sympathy, he'll blackmail her with compromising footage of her and force her to have sex with him.

The penguin will dominate, if Anna doesn't listen to him, he'll punish her sexually.

The panty guy (Leonard) can have sex for a fresh batch of Anna's panties. There'll be sex for information, footage he has.

Jake will seduce her like Casanova.

The old fox poisoner will use trickery.

The fake rehabilitation doctor Rob Cokobra can have sex with him out of sympathy because her marriage is not working out.

Marcel is the BBC

Marvin will not use blackmail...infact Ana wanted kendra to know that she allowed Marvin to grope her...so I don't think Marvin will blackmail her....She thought Marvin is more hornier than Chris, and satisfying her sexual needs properly... obviously she allows him out of sympathy but he's satisfying her needs instead of making her to jerk him like Chris. And Ana is not ashamed of hiding that from kendra so it won't be a blackmail.

 

[Couto25]

I saw somewhere that the current saves will be obsolete due to they changed something in the stats regarding David, but there going to have like a choice playback wonder if that will be accurate.

Yea he add some point structure and character intro and their relationship with Ana etc so he wants everyone to play from the beginning for more pleasure and see how it goes. Old saves doesn't work because he changed the structure of game not the story. I hope this is finalized one. That might be the reason he is saying that old save might not work..Even though the story will be same, it might have different point system maybe. Although it won't make much difference.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Yea he add some point structure and character intro and their relationship with Ana etc so he wants everyone to play from the beginning for more pleasure and see how it goes. Old saves doesn't work because he changed the structure of game not the story. I hope this is finalized one. That might be the reason he is saying that old save might not work..Even though the story will be same, it might have different point system maybe. Although it won't make much difference.

appreciate the clarification

 

[Sadowdark]

Yea he add some point structure and character intro and their relationship with Ana etc so he wants everyone to play from the beginning for more pleasure and see how it goes. Old saves doesn't work because he changed the structure of game not the story. I hope this is finalized one. That might be the reason he is saying that old save might not work..Even though the story will be same, it might have different point system maybe. Although it won't make much difference.

I think it might be about hidden choices that aren't explained how they work in the game.

 

[Couto25]

Kendra definitely has a boss, she even spoke to him on the phone and says she took advantage of David's father's naivety to get him to invest in a fake website about his favorite hobby, which he put a lot of money into, and David's company is on the verge of bankruptcy because of David's father. Otherwise, how would he have enough money to pay for a luxury escort Alexa. How would he have the money to pay Jake after seducing Anna. I don't think her own salary would have been enough to cover all of that.

Kendra gave Alexia her own money..Alexia was negotiating for more that's when Kendra told her do you think you are on my payroll or what lol...Just complete the work and go away..She was talking to Alexia ...Alexia has friend Terrence (Spammer guy who stole money from David Father) and Braxton (The guy who took pic) ...Terrence stole money from David's father by phishing him about the hobby. And he was supposed to give cut to Kendra for this information to phish the right guy and then Kendra will pay Alexia. That was the deal. Kendra is the mastermind ...there is no boss.

 

[Sadowdark]

Marvin will not use blackmail...infact Ana wanted kendra to know that she allowed Marvin to grope her...so I don't think Marvin will blackmail her....She thought Marvin is more hornier than Chris, and satisfying her sexual needs properly... obviously she allows him out of sympathy but he's satisfying her needs instead of making her to jerk him like Chris. And Ana is not ashamed of hiding that from kendra so it won't be a blackmail.

So why is the old sex offender collecting compromising material on Anna for Kendra but there is nothing stopping him from blackmailing Anna and forcing her into sex as his toy. I think it's a huge stretch that Anna would fuck the old fish out of sympathy.

 

[Couto25]

So why is the old sex offender collecting compromising material on Anna for Kendra but there is nothing stopping him from blackmailing Anna and forcing her into sex as his toy. I think it's a huge stretch that Anna would fuck the old fish out of sympathy.

Kendra needed pics as a proof to show to David that Ana cheated on him /Release Jake to Ana to get some sex. same like she try to set up alexia, She is setting up everyone with Ana Jake, Marvin, Marcel from her side because what Jake said that Ana is not easy to break and is professional ...Kendra need proof of cheating Ana..Kendra think once David will leave Ana, he wil come back to her and she will be happy forever..that's what her plan.

 

[Couto25]

We miss one thing...Marvin will get some action with Ana once she go out on drink sometime this week. So, Marvin will have sex not sure when but this week itself...Maintainence room might just be for lil tease. But as per kendra plan, Marvin will fuck her when they will go out for a drink. Maybe wednesday / Friday....Thursday Ana will probably be with Grant. So Marvin won't need to blackmail Ana.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

So why is the old sex offender collecting compromising material on Anna for Kendra but there is nothing stopping him from blackmailing Anna and forcing her into sex as his toy. I think it's a huge stretch that Anna would fuck the old fish out of sympathy.

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There is likely some sort of plot twist in store... something none of us are expecting.

Why is the blackmail theme so weak for this story?

Well what damage does such blackmail do if revealed? So Marvin gets footage of Anna with say Jake. What is the worst that it can do if that gets out? If Anna is getting railed by Jake (or even Hank), Anna likely already has one foot out of the door with her marriage. It will not cost her job unless because of the embarrassment. But she still has a law license. And we are forgetting other outside factors, like Grant. See two story plot lines can be connected.

The only way Grant can get back together with Anna is if he gives back her father's estate back to her family. Anna isn't going to let Grant get near her unless somehow, he makes right the past. So perhaps the money end is covered.

Now where blackmail would be effective is if there are serious consequences involved. Suppose Anna was caught embezzling or doing something really illegal. Let's say that happens. The other weakness of Marvin using blackmail is what hold does Kendra have over Marvin to give her that information... if anything everything Kendra hopes to accomplish is moot because Marvin will keep it all for himself. HOWEVER.... what if Marvin is able to record a conversation with Kendra, damning information, and uses those conversations on Kendra. I doubt Marvin wouldn't kick Kendra out of his bed. Well not up until she puts a bullet through his brains.

To answer the question why Marvin is spying on Anna is to perv off of it. It's for his own amusement. Now it's not always true the Enemy of my Enemy is my ally. Think 1941 Ukraine, Germany verse the Soviet Union. Pre-1940 Russia starved to death some 6 million Ukrainians... but turned out the Germans were worst. (sorry for the history lesson)