VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.5b] [Mr Palmer]

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Couto25 said:
game is discussed every week lol..and yup this can be a plot for David to catch Kendra in future....to realize that who Ana is with is actually his ex...but i think it's kendra phone..And maybe kendra will ask Ana to make social media account. We will see
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Anna has a social media account. Someone on a secret forum where members from work scour social media of girls and women for masturbation material even found pictures of Anna in a swimsuit. An old fisherman, , bragged about it to Jaek. And reminded him that as an intern he belongs to this forum, and an old fish. And asked Jaek to take secret pictures of Anna when they work together and share them with his former colleagues from the forum. Jaek refused, saying he wasn't looking for trouble.
 
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Sadowdark said:
Anna has a social media account. I think someone even found pictures of Anna in a swimsuit. An old fisherman, he bragged about it to Jake.
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that can be a link of something ...because as per original novel, David forgive Ana and both David and Ana deleted their social media account and live together ...so something might happen in there.
 
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sslovoe said:
i not read novel
just think first pic she was face drunk
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that why think maybe selfie be before
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Well as per novel David's friend craig took him to stripper club...there he saw Alexia..and that's how he caught her and know about Kendra behind all the plan. And jake and ana had sex in office and kendra recorded Ana/Jake sex on the mobile hiding inside the office and leave after getting the evidence. Just saying like in this novel maybe that's how David might know that Anna's office friend is Kendra

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And this is how it end after the forgiveness and everything...And after David forgive Ana..Anna announced second pregnancy too lol...but somehow it was David's child (maybe changed report who knows) idk what will happen in this version of the story. we will see.

So yes that's the end like this video might be leaked on adult site and david changed his and Anna's email address and everything.
 
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Well as per novel David's friend craig took him to stripper club...there he saw Alexia..and that's how he caught her. And jake and ana had sex in office and kendra recorded Ana/Jake sex on the mobile hiding inside the office and leave after getting the evidence. Just saying like in this novel maybe that's how David might know that Anna's office friend is Kendra

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And this is how it end after the forgiveness and everything...And after David forgive Ana..Anna announced second pregnancy too lol...but somehow it was David's child (maybe changed report who knows) idk what will happen in this version of the story. we will see.

So yes that's the end like this video might be leaked on adult site and david changed his and Anna's email address and everything.
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But there is no Craig character in this game and there is no taproom bar.:ROFLMAO:.Here in the game the old fish is supposed to install a camera and supposedly record Jaek and Anne having sex. For me these are the total differences between the original story and the game.
 
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Sadowdark said:
But there is no Craig character in this game and there is no taproom bar.:ROFLMAO:.Here in the game the old fish is supposed to install a camera and supposedly record Jaek and Anne having sex. For me these are the total differences between the original story and the game.
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I dont go by scene lol..Just a basic gist like scene , place etc might be different and offcourse in here MP trying to corrupt Ana in all paths...There in original novel, Ana had sex with jake at multiple places office, cabin everywhere....When David catch Alexia in strip club, she told about Kendra and that's how he came back to talk to Ana and both of them went to face Kendra. Well original novel has both Craig and Chris..Craig might be his office buddy ...havent notice name of David's business partners maybe he might be one of them. we will see how this will go on...but what I am saying is just like how the basic layout of story has been told...there was no Hank major role too in original novel. We will see.
 
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Sadowdark said:
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Buddy, you can ask the author of the original novel on which the game is partially based.
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lol i know the basic summary...when David came back to talk to Ana about Kendra after knowing her truth...He saw Ana leaving with Jake after sex when he checked the bedroom n all...so he knows that Ana cheated. Then they both went to talk to kendra. We will see how it's going to be in this VN. Kendra might have posted about office sex video but He already knew by that time that Ana cheated on him. Maybe he will see Ana with someone else like Rob or Chris this time but since David hate Jake , he might catch Jake most probably in uncertain path.

See in this VN, he might change antagonists and make it more spicier than original novel with multiple paths and story a little bit but you can get an idea on how the marriage will be saved and in corrupt path how they both will get separated. We will get to see different ways and different cheating paths but based on similar ideology. We will see how MP story will end. lol no need to ask author about anything lol.
 
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lol i know the basic summary...when David came back to talk to Ana about Kendra after knowing her truth...He saw Ana leaving with Jake after sex when he checked the bedroom n all...so he knows that Ana cheated. Then they both went to talk to kendra. We will see how it's going to be in this VN. Kendra might have posted about office sex video but He already knew by that time that Ana cheated on him. Maybe he will see Ana with someone else like Rob or Chris this time but since David hate Jake , he might catch Jake most probably in uncertain path.

See in this VN, he might change antagonists and make it more spicier than original novel with multiple paths and story a little bit but you can get an idea on how the marriage will be saved and in corrupt path how they both will get separated. We will get to see different ways and different cheating paths but based on similar ideology. We will see how MP story will end. lol no need to ask author about anything lol.
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The author would tell you that he once spoke to MP and the story will be different than in his novel.
 
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sslovoe said:
i make part for anna visiting dal and tim
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if anyone rewrite the idea make it look good
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part one fantasy anna story office part
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In this one the boobs that you've made seem better presented than the original render. Don't you feel like sometimes anna's boobs look triangular even though they're purposefully being made in that form to show that they got bigger and a bit saggier after pregnancy.. The artist is tryna make them seem natural and he succeeded in doing that for most of the scenes but there are some quite where her titties look overextended in a sharp way in both sides.. Do you agree?
 
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fapzoner69018 said:
In this one the boobs that you've made seem better presented than the original render. Don't you feel like sometimes anna's boobs look triangular even though they're purposefully being made in that form to show that they got bigger and a bit saggier after pregnancy.. The artist is tryna make them seem natural and he succeeded in doing that for most of the scenes but there are some quite where her titties look overextended in a sharp way in both sides.. Do you agree?
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yh
i do all shot one night so lot moving mistake
also some body flow in air not in floor cause bad angel you get wrong position
i try make boobs bigger with cleavage but moving body like finger and legs get wrong too
but all practice now
 
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