Marvin with such a small dick doesnt work for the erotica,,,young hot chick curious about old guy with a big dick,,,Marvin is lacking a lot
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Jake is the main character in original story..the only one who got Ana....So MP made some changes and he gave Ana to all antagonists beside Jake. And made him the dumb one.
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Yes, there was a poll where Dev asked who should get into Marvin’s pants first. You won.
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marvin in the van showed his penis to anna, she kept thinking about the tootsie roll minis. 
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Right now looks like everyone betting on Chris Marvin and Jake. One of those 3 will be the first probably
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actually, from a plot device point of view it might be best that she does... but only Timothy and Dale would work\
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It's awesome, I didn't use the tutorial mods but played it myself, played it many times and finally I got Anna to close the door and kick that bastard Chris out, I let Anna have a relationship with anyone but that bastard. Although there isn't much scene right now but I will still play like that in the future, seeing everything from that bastard Chris makes me sick
It would be moronic for it to not be Chris. He's already gotten head from her. People don't do that and then cool off for such a time that another person could realistically step in.
I'm saying that from a story perspective, not having a preference. It would be goofy ass writing to have someone get that far and clearly have the most personal relationship with her even outside of cheating and it be anyone else. It wouldn't make sense at all even in a "porn logic" sense. It would be trying to force a twist that wouldn't really fit.
Marvin, even with the handy/tit sucking, is still getting by on booze and guilting her into shit. It's not a true want on her end.
Jake is a dude she seems attracted to but he's very far behind the others at this point. Though, he would make more sense than Marvin of written in a true "one night stand" circumstance. They all go out, she gets a ride and it just happens. Her not being as close to Jake as Chris could help Jake in that instance as it could feel like less of a direct betrayal or act than Chris would feel.
But she has already jerked Chris off in a shower IN HER HOME and then sucked Chris off, again, in their home (garage/car). That line is crossed. It would be dipship AWAM logic for Anna to do that and then suddenly draw lines or boundaries, lol.
For it not to be Chris the dev would have to write him out of the story. Chris, despite never seeming him work a job (iirc) would have to suddenly be sent across the globe by his employer in order for it to make sense that anyone el see fucks her first. They're that far along, it couldn't make sense any other way.
Remove the shower and BJ scene? Up for grabs. Could be anyone. After those scenes it's pretty set in stone from the writing perspective of anyone that has any clue what they're doing.
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Although it's not my favorite and it pains me to admit it, Chris has the upper hand. Ugh, how annoying!
Chris holds most of the cards and if he plays them right he shoud be the first for Anna to drop her panties and open her legs. It wouldn't be my preference but as already has been said that at the moment thats the only way the story would make sense. Depending on the next update Hank may come into the picture, I don't think he will be the first, unless he uese drugs or alcohol, which would be weird after Anna's recent experience with Marvin. As she will be very careful you would think. Hank will be very cunning and once he understands theres a massive wedge between Anna and David he will exploit that to the maximum. (single mum importance of job/career etc). You can see him coming up fast, perhaps a longshot but he could hold some key cards.
1marvin in the van showed his penis to anna, she kept thinking about the tootsie roll minis.
I have no real preference beyond good storytelling but you seem to have a preference and I guess I should add the one detail that I forgot in my previous post.
I've been trying to cut down on the overly long posts but I'll indulge myself a tiny bit more for a second.
From first hand experience, cheating on your partner does something that you never fully understand until you cheat for the first time. You may know it's possible intellectually but you never fully appreciate it until it washes over you after you cum...and that's the fact that you just handed this person leverage on you. You handed them a rope that they can hang you with whenever they want. You handed them a loaded gun and are asking them to not shoot you. Which, of course, they will assure you they never plan to do lol.
However, people (women in my case as I'm a straight man) are people and they have wants, too. Things make them upset and in some cases they just want drama...so they'll decide to shoot you with that gun you handed them just to do it. It doesn't have to be a case of them wanting you to leave your GF/wife or the like, but it can be.
In this VN, Chris and Marvin have this leverage already. Chris has texts, racy photos and his story on what he and Anna have done already. He has evidence to back up a claim that he's been fooling around with Anna and he need not be totally honest. He could invent other events that never happened because enough did happen to make the husband believe anything he said.
Marvin? He has a photo of Anna in his vehicle with her shirt up. That's powerful leverage. The video of her changing is just a creep shot and not harmful leverage. The photo is.
They both have a nuke and it's really whoever wants to launch it first...if either do. So I guess I should have added that caveat in the above message.
If neither use this leverage, common sense and the laws of story writing dictate it will be Chris. If both are willing, it's Chris. Not even George RR Martin could pull a twist that would undo that, lol. If the dev tried it would suck and make no sense. Again, AWAM level dogshit writing logic.
However, Marvin does have a photo that if threatened to be used against her could change the math. Chris also has that and more of that leverage l but it wouldn't matter if he never uses it and Marvin would.