Couto25

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Now flip the question and ask who you wanna see Anna fuck?
Tbh at this point, I dont care who fuck Ana first...I just want somebody to fuck her so that the story can move forward...It is stuck until MP keep asking for votes from audience and all antagonist unnecessary side storyline reach upto the level of sex in every path with slow pace corruption trolling and death pace update timeline.

The question should be how David will catch Kendra. How David will know whether Ana cheated on him or not on different paths.
In Chapter 3, David has zero role in anything. Whole week he just sat at home not even trying to investigate on this matter. His only role on this VN is to piss Ana off, get jealous and hide things from her so that she can get corrupted from other people. And when she get fully corrupted, then David should fly to different city so that Ana can do sex. That's David role in Chapter 3 until his investigation story side will be shown.
 
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Tbh at this point, I dont care who fuck Ana first...I just want somebody to fuck her so that the story can move forward...It is stuck until MP keep asking for votes from audience and all antagonist unnecessary side storyline reach upto the level of sex in every path with slow pace corruption trolling and death pace update timeline.

The question should be how David will catch Kendra. How David will know whether Ana cheated on him or not on different paths.
In Chapter 3, David has zero role in anything. Whole week he just sat at home not even trying to investigate on this matter. His only role on this VN is to piss Ana off, get jealous and hide things from her so that she can get corrupted from other people. And when she get fully corrupted, then David should fly to different city so that Ana can do sex. That's David role in Chapter 3 until his investigation story side will be shown.
He's trying to do something, hire a private detective, go to the gym to get information about Alex
 

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Tbh at this point, I dont care who fuck Ana first...I just want somebody to fuck her so that the story can move forward...It is stuck until MP keep asking for votes from audience and all antagonist unnecessary side storyline reach upto the level of sex in every path with slow pace corruption trolling and death pace update timeline.

The question should be how David will catch Kendra. How David will know whether Ana cheated on him or not on different paths.
In Chapter 3, David has zero role in anything. Whole week he just sat at home not even trying to investigate on this matter. His only role on this VN is to piss Ana off, get jealous and hide things from her so that she can get corrupted from other people. And when she get fully corrupted, then David should fly to different city so that Ana can do sex. That's David role in Chapter 3 until his investigation story side will be shown.
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Couto25 my friend

I understand your position and most I think echo it, but I think we are missing a main point as to what the developer is trying to achieve. There are three primary elements behind the game that make it seem like slow burn but is actually slow roll.

First element is evolution or evolving the characters through events. From the beginning each character (that matters) started from {X} position and ever since they been evolving to positions {Y} and {Z}. All I've said just now was a word salad till I give it context. Just that starting position of happily married living the dream to... well now. Even though APM is about Anna and David there is some evolution of the other characters. Creepy Marvin was always problematic, but events have him so smitten he's now living a fiction. Grant with your standard straight forward transactional proposal has given up his dream of winning Anna for himself and wants just one night. Hank always a lecherous man of excesses making moves to further sate his appetites... etc.

Second element is built-up and anticipation. More word salad for getting the maximum buildup getting the audience drawn in deeper into the story and a critical even. So who is first does matter, but in context of the story and plot it's more important how they got there than what happens when that line is crossed. What the developer wants to do is get the audience so worked up and into the moment that when it happens it has the maximum effect.

Third is surprise. Let's face it, the developer isn't going to do anything that someone like myself is going to anticipate or guess correctly. I wouldn't put too much stock in in guessing how the back story will unfold. It's getting to endings is what your post is striking at. The whole story is about a woman already corrupt and compromised eventually giving in to who she really is, a story about a clueless husband with serious self-confidence issues, serious lapses in judgment, and poor strategic thinking skills
 

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Can someone share the link for Android with the latest update? Thanks
As you can see from the first page the Android version hasn't been update to 0.7.5B yet you'll miss sum of the latest update. Just launch the PC or Mac version with the Joiplay app
 
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A quick little story

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p.s. sorry, I forgot set Full HD resolution for renders( I upscale they later)
This is what probably might happen on Saturday storyline with Hank.... 99% probability in addition with nude ass spanking. MP will call as hot sexual action or content.
 
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There are three primary elements behind the game that make it seem like slow burn but is actually slow roll.

First element is evolution or evolving the characters through events. From the beginning each character (that matters) started from {X} position and ever since they been evolving to positions {Y} and {Z}. All I've said just now was a word salad till I give it context. Just that starting position of happily married living the dream to... well now. Even though APM is about Anna and David there is some evolution of the other characters. Creepy Marvin was always problematic, but events have him so smitten he's now living a fiction. Grant with your standard straight forward transactional proposal has given up his dream of winning Anna for himself and wants just one night. Hank always a lecherous man of excesses making moves to further sate his appetites... etc.

Second element is built-up and anticipation. More word salad for getting the maximum buildup getting the audience drawn in deeper into the story and a critical even. So who is first does matter, but in context of the story and plot it's more important how they got there than what happens when that line is crossed. What the developer wants to do is get the audience so worked up and into the moment that when it happens it has the maximum effect.

Third is surprise. Let's face it, the developer isn't going to do anything that someone like myself is going to anticipate or guess correctly. I wouldn't put too much stock in in guessing how the back story will unfold. It's getting to endings is what your post is striking at. The whole story is about a woman already corrupt and compromised eventually giving in to who she really is, a story about a clueless husband with serious self-confidence issues, serious lapses in judgment, and poor strategic thinking skills
You always write so much without actually saying anything.
The characters are fully developed, no need for more. We know them well and their personalities! Everything is at maximum for build up already. The story is stuck and hasn't progressed in 2 years!

Who has sex with Anna does not affect the plot. It can be one or all. No difference. David needs to hire the PI to find out about Alexia and Kendras scheme. Which also will be a plot device to see what Anna is up to and catch her cheating. Which will add tension to Anna's scenes if we know she can be caught. Leonard can also move the plot forward by sharing his secret with someone. Either one or both of these events must happen for the story to progress. Anna can still flirt and fuck around with this happening - This is what's frustrating. We are stuck for no reason.

Lastly making a surprise happen doesn't mean it will be good. We need something that suits the story for what has been built up before.
 
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i want see tim and dal more reason i still keep watching this game even he misses making better way with anna if she meet them in their section also wish he make teas more not suck boob
game becomes boring with repeated jake /chris /hank dev repeat meet jake for year and cold same scene over and over ,,,,
so if we can't see in-game wish you make more tim and dal side creat AI or 3d art
and you make good
 
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