I’ll explain why i wrote that about Chris’s dick!
Throughout the story, Chris boasts that he has a big dick, it’s bigger than David’s and etc. And as i gave an example in the "last update" where Chris was in the shower, seeing his penis created such an impression - the impression that he had a really big dick! But in this update in the texting with a dickpic (maybe it’s really just this angle, etc.), but it seems to me that this is its real size and for me it’s funny that this penis is called big.
But again this is my subjective opinion and the opinion of a person who is somehow connected with the topic of artistry and knows what he is talking about, because he understands this topic from the inside!
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The artistic composition of the update seems to me very good, the textures, faces, colors and environments are very well resolved. I love both the artistic aspect, and the literary aspect of the game. But I see a problem in the last update regarding ... the penises. I say this out of love and admiration for the work the artist is doing in this story. I think the penises are not well drawn and I explain myself. As for Marcel's penis it seems too smooth, I can blame that it shines to Alexia's saliva, but I look at it and it seems to me more like a penis-shaped ice lolly than a penis, textures are missing (veins, colors, shapes). As for Chris's penis it doesn't match the description of it and the image that appears on Anna's day 4 (Thursday morning) with the image Chris sends her. Thursday's image was that of a penis of about 15 cm. in a flaccid state. From the base to the middle of the thigh it can be established that it measures about 14-16 cm, far exceeding the testicular pouch. On the other hand, the one in the photo can only measure about 10-12 cm. in an erect state. Chris's hand is larger, at most the same as the penis, that is not a large penis but a normal penis; on the other hand the distance between the navel and the birth of the pubis can vary between 12 and 15 cm, and the penis does not reach from the base to the navel. The image of Chris in the picture he sends to Anna seems somewhat elongated (El Greco style, even with the beard and the look), but the penis is very small compared to the picture of day 4 and how it is described. Normally it would be about 22 or 23 cm (about 50% longer than it is flaccid) and would be above the navel. On the other hand, Chris is about 35 years old and at that age and with that size of erect penis it would normally have an inclination of about 45º or 60º, not 0º as it appears. It looks like a teenager's dick. As in the case of Marcel's penis I miss a variation in color and some vein.
