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Of course there won't be, the most you will see is her nipple.
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There are two main ways to read a novel. You can read it from beginning to end, or you can read the first chapter then skip to the last chapter and read it. When it comes to adult content, that is why there is Pornhub... instant, no real plot, no investment in the characters, just BLAM-BOOM-BANG!
But what really is good here? Neither yours or my critique of the progress of the game has any effect on Mr. Palmer's work. For my part, I'll either be totally satisfied with the results or disappointed--but that is me and the world will not come to an end either way...LOL!
For story novel there's whole bookstore too lol..this website is for bang boom bang novels that's missing blam boom bang...whole city library is filled with romantic novels all around the world and Amazon kindle too for all types of erotic and romantic stories online without blam boom bang. Lol..there are few novels on Kindle who wrote about character how they look and howz the weather of the day is for 3 pages.
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Don't forget that Sophia is acting like a stupid bimbo
. Who has amesia after every action and doesn't remember anything. He always has his memory cleared, and he always has remorse.
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One moment in the game where all the fantasies Anna might have are listed when Kendra asks her about them, such as if she likes older men, if she likes to be dominant or submissive, if she likes gangbangs and likes doing BJs. and the player can decide or not, or indifferently. There was something else, but maybe I don't remember
Hmmmmm !! Many of his old AWAM are here! And I don't know how good this is for the future of this game!! Oh my god! It's a porn game! I don't want to get old when I see the main character in action! I might die before then!
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We live in an imperfect world
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Somehow this doesn't sit well with me. Why would Anna come to Pigiwno for more money? she works in his company and gets a salary. Even out of submission, when Anna agrees to be Pigiwin's partner for 2 years, he says that he will receive double his salary.maybe to give some contract to David company...and Hank could enjoy Ana and ask some favour from her to satisfy himself and his partners. if you are single then salary feels enough for yourself but if you get some responsibility of family and child etc...all money and salary seems less.
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Your reply to the previous post....
" Blackmail in sense yes she will come to him for money...i meant submission route. If she want more money..she has to do what he want ..."
echos what I been saying which is some over simplistic plots in the game. Yes, it could be just that simple... blackmail...extortion...or in this case a forum prostitution might be the developer's intent. But there are too many hints of more complex plots...and you are right, this possible plot is pretty lame and weak
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Just read latest status update and my expectations are ginormous. That being said I have enjoyed some very nicely tailored moments in this game without epic visual scenes, just from body language, dialogue and nice atmosphere. Of course I want a treat for the eyes, but I won't complain if it's a simple text/emotion based setup that's well done. Problems start when neither of these things are met - no visuals, no atmosphere - then it's just filler no one enjoys. Hopeful and anxious, let's see what the future holds!
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But these are not my words "" Blackmail in the sense of yes, she will come to him for money... I meant the route of surrender. If she wants more money... she has to do what he wants... These are the words of colleague
Couto25
Lol I was just predicting...no matter if it's lame but this situation will fit whether you play faithful or corrupt path...no matter which path you choose, this lame reason is the only way hank route will occur. Now Ana can go via submission or as a seducer to get money from hank depending on whatever you played ana to be...Let's see how it goes. He will not create different hank story for faithful and corruption routes. It will be mostly how Ana will react on the situation when the time comes where she will knows about bankruptcy. Either be submissive or she'll become seducer
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Creates all tracks at once and works on the same renders to save time. Paths can only differ in choices or dialogues. If it goes as you say, it will be hopeless and pointless. Which means your choices didn't make any sense, which means the creator lied in every post he made here? “He said that your choices are important and you will receive a summary of them from Ch1, Ch2 to Ch3. Where there will be no more kinetic choices. I don't think he has to cheat people. It's absurd that Anna comes to Henek for money, it doesn't even fit. After all, she works in his company on the faithful path, and on the submissive path she will earn twice as much. Well, unless David goes bankrupt and she dumps him and needs the money for herself and Sophia, then I might agree to it. On the path of submission, he can receive additional compensation for pleasing Henk's friends with his submission.
What choices is pointless and hopeless??? David is Bankrupt whether you play faithful or corruption path.....so this is hopeless and pointless..robinson grope ana even when she is faithful...this is hopeless and pointless...for this thing you supported developer giving hormones excuses lol....that time all "shy ana" goes aside....so whatever you are saying is pointless. Same way hank option will be open to Ana for money whether you play faithful or corruption. Choice to reject Hank scene might be there as an option then she might talk to her uncle for money. He will not dedicate whole renders to create a different dedicated faithful path..that will be useless and waste of time especially in CH 3. He said you can avoid those scene if you dont like it..so yea in that case uncle chris or maybe David father or some other option will open for money. you got 300/400 renders per update...development of faithful path in the end make more sense avoiding all cheating scenes else if he will develop different storyline as per different characters it will become AWAM ...you see if ellie choose or reject logan...he is making 2 different updates..same way this story will update in future if she choose or reject Hank. And I literally don't think that he will dedicate his lifetime on this novel. He mentioned 2/3 years more that wil be the end of this VN
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They are so hopeless and pointless that I play on the faithful path, I rejected the pgwin Ch1.Ch2 on the corruption path, the same thing again, it would be hopeless. He is listed in the statistics as rejected. It's as if nothing has changed. And all the posts in which the creator said that this marriage could be saved and that Anna would not betray David with anyone if we chose well were one big lie? It is never stated that David is bankrupt, only that he has financial problems. The creator said that Anna could be a slut and not cheat, or she could be reluctant and cheat. He said it was up to us. He also said that if you reject Pigiwna, he will still be history and he will still pursue Anna, and she may or may not submit to him. And when the time comes, the creator will make his final choice, causing Piguin and the others to be rejected forever.
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I was using a quote you replied to
And I am in total agreement with you how lame a plot point would be if simple blackmail or extortion is used as a work around for Anna.
I personally think the developer is doing one hell of a job with his story/plot and wouldn't use blackmail or extortion motivations for Anna. Now if I was on the writing staff, my level of detail would be painfully slow in totally fleshing out Anna's character first rather than the developer's route as explaining as he goes. Both are affective writing strategies, but in the world of adult games, my approach falls short because of the impatience of players for new content. So I would have had to been writing and taken half a year before even unveiling the game to overcome that short fall.
However, like you and the rest of the people here, I get to sit back speculate, theorize, and indulge in this work. I have said it before, but the developer can take this story (game) in so many directions and down so many paths that its totally entertaining.
Its way, WAY, too soon but once this version of the game is 80% done, Mr. Palmer ought to spin-off this game with other writers and artist under his direction into other versions. BUT... not as terrible as the spin-offs of AWAM are! Few works are out there that could support re-makes, different versions, and re-casts-- this one has that kind of flexibility
I dont know dude ...First of all you are playing that has corruption and netorare tag game...and then you demand he story should be everywhere else beside this...Like you want all options of corruption and netorare and cheating route to be eliminated from the VN and want pure romantic VN. I can understand you are playing all options to be faithful and remove all CHris hank marvin jake etc all possible corruption route. And want the developer to build a solid romantic route if you stay faithful.
I will say think about it what VN you wanna play once again...Fine from the developer end he told that this game will have NTR if anyone doesnt like it, they should not play...He do gave option to skip scenes with whoever you don't like.
Then in final you judge this game on basis of faithful route and not as a corruption and netorare story...thats double standrd dude. You entered the VN novel knowing that it will be NTR/cheating game then you judge the game based on why it is not faithful and want developer to keep an option open to remove Ana's affair on all corruption path whether it's chris/hank/marvin or whatevr it is...i will say its wrong genre you are playing then. There are romantic route games where no matter what the MC will not cheat. But after entering cheating routes games, and demanding the developer should make faithful routes is unfair or judge the developer that they forced the cheating on MC by poor writing skills or creating unavoidable scene is unfair. This one just said that yes you can avoid scenes like in the upcoming update you will be able to avoid Chris if you rejected him before. That means you will not see extra contents of what he has developed...same way you will be able to avoid all characters contents. if you have rejected their moves previously but thats all developer can do from his side then maybe a different ending where you might have rejeted all charaters...but thats in the end, you cannot avoid the situation to happen no matter which path you are playing....like Chris will be in this update...situation will be there....but as faithful path, you will avoid those contents and the game will end. You missed all dialogue on what Ana has become after slow corruption on path 1/2 and wanted Ana to be same as the first scene of part 1 as faithful and dedicated towards family. And wanna say no to all paths and characters moves towards ana. I can only say you are ether playing wrong game or you wanna avoid developer build only on the basis of faithful routes irrespective of how much he's putting efforts to show sex via slow corruption. I mean he made corrupt route fans wait for 2 years even in full corruption path without showing nudity. and saying sex is too soon after 2.5 years from this story is unfair just because you only stick to faithful route. Ana is getting corrupted but you havent played and saw small dialogues change and her thinking change over those 2 years of time.
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Again, Friend, you don't understand me, if the Creator talked about it in so many posts and said that it is possible to save a marriage without cheating and thanks to the choices we made at the beginning, why would he suddenly change it? would then become unreliable. Besides, the path of faithfulness interests me more at this moment than the path of corruption resulting from this conspiracy, and seeing the faces of sexual predators who have nothing left is sweet to my heart. My playstyle is that if I can, I always play the games on this site first, on the Faithful path, and then on the Corruption path. I interpret the creator's words as a path of loyalty/corruption, because on this path Anna can also betray David reluctantly. Or not, it depends on the player. Don't tell me I don't want sex in this game or anything. The creator should have shown David and Anna having naked sex in the previous chapters. But he didn't, it would have given us a taste of what the game's sex scenes would be like.