4.10 star(s) 111 Votes

rangabang

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There's almost as much lewd featuring Laura in these updates despite this supposedly being Aya's route, as if Laura didn't got enough screen time in the ten previous paths where she's the main. At this point I literally just hold ctrl whenever her perspective plays.

Though at least the bits between Aya and mr chad were more fappable this update. I actually like that Luca seems into her and there's a slight power dynamic going on. With Laura I always felt his behavior was overly detached and mechanical. Like he was some robot designed to act cool and make women squirt, without getting into it himself. Him being so above it all (a borderline comical projection of how a smooth guy approaches sex) makes the scenes less hot, since the guy actually lusting for the other's wife is part of what makes ntr hot.
This may be Aya's route, but it's still in Laura's path.
Aya's path is coming later
 

metagrossrj

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Jun 2, 2023
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Still curious about what Laura's motive was to tell Harry to go on a date with Aya. What's her intention? I don't really get it.
 

Animefan_09

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Sep 13, 2017
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Came back to see how the thread was going, and damn. The number of hurt feelings here is just off the chart. Please, guys, stop talking about my game like that, you're going to make me blush.

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Quick question but when will the current route/path/ending/etc be finished? I am waiting to play it all in 1 go (the current Aya route/path i mean)
 

molitar

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Sep 22, 2016
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This game is shit!

It's a damn kinetic novel no choices and you can see that after he pulled the shit with the USB stick that she is now being blackmailed! MC is a fucking idiot not to see it! It's so fucking obvious that it is horribly written I could not stand to read this kinetic novel anymore and deleted.

1. NTR is handled awfully
2. MC is a fucking idiot moron that has no redeeming qualities (supposed to be in IT but has the brain of a peon! Insult to my profession! Never seen anyone in IT with no brains like this IDIOT!)
3. Game Play: 1/5 (there is none it's a damn kinetic novel! without proper tag!)
4. Sound: 3/5
5. Art: 4/5 (it has animation only thing redeemable for this KN)

Rating: 2/5

Dev I'm insulted you insulted my profession like this! IT people think logically and we think linearly so we can see when something does not make sense! Point A leads to Point B NOT A to C! I have worked in IT for decades now and I have NEVER seen anyone in IT that can't figure out something is wrong! We do not think like a random abstract thinking so just as I figured it out that he was blackmailing her the moment she started acting strange after she asked about the USB! So would ANYONE in IT! I'm so disgusted by how the developer insulted a profession where intelligence and problem solving are the TWO MAIN aspects for this position and than make an MC that can't do problem solving in IT! We have to figure out the problem by users description EVERY DAY! THIS KINETIC NOVEL IS INSULTING!
 

desmosome

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Sep 5, 2018
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This game is shit!

It's a damn kinetic novel no choices and you can see that after he pulled the shit with the USB stick that she is now being blackmailed! MC is a fucking idiot not to see it! It's so fucking obvious that it is horribly written I could not stand to read this kinetic novel anymore and deleted.

1. NTR is handled awfully
2. MC is a fucking idiot moron that has no redeeming qualities (supposed to be in IT but has the brain of a peon! Insult to my profession! Never seen anyone in IT with no brains like this IDIOT!)
3. Game Play: 1/5 (there is none it's a damn kinetic novel! without proper tag!)
4. Sound: 3/5
5. Art: 4/5 (it has animation only thing redeemable for this KN)

Rating: 2/5

Dev I'm insulted you insulted my profession like this! IT people think logically and we think linearly so we can see when something does not make sense! Point A leads to Point B NOT A to C! I have worked in IT for decades now and I have NEVER seen anyone in IT that can't figure out something is wrong! We do not think like a random abstract thinking so just as I figured it out that he was blackmailing her the moment she started acting strange after she asked about the USB! So would ANYONE in IT! I'm so disgusted by how the developer insulted a profession where intelligence and problem solving are the TWO MAIN aspects for this position and than make an MC that can't do problem solving in IT! We have to figure out the problem by users description EVERY DAY! THIS KINETIC NOVEL IS INSULTING!
Wow, your big IT brain must have been working overtime to figure out that this story starts with blackmail. It must have required insane deductive powers because it was totally supposed to be a mystery to the readers. NOT.

The readers and the characters have different information because the readers have meta knowledge of the genre tropes, of the character archetypes, the usual story beats, and the intended character arcs. Not to mention the narrative intent behind the whole set up wasn't anything close to a mystery. That's giving you the benefit of doubt and assuming you played this on Harry only POV. If you played with omniscient POV, your post is even more laughable.

I guess your IT brain isn't quite as capable of empathy or imagining how a different person could react to the same situations, because Harry had no reason to doubt anything Laura says at that point their relationship.

Plus, why are you speaking on behalf of every IT person lol. Your post doesn't paint "IT people" in a very positive light, nor does it come off as intelligent or logical. If I was a fellow IT person, I would disown you.

Edit: Damn, I'm trying not to be a dick these days, but the bait was strong with this one.
 

ZUBiDAM

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Apr 6, 2022
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isn't harry an app developer?
it's sad to know this fictional story is insulting and hurtful for IT guys:cry:
how could the developer not notice?!? he probably isn't an IT guy.
 

Necronomicon82

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Apr 1, 2020
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This game is shit!

It's a damn kinetic novel no choices and you can see that after he pulled the shit with the USB stick that she is now being blackmailed! MC is a fucking idiot not to see it! It's so fucking obvious that it is horribly written I could not stand to read this kinetic novel anymore and deleted.

1. NTR is handled awfully
2. MC is a fucking idiot moron that has no redeeming qualities (supposed to be in IT but has the brain of a peon! Insult to my profession! Never seen anyone in IT with no brains like this IDIOT!)
3. Game Play: 1/5 (there is none it's a damn kinetic novel! without proper tag!)
4. Sound: 3/5
5. Art: 4/5 (it has animation only thing redeemable for this KN)

Rating: 2/5

Dev I'm insulted you insulted my profession like this! IT people think logically and we think linearly so we can see when something does not make sense! Point A leads to Point B NOT A to C! I have worked in IT for decades now and I have NEVER seen anyone in IT that can't figure out something is wrong! We do not think like a random abstract thinking so just as I figured it out that he was blackmailing her the moment she started acting strange after she asked about the USB! So would ANYONE in IT! I'm so disgusted by how the developer insulted a profession where intelligence and problem solving are the TWO MAIN aspects for this position and than make an MC that can't do problem solving in IT! We have to figure out the problem by users description EVERY DAY! THIS KINETIC NOVEL IS INSULTING!

So in another word you're a troll? I looked at your profile and at your posts and all you do is call games shit. I guess its your way to get attention? Its ok buddy, just be yourself and some people might still like you. No need to call everything shit just for attention.
 
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gargamel44

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Bruh, why did you delete my messages lmao. What trolling was there, I already explained my point, and you didn't delete the dev's message who is the one actually trolling. Don't use bias to moderate, mates.
 
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gargamel44

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May 11, 2023
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This game is shit!

It's a damn kinetic novel no choices and you can see that after he pulled the shit with the USB stick that she is now being blackmailed! MC is a fucking idiot not to see it! It's so fucking obvious that it is horribly written I could not stand to read this kinetic novel anymore and deleted.

1. NTR is handled awfully
2. MC is a fucking idiot moron that has no redeeming qualities (supposed to be in IT but has the brain of a peon! Insult to my profession! Never seen anyone in IT with no brains like this IDIOT!)
3. Game Play: 1/5 (there is none it's a damn kinetic novel! without proper tag!)
4. Sound: 3/5
5. Art: 4/5 (it has animation only thing redeemable for this KN)

Rating: 2/5

Dev I'm insulted you insulted my profession like this! IT people think logically and we think linearly so we can see when something does not make sense! Point A leads to Point B NOT A to C! I have worked in IT for decades now and I have NEVER seen anyone in IT that can't figure out something is wrong! We do not think like a random abstract thinking so just as I figured it out that he was blackmailing her the moment she started acting strange after she asked about the USB! So would ANYONE in IT! I'm so disgusted by how the developer insulted a profession where intelligence and problem solving are the TWO MAIN aspects for this position and than make an MC that can't do problem solving in IT! We have to figure out the problem by users description EVERY DAY! THIS KINETIC NOVEL IS INSULTING!
Your whole account is a shitshow and I'm laughing my ass off lmao. Keep up with the great work :KEK:
 

NewTricks

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Nov 1, 2017
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This game is shit!

It's a damn kinetic novel no choices and you can see that after he pulled the shit with the USB stick that she is now being blackmailed! MC is a fucking idiot not to see it! It's so fucking obvious that it is horribly written I could not stand to read this kinetic novel anymore and deleted.

1. NTR is handled awfully
2. MC is a fucking idiot moron that has no redeeming qualities (supposed to be in IT but has the brain of a peon! Insult to my profession! Never seen anyone in IT with no brains like this IDIOT!)
3. Game Play: 1/5 (there is none it's a damn kinetic novel! without proper tag!)
4. Sound: 3/5
5. Art: 4/5 (it has animation only thing redeemable for this KN)

Rating: 2/5

Dev I'm insulted you insulted my profession like this! IT people think logically and we think linearly so we can see when something does not make sense! Point A leads to Point B NOT A to C! I have worked in IT for decades now and I have NEVER seen anyone in IT that can't figure out something is wrong! We do not think like a random abstract thinking so just as I figured it out that he was blackmailing her the moment she started acting strange after she asked about the USB! So would ANYONE in IT! I'm so disgusted by how the developer insulted a profession where intelligence and problem solving are the TWO MAIN aspects for this position and than make an MC that can't do problem solving in IT! We have to figure out the problem by users description EVERY DAY! THIS KINETIC NOVEL IS INSULTING!
Just a thought, but perhaps you should put your scathing review... you know... in the reviews and leave the thread for more constructive discussion, flame wars, and spicy memes as god intended.
 
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Samuraibear

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Jun 20, 2019
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my god the pseudo analysis of everyone character this update is funny. I honestly had no interest in following this story after aya rape scene and still don't. But damn everyone going on how harry sucks or where the fuck are they going with his character. Is honestly more interesting than the story it self.
 
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