VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

[kaminoz]

ill be honest, the dialogue during the sex scenes is getting pretty boring, specially since it feels like ive read it a thousand times before. usally NTR avoids that problem by changing it a bit or making the FMC have more personality other than hiding her true self.
As for the rest, harry is kind of dumb, but nothing new in the genre. the other characters are ok nothing amazing but they are fine, im just hoping the endings we get arent as abrupt as the last game, im hoping for each ending to have a proper development.
Harry really needs more of a personality, at this point he is just generic NTR MC who is dense as fuck, there are moments where he seems to have more than one neuron, but those are few. compared to the last MC he is pretty boring, i dont really care for the characters specially harry like i did with the mc of the last game.
i hope we get more out of the characters, they are really one dimensional right now, which is a shame since the characters have potential, except for luka who is a generic chad but he isnt even at the level of the ugly bastards and same tan guys in hentai and eroges.

 

[Animefan_09]

I dissagree a little to the above, Harry does have personality, hell he is getting suspicious but the scenario is so unrealistic in his mind that he does have reason to feel conflicted about the whole thing, that and its pretty clear he has some trauma (not only about how he avoids talking about what happened but is obvious that the whole thing of proving himself worthy of Laura is partly due to that i think).

Btw i mean unrealistic from his perspective, he knows Laura is a strong woman, and even if he think the other guy has grown up past his worst traits he still knows Laura doesn't like him, if he received some clue that Laura's weak spot is him he would act to stop the whole thing.

 

[cleanfeel]

Ugghh, I'm a bit disappointed with Harry this update.
Laura being pounded out loud on the phone and... "sure, must be kids with fireworks".
C'mon Harry, you're better than the average oblivious cuck.

Sadly, this troupe of having cuck sex while hubby is on phone is so popular. Or the "behind curtain" variation. Or "behind kitchen counter" variation.

It just doesn't work for penetrative sex, unless you go super slow and not knock the phone out of her hands every time you thrust. The blowjob one might work, but if the guy hears "gluck gluck gluck" while he's talking that's kinda retarded because every dude who has ever been on the internet knows about throat fucking.

This kind of "hidden" sex only works up to being fingered, being played with using a vibrator (which, is almost 10x as pleasurable to whatever you can ever do with your hands and cock lets be real), and maybe anal plug / beads play.

There was some real "real book with vibe in pussy" porn videos that were popular a while ago. Super hot. You can kinda just that as a reference to how women talk while on the edge of orgasm. I also agree I expect more from the developer. Use that big brain of yours and write believable blackmail instead of following these shitty troupe that don't work.

 

[mzer0]

Sadly, this troupe of having cuck sex while hubby is on phone is so popular. Or the "behind curtain" variation. Or "behind kitchen counter" variation...It just doesn't work for penetrative sex

So, I write too (Not shilling my shit, btw ), and I believe the 'Hush Game' (penetrative sex while on the phone) can work depending on how it is approached.

For example, I wrote a story a while ago where I had a husband call his wife while she was out having lunch with a mutual friend. Of course, in reality, the two were actually in the middle of fucking when the husband called them.

When the wife answered the phone, she was moaning and groaning as the mutual friend's cock slid in and out of her ass. When the husband asked her why she sounded like that, I had her play it off by claiming that she was in the bathroom on the toilet because the food was off. That way the friend was free to keep fucking her ass during the phone call without arousing the husband's suspicions, even though his wife was moaning right in his ear.

FWIW, I don't think the phone call between Harry and Laura was that bad. Though I do think it could have been a little less obvious.

 

[wiseold6996]

I don't understand some people playing a cuck game and wanting a happy ending for the cuck. Weird af probably same type of people who go to harem game threads and demand sharing and ntr

 

[Jeepster]

I'm still lost in where Luca has so much time to spend with Laura? So the MC eithier has a small pecker or there just blind or stupid The next update someone needs to catch them in the act, maybe someone new or Laura pops over the house unexpectedly. The constant sex is like rince repeat but nobody gets caught even tho there are less than 10 feet away a couple times. Harry doesn't act like a boyfriend but more like a brother, couples that date normal have the same hotel room and act accordingly. While there having Phone sex, honey is that the same moaning you do when we have sex, just a bit lower??? Oh come on... If the guy is the stupid as your playing him off to be, guess this is a story of Ignorance. OMG the picture on my phone of the girl giving a blowjob has my girlfriends necklace?? No every girl has that same one

 

[Animefan_09]

Sadly, this troupe of having cuck sex while hubby is on phone is so popular. Or the "behind curtain" variation. Or "behind kitchen counter" variation.

I actually like them even if most are pretty unrealistic, can you give me some example of "behind kitchen counter" stuff? I think i remember 2 games liekt hat (one beign this dev previous game) but like i said i like them so if you can give me some to look up i would be thankfull

PS:manga and doujins work too,.

 

[criestoomuch]

I don't understand some people playing a cuck game and wanting a happy ending for the cuck. Weird af probably same type of people who go to harem game threads and demand sharing and ntr

If there's no way of winning then, there's nothing to lose. And I think that's what the more hardcore NTR fans want.

 

[NTRamzng]

I really like the scene when they call even though it's a bit painful but I really like it, I hope later for the next update I can see them doing sex behind the curtain or door and also I want to see them have sex without a condom or raw sex, I also hope at the first ending we can see Aya having sex with Luca or threesome with Laura and while they were having sex Harry saw or peek the three of them having sex, that's what I love about the mystery game NTR...

 

[Animefan_09]

If there's no way of winning then, there's nothing to lose. And I think that's what the more hardcore NTR fans want.

Another option is showing the situation before any ntr happens, that way you feel the fall and corruption, although sometiems it can get pretty long like in games like Gatenkei or Triangle Blue

 

[Twelvemonkey]

What kind of life do you live that harry felt real? I have never have seen such a pathetic guy in my life.

I don't think you understand me, i wasn't talking about how harry felt real. What Harry felt real? I don't even understand your english...
I was talking about of how an ntr games can give you some real lifelike emotions unlike harem games which felt fake.

 

[Sahady]

I really like the scene when they call even though it's a bit painful but I really like it, I hope later for the next update I can see them doing sex behind the curtain or door and also I want to see them have sex without a condom or raw sex, I also hope at the first ending we can see Aya having sex with Luca or threesome with Laura and while they were having sex Harry saw or peek the three of them having sex, that's what I love about the mystery game NTR...

I loved that scene too, as well as the bathroom stall scene on the date

 

[leking7168]

This games reminds me of Japanese NTR VN games I used to play.

 

[matsuy]

Sooo, 5 endings huh
I imagine something like:
1 - (Bad end) Harry completely broken and in despair. Luca takes all the girls (HC true ending)
2 - (Bad end) Harry's revenge. He breaks down mentally but brings along Luca, Laura and Aya. I don't know how but they will also suffer. More than Harry (the perfect ending imao).
3 - (Neutral ending) Harry is disappointed but not broken. He leaves. Laura, Luca and Aya move on with their lives. (nobody wins in the end)
4 - (good ending) Harry saves Laura. Luca arrested (or killed ) and Aya can go fuck herself.
5 - (good ending???) Harry and Aya ending

The game is good. Well made. HC deserves some rest. Also, Hangover Cat >>>>>>> Blue Cat

The "best" ending (from Harry's POV) I'd expect to see in this game is some kind of "ignorance is bliss" ending (à la turning into a stay-at-home-daddy, unkowingly raising Luca's offspring) ...all other endings will probably be even less in favor of our poor main protagonist.

 

[Rugerrell6]

I'm still lost in where Luca has so much time to spend with Laura? So the MC eithier has a small pecker or there just blind or stupid The next update someone needs to catch them in the act, maybe someone new or Laura pops over the house unexpectedly. The constant sex is like rince repeat but nobody gets caught even tho there are less than 10 feet away a couple times. Harry doesn't act like a boyfriend but more like a brother, couples that date normal have the same hotel room and act accordingly. While there having Phone sex, honey is that the same moaning you do when we have sex, just a bit lower??? Oh come on... If the guy is the stupid as your playing him off to be, guess this is a story of Ignorance. OMG the picture on my phone of the girl giving a blowjob has my girlfriends necklace?? No every girl has that same one

Well to be fair that picture thing is def iffy most people would be able to recognize their girlfriend in a picture face covered or not but he also cant see the entire necklace the key part is offscreen. But the reason he is ignoring the signs is because he trusts Laura enough to believe she wouldn't cheat. He convinces himself he knows Laura better then he actually does and brushes his thoughts off as paranoia. And he also knows she hates Luca. So I would say the story justifies the ignorance of the signs of cheating pretty well. The phone thing is kinda iffy as well because I dont think people could confuse the sound of cheeks clapping with anything else lol.

 

[Dinotech]

save file?

 

[Brazilian Engrish]

The "best" ending (from Harry's POV) I'd expect to see in this game is some kind of "ignorance is bliss" ending (à la turning into a stay-at-home-daddy, unkowingly raising Luca's offspring) ...all other endings will probably be even less in favor of our poor main protagonist.

Despite considering it, I also don't think it will have an entirely good ending with Laura pretending nothing happened. She can't go back from the pleasure. So this oblivious ending isnt absurd.

I will not be hypocritical. I'm on a pirate porn site for a reason. But this particular game I don't even care about the porn part anymore. I just want to see how this story ends (good writes make this). I also know that HC will write whatever he wants and is comfortable with. But if this the best ending for Harry (taking care of Luca offspring) then I would stick with the payback one. They may fuck you, but retribution always comes. And comes hard (I would also like to see the HC writing for a bad/vengeful Harry).

Harry is a really good guy, but remember, It only takes one bad day for a good man to go crazy. (sorry. couldn't resist)

 

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Prompted into action by the promise he made to his girlfriend a year ago, Harry finally made a huge breakthrough in his quest for success by scoring a major deal for his company, in doing so setting into motion his inevitable promotion. But what he didn’t foresee is that the byproduct of his unshakable resolve would unintentionally invite an undesirable presence into his life. The representative of the subcontracting company—his old bully from high school.​

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Prompted into action by the promise he made to his girlfriend a year ago, Harry finally made a huge breakthrough in his quest for success by scoring a major deal for his company, in doing so setting into motion his inevitable promotion. But what he didn’t foresee is that the byproduct of his unshakable resolve would unintentionally invite an undesirable presence into his life. The representative of the subcontracting company—his old bully from high school.​

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Average, it just not for me though because of the story, but if your a ntr type of guy i recommend it
Story:good
Art:good
This is my review:3/5 average

 

[Animefan_09]

The "best" ending (from Harry's POV) I'd expect to see in this game is some kind of "ignorance is bliss" ending (à la turning into a stay-at-home-daddy, unkowingly raising Luca's offspring) ...all other endings will probably be even less in favor of our poor main protagonist.

Hell yes, i want an ending like this, the raising part is called brood parasitism and is hot in ntr, but in general i just call the whole plot like that false happy ending,

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is exactly like that and if you like stories with that ending i totally reccomend it

 

[Twelvemonkey]

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