VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus Scenes S2 7-8] [Hangover Cat Purrroduction]

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MasksDude

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after playing the new patch, Ive been a big fan of the NTR but fxck man.. Harry needs to get his piece in later versions. he can fxck Aya's nuts out without Laura knowing.

I've actually hated Laura this patch, she's degrading him so much. I want Harry too to get his piece of sex. or fxck one of Luca's girlfriend or his mom that would be the perfect ending lmao..I think thatd fit for the Hero version lmfao

cause it's actually sad seeing Harry this patch.
his also pretty attractive too and man is getting NTR'd nah nah nah
 

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Wondering about this as well. I don't remember either Luca or Laura saying anything about setting Harry up in this update. I think that other poster was just making assumptions.

Maya is a good possibility. I also like it because her feeling remorseful would give weight to my theory that Harry's good ending is going to be facilitated by her :p.


However, the other possibility is that it had nothing to do with Laura and Luca at all. What if it was...

Aya.

I know she was portrayed as an inept coder most of the time, but what if that was all an act? What if she was actually a genius pretending to be dumb so that no one would suspect her of anything while she quietly sabotaged the project? Also, the 'Sorry' message would make a lot more sense if it was coming from her as she would be apologizing to the entire team rather than just Harry.


Anyway. Just a theory.

Also this art:

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...is so weird looking. Luckily. it was a short, meaningless scene. Was this drawn by the new guy HC got?
 
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SpecterX

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after playing the new patch, Ive been a big fan of the NTR but fxck man.. Harry needs to get his piece in later versions. he can fxck Aya's nuts out without Laura knowing.

I've actually hated Laura this patch, she's degrading him so much. I want Harry too to get his piece of sex. or fxck one of Luca's girlfriend or his mom that would be the perfect ending lmao..I think thatd fit for the Hero version lmfao

cause it's actually sad seeing Harry this patch.
his also pretty attractive too and man is getting NTR'd nah nah nah
While I agree with you, I think HC said Harry gonna have only 1/2 good ending so you shouldn't expect some revenge arc for him. But you should expect more humiliation later :HideThePain:
 
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Shatteredstar

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I knew HC would write one like this, after playing 'The Edge of.' Laura became comically evil and cruel to Harry, in the family route. To the point of why the heck did she defend him? Why did she try to build a life with him? I understand the narrative objective of this route is to get Harry to unknowingly raise Luca's kids.

However, Laura somehow, with comical levels of evil, devoid of all love she has for him, over a sex game with Luca's big penis, wreaks everything in Harry's life; his love life, his marriage, his family, possibly criminally sinks the company he works for, gets him a new doomed job under clearly sick Luca has his plaything, tricks him into drinking Luca's semen mixed coffee everyday, all the while planing to tell Harry his kids are not 'his' when they hit 20 years old. Lying to her children and Harry for all those years, just because it gets her vagina wet to cruelly ruin his life?

That's the weakest, most quick fix, forced, porn game writing I've read in this game. That's not even close to the quality of the believable start of the blackmail story. A wildly more logical ending would be, Laura births a few of Luca's children, then runs off with him leaving Harry to take care of his 'family.' Maybe Harry finds a AV staring Laura later as a big finish letting him know the truth, or something to that effect.

The normal future ending is far superior, Laura just gets taken, then moves on. Even if it still had to hit the very flashy 'cheating video' big reveal check box. Not that it's bad, there has to be something big at the end, it is a porn game after all. The animation added to the older scene in this update is great. Though I still don't understand why there wasn't a CG for Aya topless once she was drugged.

Please note, I intended this to be constructive feedback and put way more work into it than I should have.

Edit: forgot to add that she tricked Harry into drinking semen, grammar
 
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I don't know about you, but I want to see a unique corruption route of Aya, secretly having sex with Lucca just like Laura did, we'll be seeing that in the near future right?
 

Shatteredstar

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I think I know why Laura has become so cruel and evil. We have met her mother, but we haven't met her father yet. But based on this art there is only one person her father could be... her dad was Voldemort!

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'I want to see the light leave your eyes!'

Would make sense. Laura is using her body, her years that could be used to build a family, her womb, her time on earth to willingly destroy a oblivious Harry. He had no chance to react in any way to her struggle with Luca. She hates him for what? She did everything on her own with zero input from Harry on the matter of the sex game with Luca. She has thoroughly destroyed Harry, who she loved, for not knowing what she wont tell him. Hates him for somehow being weak for getting caught unknowingly, in Luca's blackmail trap, or for not being able to bring her to a orgasm after she blew out her vagina. If she ever had hint of love for him at any point in time, she couldn't go 'this' far to harm Harry so completely. She lacks Harry's reaction to the whole mess as a reason for this profound, intense hatred she has for him. It's all, everything, in her head and her reaction doesn't make sense.

Maybe I'm missing something. As is, all I see, is a comically evil, non-homicidal Voldermort level villain.
 

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Wondering about this as well. I don't remember either Luca or Laura saying anything about setting Harry up in this update. I think that other poster was just making assumptions.

Maya is a good possibility. I also like it because her feeling remorseful would give weight to my theory that Harry's good ending is going to be facilitated by her :p.


However, the other possibility is that it had nothing to do with Laura and Luca at all. What if it was...

Aya.

I know she was portrayed as an inept coder most of the time, but what if that was all an act? What if she was actually a genius pretending to be dumb so that no one would suspect her of anything while she quietly sabotaged the project? Also, the 'Sorry' message would make a lot more sense if it was coming from her as she would be apologizing to the entire team rather than just Harry.


Anyway. Just a theory.

Also this art:

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...is so weird looking. Luckily. it was a short, meaningless scene. Was this drawn by the new guy HC got?
Damn looks way off than usual. HC said one of artist kinda left last second without warning so I assume this was like the consequences of meeting deadlines but he said he found a new artist but haven’t shown his art yet
 

Terix3

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The way I see it, corruption happens when foreign ideas are introduced to the target's mind. Ideas that they would never have thought on their own.

Consider the following two kinds of married women as an example (two extremes to keep things simple):

A) An innocent, happy housewife who's only sexual experience has been with her husband.
B) A former prostitute who has cheated on all of her exes, but is now struggling to be a good and faithful wife by fighting against her old habits.

The lack of sexual experience and marital happiness of woman 'A' makes her corruptible because, in order for her to betray her husband, she would have to start thinking in a way that is alien to her.

However, woman 'B' is less corruptible because those ideas are already inside her. There is very little to corrupt other than the ideas that are making her want to be faithful to her husband. After those are gone, she'll do the rest by herself because it's her true nature.

Really, corruption is the process of transforming something that was once clean and pure into something dirty. Woman 'A' is pure, so the process of getting her to cheat on her husband is going to require A LOT of work. However, woman 'B' is already dirty. Comparably, very little work is needed to get her to cheat because it's already a part of who she is.

How can you call it corruption when the target is already dirty to begin with?

Again, this is just the way I see it.
Corruption is a fall of morals, one is willing to do things that are morally worse then what there were ok with before.

A simple example can be use of curses / bad language. Going from person that didn't curse to using them publicly is a clear degeneration of morals.

It is corruption if :

1) One doesn't know curse words to begin with.

2) One knows bad language but doesn't use it.

3) One knows bad language, maybe curses in thoughts or privately but never publicly.

Do you think it can be called corruption only in case 1 ? I think in all 3 cases using bad language publicly would be a sign of moral degradation. Obviously starting from 0 rather than 10 on the scale makes the corruption more pronounced, more visible but that is about it.

Do you think that not experiencing a temptation makes one pure? In your example corrupting a prostitute that has already itemized sex might be way harder than pure housewife that had no way of knowing how good is their sex. Not knowing she has a weakness for bigger dick doesn't mean she has none. For one to prioritize own pleasure over the well being of others she needs to have the seed in her already - in that light both prostitute and housewife are equal. Also you could say that a corruptable character is not truly pure because there exist one that is purer (one that can't be corrupted)

Another aspect of it is why did the woman become prostitute? Is a person that turned to prostitution to support her loved one morally worse than one happily sitting in house being supported by her husband?

The aspect of ex-cheater trying to be faithful is not really a corruption case but a failed redemption. It doesn't really sound like good comparison to Laura case. Laura has rough background (i hope we can explore it better in another route) - her mother is prostitute and her father got destroyed by her. She blames mother for losing herself in sex (speculating we don't know what really caused her prostitution and downfall ) and is afraid of her losing herself in it as well. She loves her father but also sees his weakness - presumably would he be stronger he could have saved their family. That creates the dynamic in her where she hates weakness but also hates herself for ever thinking that way.
 
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Terix3

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I knew HC would write one like this, after playing 'The Edge of.' Laura became comically evil and cruel to Harry, in the family route. To the point of why the heck did she defend him? Why did she try to build a life with him? I understand the narrative objective of this route is to get Harry to unknowingly raise Luca's kids.

However, Laura somehow, with comical levels of evil, devoid of all love she has for him, over a sex game with Luca's big penis, wreaks everything in Harry's life; his love life, his marriage, his family, possibly criminally sinks the company he works for, gets him a new doomed job under clearly sick Luca has his plaything, tricks him into drinking Luca's semen mixed coffee everyday, all the while planing to tell Harry his kids are not 'his' when they hit 20 years old. Lying to her children and Harry for all those years, just because it gets her vagina wet to cruelly ruin his life?

That's the weakest, most quick fix, forced, porn game writing I've read in this game. That's not even close to the quality of the believable start of the blackmail story. A wildly more logical ending would be, Laura births a few of Luca's children, then runs off with him leaving Harry to take care of his 'family.' Maybe Harry finds a AV staring Laura later as a big finish letting him know the truth, or something to that effect.

The normal future ending is far superior, Laura just gets taken, then moves on. Even if it still had to hit the very flashy 'cheating video' big reveal check box. Not that it's bad, there has to be something big at the end, it is a porn game after all. The animation added to the older scene in this update is great. Though I still don't understand why there wasn't a CG for Aya topless once she was drugged.

Please note, I intended this to be constructive feedback and put way more work into it than I should have.

Edit: forgot to add that she tricked Harry into drinking semen, grammar
Do you even like NTR? What do you like in it ? what is your favorite? What you are complaining about is essentially what many look for in NTR - the humiliation of husband, the fall of the girl willing to just about do anything for bigger dick.

As people are expecting those NTR tropes HC simply has far less freedom in writing then he had when building up the story. So it may feel forced because it probably is.

'I want to see the light leave your eyes!'

Would make sense. Laura is using her body, her years that could be used to build a family, her womb, her time on earth to willingly destroy a oblivious Harry. He had no chance to react in any way to her struggle with Luca. She hates him for what? She did everything on her own with zero input from Harry on the matter of the sex game with Luca. She has thoroughly destroyed Harry, who she loved, for not knowing what she wont tell him. Hates him for somehow being weak for getting caught unknowingly, in Luca's blackmail trap, or for not being able to bring her to a orgasm after she blew out her vagina. If she ever had hint of love for him at any point in time, she couldn't go 'this' far to harm Harry so completely. She lacks Harry's reaction to the whole mess as a reason for this profound, intense hatred she has for him. It's all, everything, in her head and her reaction doesn't make sense.

Maybe I'm missing something. As is, all I see, is a comically evil, non-homicidal Voldermort level villain.
Wouldn't it be more important to ask why Luca hates Harry ? isn't he the real comical evil ?

Laura hates Harry as result of two things interjecting - the training he received from Luca training her to put the blame on what is happening to her on Harry and feeding into her darknes. Second is her childhood trauma - her mother prostitute destroyed her father and presumably their family life. But at this same time it was her father being weak that he could not stand up for himself, for the family and couldn't stop it. That leads her to having certain level of animosity towards weak people, it is her darkness.


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It wasn't virus, it was loophole in the code. How would Maya have access to the files? I don't think Luca has access either.
Laura was corrupted then, the scene in Karaoke is still during the app development. It is rather easy to imagine that Luca forced her to put that in there via rule. Also Laura knew what was the problem despite not listening to Harry.



Wondering about this as well. I don't remember either Luca or Laura saying anything about setting Harry up in this update. I think that other poster was just making assumptions.

Maya is a good possibility. I also like it because her feeling remorseful would give weight to my theory that Harry's good ending is going to be facilitated by her :p.


However, the other possibility is that it had nothing to do with Laura and Luca at all. What if it was...

Aya.

I know she was portrayed as an inept coder most of the time, but what if that was all an act? What if she was actually a genius pretending to be dumb so that no one would suspect her of anything while she quietly sabotaged the project? Also, the 'Sorry' message would make a lot more sense if it was coming from her as she would be apologizing to the entire team rather than just Harry.


Anyway. Just a theory.

Why would Aya do that? She is not corrupted. She also didn't look like a spiteful person. Obviously everything can put on her disorder but i think it would be ... lame ?
Also would Aya do it then Luca/ Laura wouldn't know about it. Laura didn't listen to Harry explaining the issue but knew exactly what is the problem and how serious it is. They had it already planned beforehand.
 
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gordon101

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it was either Luca or Laura, only other option is childhood friend f'd Harry over

still Harry your wife is definition of "piece of shit" i bet kids aren't even his, their Luca's for sure.
 
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