VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus Scenes S2 7-8] [Hangover Cat Purrroduction]

[Traveroro]

Yeah, people are looking for logic in a game that has none. Well, except for Japanese Hentai NTR logic. I watched one today where a guy moves in with his sister only to find out that she is always gone so he spends all of his time jerking off to videos of a girl that looks like her. Sees her in the bookstore with a guy who looks like Luca. Suddenly the videos stop and his sister seduces him one night after saying she saw his browser history but is disappointed with how small his pecker is. She disappears again the next morning and he gets a video directly from her of her fucking the wish.com version of Luca and says the videos were her the whole time and she made a bet with the dude that sex with her wimpy brother would be better than sex with him. So she didn't have sex for a week and was rolling on molly but the sex was still disappointing so now she is dude's slave or something. Not only that, if her brother wants to stay in the house he has to pretend to be her husband and raise her baby with Luca's lost cousin. Also, he must dress like a girl and let a fat gangster fuck him in the ass while his sister is out prostituting herself. So yeah. This is the logical framework we are working with. Anybody that thinks that the Aya ending is anything else than discount pain shopping needs to give me a call because I've got the deed to the London bridge and they can have it cheap.

Although I would be the first to agree not to expect good writing from ntr games of all things, some of them clearly try to go for something more believable than others and people build expectations accordingly. You are unlikely to find anyone complaining about the scenario you just wrote being stupid because they never expected otherwise, the author never bothered to pretend it was anything but.

This game, particularly in early updates, makes more of an attempt to sell its scenario to the player. There's even an option to play without seeing Laura's perspective, which practically removes porn from the experience. This shows the developer was confident his story could stand on its own, having lewd as a strong hook but not something that completely subordinates the writing. At least when compared to the standard ntr hentai.

Though I think what's upsetting people about this is more expecting something fresh than expecting better writing (along with the fact picking aya's options throughout the game does bait one into believing harry will be able to pick her). It's just one thing amplifies the other.

You sound like you've played the update. If so, how does Aya end up getting fucked? I'm curious.

Haven't played yet sadly, i'm inferring based on the early update and comments here. Can't imagine it will be anything but either rape, some kind of bet or Aya going through insane lenghts to prove a point.

 

[NewTricks]

Although I would be the first to agree not to expect good writing from ntr games of all things, some of them clearly try to go for something more believable than others and people build expectations accordingly. You are unlikely to find anyone complaining about the scenario you just wrote being stupid because they never expected otherwise, the author never bothered to pretend it was anything but.

This game, particularly in early updates, makes more of an attempt to sell its scenario to the player. There's even an option to play without seeing Laura's perspective, which practically removes porn from the experience. This shows the developer was confident his story could stand on its own, having lewd as a strong hook but not something that completely subordinates the writing. At least when compared to the standard ntr hentai.

Though I think what's upsetting people about this is more expecting something fresh than expecting better writing (along with the fact picking aya's options throughout the game does bait one into believing harry will be able to pick her). It's just one thing amplifies the other.



Haven't played yet sadly, i'm inferring based on the early update and comments here. Can't imagine it will be anything but either rape, some kind of bet or Aya going through insane lenghts to prove a point.

Nah. This game never sold itself as anything other than exactly what it is. From the first update, the banner was Luca grabbing both girls by their tits. Anybody who can't read that visual shorthand deserves their disappointment. I knew all along that picking Aya's options was just picking Aya to get fucked and mindbroken by Luca's colossal dick. It's like playing a harem game and being disappointed that every girl in the game is as easy as a two-dollar hooker and every other guy in the game has no dick.

 

[Traveroro]

Nah. This game never sold itself as anything other than exactly what it is. From the first update, the banner was Luca grabbing both girls by their tits. Anybody who can't read that visual shorthand deserves their disappointment. I knew all along that picking Aya's options was just picking Aya to get fucked and mindbroken by Luca's colossal dick. It's like playing a harem game and being disappointed that every girl in the game is as easy as a two-dollar hooker and every other guy in the game has no dick.

The banner argument is fair enough, but I think you are overplaying the genre argument. It's not uncommon for ntr games with several branches to have ''good endings'', reverse ntr paths and other things that deviate from getting cucked. I'd wager most people knew blonde kouhai would take your bully's dick in some route, but thought there would be ways to avoid it.

 

[ZUBiDAM]

The banner argument is fair enough, but I think you are overplaying the genre argument. It's not uncommon for ntr games with several branches to have ''good endings'', reverse ntr paths and other things that deviate from getting cucked. I'd wager most people knew blonde kouhai would take your bully's dick in some route, but thought there would be ways to avoid it.

don't be stupid, you know there is a good ending planned, there are also a nuch of routes with aya as the main heroine, this route will not show her full character. wait for the game to be completed before saying stuff like that.

 

[Terix3]

This game, particularly in early updates, makes more of an attempt to sell its scenario to the player. There's even an option to play without seeing Laura's perspective, which practically removes porn from the experience. This shows the developer was confident his story could stand on its own, having lewd as a strong hook but not something that completely subordinates the writing. At least when compared to the standard ntr hentai.

Believable setup is important for netorare to have good "kick" but once that is done the kink takes precedence. The MC pov only is not meant to be entertaining on its own, it is to provide people with some mystery if they seek one and for me it is a "ok let's see how dumb and blind is the MC to not see what is happening".

Also it is far easier to write linear bit of story than multi choice one that result the characters becoming almost different people.

The banner argument is fair enough, but I think you are overplaying the genre argument. It's not uncommon for ntr games with several branches to have ''good endings'', reverse ntr paths and other things that deviate from getting cucked. I'd wager most people knew blonde kouhai would take your bully's dick in some route, but thought there would be ways to avoid it.

My first expectation about the game was that the blonde chick will be corrupting the wife. I don't think many people come to ntr games expecting that you can save the girls.

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

this game definitely got generic and spoiled from the moment it branched out into several routes, the usual problem, prioritizing quantity over quality, I hope your next game is better used.

 

[kiribito]

this game definitely got generic and spoiled from the moment it branched out into several routes, the usual problem, prioritizing quantity over quality, I hope your next game is better used.

It already is i think. This one way too long, repetitive and unnecessarily edgy. His side game is much more fun and condensed. Just my opinion of course.

 

[adcebt1]

I see a lot of complaining, is this game worth try?

 

[Terix3]

It already is i think. This one way too long, repetitive and unnecessarily edgy. His side game is much more fun and condensed. Just my opinion of course.

The other game is ridiculously funny and i love Natasha but i don't think it is good NTR game.

this game definitely got generic and spoiled from the moment it branched out into several routes, the usual problem, prioritizing quantity over quality, I hope your next game is better used.

What was generic about Hero route? It is not about prioritizing quantity over quality but serving ntr in different tastes.

 

[Boobitz]

I see a lot of complaining, is this game worth try?

As you can see, some people are split on story decisions, but imo game has very good art with a couple unique scenarios if you are just looking to gallery whore.

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

I see a lot of complaining, is this game worth try?

I think this game is very good if you just want to make a straight line of it without looking at the ramifications, because they drag the game a lot towards content that is expected from any netorare. However, the real problem here that I raise is the enormous potential that this game had even before the ramifications, as I said, yes, it's worth it, but don't be surprised if in the last arcs the game is making you bored.
Edit: i feel like the main story of the game is a separate thing from the rest that branched off, it's like it feels like the main story got lost or its script fell in the water and he had to do the branches to take the story elsewhere.

 

[adcebt1]

As you can see, some people are split on story decisions, but imo game has very good art with a couple unique scenarios if you are just looking to gallery whore.

I think this game is very good if you just want to make a straight line of it without looking at the ramifications, because they drag the game a lot towards content that is expected from any netorare. However, the real problem here that I raise is the enormous potential that this game had even before the ramifications, as I said, yes, it's worth it, but don't be surprised if in the last arcs the game is making you bored.
Edit: i feel like the main story of the game is a separate thing from the rest that branched off, it's like it feels like the main story got lost or its script fell in the water and he had to do the branches to take the story elsewhere.

Ok thanks, guess i'll give it a try

 

[lkjhgfdfghjkl]

This game, particularly in early updates, makes more of an attempt to sell its scenario to the player. There's even an option to play without seeing Laura's perspective, which practically removes porn from the experience. This shows the developer was confident his story could stand on its own, having lewd as a strong hook but not something that completely subordinates the writing. At least when compared to the standard ntr hentai.

You're missing the role that Mystery NTR plays in stimulating the player. Removing lewd content from Harry's perspective pretty much kills the experience, it is everywhere by design. Players are given a partial view of all events through visuals and dialogue that allows them to piece together what is happening without directly showing the events. Harry's journey is not the same one that we experience even when limited to his POV. The obvious hints are meant to arouse the player not the protagonist as part of this fetish.

Saying it has been designed in a way that can ignore lewd content is nonsense, stuff is left out to get people off.

 

[NewTricks]

I see a lot of complaining, is this game worth try?

Only if you go in with reasonable expectations. A lot of folks seem to think that it is deceiving them with the prospect of a happy ending for Harry when the game has one of the most hopeless fucking titles I've heard an NTR game possess. This is a game about the main character getting completely stomped and owned by his asshole of a co-worker who fucks his girlfriend into complete oblivion and if that isn't a fetish that appeals to you this hard NTR title is a pretty rough ride.

 

[mommysboiii]

can someone please update the thread it seems like some poeple already played the update

 

[Traveroro]

You're missing the role that Mystery NTR plays in stimulating the player. Removing lewd content from Harry's perspective pretty much kills the experience, it is everywhere by design. Players are given a partial view of all events through visuals and dialogue that allows them to piece together what is happening without directly showing the events. Harry's journey is not the same one that we experience even when limited to his POV. The obvious hints are meant to arouse the player not the protagonist as part of this fetish.

Saying it has been designed in a way that can ignore lewd content is nonsense, stuff is left out to get people off.

Believable setup is important for netorare to have good "kick" but once that is done the kink takes precedence. The MC pov only is not meant to be entertaining on its own, it is to provide people with some mystery if they seek one and for me it is a "ok let's see how dumb and blind is the MC to not see what is happening".

You guys are misunderstanding my point. I never said kink isn't the main draw, I meant that the degree to which story logic is sacrificed for the sake of kink pandering exists in a spectrum. The porn mentioned by the person I replied to is obviously giving less of a fuck about logic than this game is, even if ultimately both are designed to make you fap. The idea that it can be played with few to no sex scenes isn't to say such route is devoid of arousal, but when you eliminate that from the equation it becomes harder to arouse, it creates a higher necessity of the player being invested into what's happening on a narrative level.

I'm the first to say being fappable is hentai's first priority, was just arguing that different porn games warrant different expectations as far as logic and storytelling is concerned.

 

[rangabang]

I see a lot of complaining, is this game worth try?

Its a great game, this thread is just filled with people who either expect vanilla in an ntr game, or are expecting award winning writing in a porn game

 

[Shatteredstar]

I see a lot of complaining, is this game worth try?

Game is good, better than good. Writing is, so far, best at the beginning. Some routes are very good with great character arches, some are mostly porn check box lists. These are just my opinions.

Most don't stick around to post 238 pages about a crap game.

 

[kusobaba]

Agreed. The common route is just that fun. The routes? I feel like something is lacking that prevents it to be as fun and good as the common route

 

[HentaiWatcher918418128]

Are we ever gonna get more updates to the family route? That has my favorite Laura look and character atm.