VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus Scenes S2 7-8] [Hangover Cat Purrroduction]

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If we are theorycrafting, I think Harry will make her commit to some sort of promise, similar to Laura. This promise will become the weakpoint in whatever relationship she builds with Harry, and is what Luca will abuse.

Luca is very good at seeing what makes people tick, while Harry tries to avoid looking beyond the surface behind people's actions. I think if there is no aggravating issue between Harry and Aya (Ex. The promise), it'll be hard for Luca to really work his corrupting magic and steal someone who is obsessed with Harry (Or maybe the idea of Harry?). Besides of course just "lol rape you like me now".
 
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Lmao, finally started playing since the end of the laura routes and at the first aga scene. Right even I thought laura couldn't be anymore unlikable.

And again, I'm astounded that neither aya nor Harry knows how to use their cellphones which are literally shown to be smart phones as a tactical nuke? Especially aya? The one who is suppose to be 19? In an Era where everything from.libe executions of people on open streets to women literally being raped in a god damn subway station gets recorded by onlookers and bypassers?

I'm expected to believe that the second she realized that door was locked and that harry was drugged that she did go straight to her phone and start live streaming or recording qtleast audio recording secretly?

A 19 year old? A 19 year old who has shown to be smarter and about every other route but her own? Really?
 
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The_fallen_dragon said:
Lmao, finally started playing since the end of the laura routes and at the first aga scene. Right even I thought laura couldn't be anymore unlikable.

And again, I'm astounded that neither aya nor Harry knows how to use their cellphones which are literally shown to be smart phones as a tactical nuke? Especially aya? The one who is suppose to be 19? In an Era where everything from.libe executions of people on open streets to women literally being raped in a god damn subway station gets recorded by onlookers and bypassers?

I'm expected to believe that the second she realized that door was locked and that harry was drugged that she did go straight to her phone and start live streaming or recording qtleast audio recording secretly?

A 19 year old? A 19 year old who has shown to be smarter and about every other route but her own? Really?
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It wouldn't be strange for there to be no reception (coz club belongs to mafia) or for Luca to make sure that her bag is somewhere out of reach. If anything the ending of the scene is stupid and served really no purpose...
 
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hp_surfer said:
As a writer, you've done a good thing when people argue this much about fictional characters morals and personalities. Especially in a hentai game.

Well done HC <3
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So, Sword Art Online had one of the best writters of the 2000's-Era? People discussed that characters ad-naus. But, I would disagree.
 
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Terix3 said:
It wouldn't be strange for there to be no reception (coz club belongs to mafia) or for Luca to make sure that her bag is somewhere out of reach. If anything the ending of the scene is stupid and served really no purpose...
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As for the first, that doesn't stop direct recording on the device.

As for the second, this isn't the only place in the game where the action of just using their own phone to record would've been the logical choice for any of th3 characters. Hell just given that harry is stupid and despite being a APP DEVELOPER so the usage of his own phone should be an important component in his life (I'm a illustrator and designer snf I use my phone daily in the drawing and design process so I can only image what usage someone who works on the software may have for it).

Laura who came up with this whole bs complex plain to kill Lucas in one route, wouldn't have come up with something g simpler use the device she should know the in and out of?.

As far as making sure their phones are taken away, unless it's written in the story I don't give th3 benefit of the doubt especially when the nature of the action in the story is something where these types of contingency need to be thought about ahead of time.
 
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The_fallen_dragon said:
As for the first, that doesn't stop direct recording on the device.

As for the second, this isn't the only place in the game where the action of just using their own phone to record would've been the logical choice for any of th3 characters. Hell just given that harry is stupid and despite being a APP DEVELOPER so the usage of his own phone should be an important component in his life (I'm a illustrator and designer snf I use my phone daily in the drawing and design process so I can only image what usage someone who works on the software may have for it).

Laura who came up with this whole bs complex plain to kill Lucas in one route, wouldn't have come up with something g simpler use the device she should know the in and out of?.

As far as making sure their phones are taken away, unless it's written in the story I don't give th3 benefit of the doubt especially when the nature of the action in the story is something where these types of contingency need to be thought about ahead of time.
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The overruling idea is that Luca mafia connections allows him to avoid law, either by controlling the police or silencing whomever presses charges against him. I mean if everyone know dude is with mafia and he is walking free would you bet your chances on recording being able to help you and him going to jail ? Don't think so.

Aya is the one first person to bring up police, my guess here is that she is not afraid of Luca mafia backing because she got one as well.
 
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Terix3 said:
The overruling idea is that Luca mafia connections allows him to avoid law, either by controlling the police or silencing whomever presses charges against him. I mean if everyone know dude is with mafia and he is walking free would you bet your chances on recording being able to help you and him going to jail ? Don't think so.

Aya is the one first person to bring up police, my guess here is that she is not afraid of Luca mafia backing because she got one as well.
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You do realize there are many, and I mean many from bosses to grunts that end up in prison correct? Just because you have mafia connections doesn't keep him out and direct evidence tends to be what bring them down. Another of time that direct evidence is a witness testimony followed by pictures or recording...

Oh look, two things that would be used against them if laura or aya were actually written competently.
 
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The_fallen_dragon said:
You do realize there are many, and I mean many from bosses to grunts that end up in prison correct? Just because you have mafia connections doesn't keep him out and direct evidence tends to be what bring them down. Another of time that direct evidence is a witness testimony followed by pictures or recording...

Oh look, two things that would be used against them if laura or aya were actually written competently.
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You understand there are plenty of people that disappear before they can make testimony ? You totally ignored the aspect of fearing for your life...
Sure they could have done many things and most of them would lead to bad end, there story is not about those.

Oh by all means give me example of better written netorare with both male and female pov.
 
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not sure why people like criticize this game for this kind of stuff all the time, probably that what hard ntr does to people...
it's a porn game, there are some things you should just ignore, like in some animes people are having a conversion mid air or from very far away somehow.
or in movies, student look like they are in their 30's, the main character never get hit by a barrage bullets unless it's from a main character etc.
for the first scene with aya laura and luca, aya was drunk so she was physically weak, luca and laura were there and overpowered her physically, so how would she take her phone and start streaming when luca was on her ever since harry passed out and after the rape?
 
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So, Sword Art Online had one of the best writters of the 2000's-Era? People discussed that characters ad-naus. But, I would disagree.
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didn't the author had to make an apology for the latest season because a girl almost/did got raped? (haven't watch it)
Terix3 said:
You understand there are plenty of people that disappear before they can make testimony ? You totally ignored the aspect of fearing for your life...
Sure they could have done many things and most of them would lead to bad end, there story is not about those.
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I mean testimony is one thing, livestreaming/recording is different thing. Since the characters in this game become illiterate monkeys when it comes to technology, I wouldn't be surprised if the mafia guys/luca wouldn't know how to access or use someone cloud or livestream since I believe devices can upload videos and photos directly to the cloud these days
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not sure why people like criticize this game for this kind of stuff all the time, probably that what hard ntr does to people...
it's a porn game, there are some things you should just ignore, like in some animes people are having a conversion mid air or from very far away somehow.
or in movies, student look like they are in their 30's, the main character never get hit by a barrage bullets unless it's from a main character etc.
for the first scene with aya laura and luca, aya was drunk so she was physically weak, luca and laura were there and overpowered her physically, so how would she take her phone and start streaming when luca was on her ever since harry passed out and after the rape?
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First, I do agree that the anime topic doesn't make sense at all lol

second, stormtrooper aim was created for the sole purpose of plot armor, let's be honest here

Third, as someone have point out aya is pretty smart and to my believed she would have activated voice commands on her phone, which lead to handful of things such as call the police (even tho they need an address), start a stream from her cellphone (depending what app they have in that country/world), call/text someone (as someone have mention, she might be backed up by the mafia, so is a possibility that she have a hot line if anything happen to her. If your respond is "she was drunk" or "couldn't think of anything at the moment." My response is that she probably had found herself in that exact situation before, since it was never established where exactly her or "that man" position is within the organization I can deduce that at least "that man" have some sort of power within the organization to the point that he might ignored his parental responsibilities), or send an emergency message to a trusted friend.

EDIT: a good example of the relation to the mafia for aya would be My reality a love game? I thought it was a life like game. One of the main "love" interest is the daughter of a mafia boss, unlike aya, she puts herself in dangerous situations where she sells her virginity or body (whichever makes you sleep at night lol) to strangers just to get them shot before they get to touch her. This is something I would expect, if the case of her being related to some higher up mafia boss (unrelated to luca mafia) gets revealed in her story, this entire ending will be bad writing since it wouldn't explain why she didn't considered mentioning or contacting somebody when luca was forcing himself on her.
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In essence there is an in game walk through. Choose the ending you want and the game tells you what choices lead you there. No highlighting like with a mod but there aren't many choices to make.
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you mean the make believe choices? lol
 
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Honestly in my opinion

While harry is a blind idiot that deserves a lot of this, I still think this is kinda extreme for his case like everyone is treating him to be the fucking antichrist or something while I just see him as a naive idiot at best,mentally braid dead as worst frankly no one can convince me he deserved what luca did to him fully imo, luca's a genuine psychopath
 
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