VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

[Chinel]

Why I have the impression that Aya Route will now suddenly reveal that Laura has ties with some Italian Mafia or some shit like that? Or she becomes a crime boss out of nowhere to fuck shit up?

Those three are walking problems you know...I wonder how Harry attracts those kinds of people. Is it the perfume?

 

[NewTricks]

It is gonna be fairly tedious watching Aya get seduced by Luca over and over in five different ways.

 

[Chinel]

It is gonna be fairly tedious watching Aya get seduced by Luca over and over in five different ways.

And then growing mad because she can't live without his cock and Harry's musk I suppose.
Poor Harry can't take a rest. No one wants to let him rest. Someone should take those three and ask them.

"Okay, why can't you leave him alone? I mean, is his smell so good you can't stop trying to catch him like a prize or something?"

Also again, am I right to assume that if Harry were to run away to some cabin in the woods, he would see three scary faces on the windows?

 

[Lara Snow]

Am I the only one that wished for Aya to be corrupted in the next game? Seems more fitting, since in this game Aya has been the girl whose route can be considered good endings.

What? No. Only the vanilla loud crowds do not want Aya to be corrupted. The rest of us want her to be corrupted and break Harry's heart.

 

[abirvg]

Dose anyone actually like Laura i don't personally

The problem with Laura is that she becomes LESS sexy the more you play.
But she had great foundation.
It's just hard to get some jealousy for a girl, who HATES her boyfriend. That's simply not how jealousy works.

Aya is a crowd favorite (for now) because she actually crazy in love with Harry.
So people want to see her NTRed - precisely because of that. Because of contrast.
For now.
She'll start hating Harry and it would be the same as with Laura.

More hate => less jealousy.
More love => more jealousy.
It's that simple.

 

[nikoxmalus]

What? No. Only the vanilla loud crowds do not want Aya to be corrupted. The rest of us want her to be corrupted and break Harry's heart.

Very cultured. Idk why but seeing Laura get corrupted didn't give me any satisfaction. Seeing her mom got corrupted did. Maybe I just don't like Laura as a character. After reading how her relationship developed with Harry I think Aya's story will be the NTR story I'm looking for. But Aya doesn't seem like a character that would easily be corrupted or even be corrupted at all for that matter. I'm looking forward for what the dev has in store for her, I heard she would have fewer endings because of her personality and tbh I think I agree with that decision. The last thing we want is to pull shit out of nowhere just to make Aya corrupted.

 

[geocites]

What? No. Only the vanilla loud crowds do not want Aya to be corrupted. The rest of us want her to be corrupted and break Harry's heart.

but she can only be corrupted if aya and harry are happy and in a relationship which requires build up

honestly I really want to see the build up of the relationship between Harry and Aya first. Since I don't really call it NTR unless the two are in an intimate relationship. Luca just helps Aya in separating the two of them, but is still focused on Laura initially.

Then after the Harry and Laura break up, Luca realizes that he only gets off with stealing girls from Harry, thus throws Laura aside and set Aya as his next target. I mean he already has blackmail material to Aya with them conspiring to separate the two. (Though I hate blackmail in NTRs, so I hope the story doesn't have that as the main driving force of the corruption)

 

[Chinel]

The problem with Laura is that she becomes LESS sexy the more you play.
But she had great foundation.
It's just hard to get some jealousy for a girl, who HATES her boyfriend. That's simply not how jealousy works.

Aya is a crowd favorite (for now) because she actually crazy in love with Harry.
So people want to see her NTRed - precisely because of that. Because of contrast.
For now.
She'll start hating Harry and it would be the same as with Laura.

More hate => less jealousy.
More love => more jealousy.
It's that simple.

But that would just make her not sexy in the end, right? After all she would just hate Harry and be...well, exactly what Laura is.
Honestly I wonder how Harry would change with that heartbreak. Would be fun if he just became uncaring.

Hate can be fun, but there is something amazing on just not caring at all.

well....

Love can be broken, so as hope.
I just think that one is missed, as far as characters can be talked about. Love is...what? Nothing before hope. Without hope...what there is? It is a funny place.

I just think about those characters' hopes being crushed to dust and dunno, for some reason it seems to crystallize something so amazingly fantastic...

 

[RustDust]

finally, its finished. now i can stop getting irrationally upset every time it pops up on my timeline

 

[abirvg]

But that would just make her not sexy in the end, right? After all she would just hate Harry and be...well, exactly what Laura is.
Honestly I wonder how Harry would change with that heartbreak. Would be fun if he just became uncaring.

Hate can be fun, but there is something amazing on just not caring at all.

To get addicted to Luca's cock she doesn't need to hate Harry.
She can even fall for both of them at the same time - just for different reasons.

Just like you can fall in love with two different girls.

Hate in porn games could be fun if it leads to hate-fuck. Again - because of the contrast. Both Laura and Aya hated Luca's guts and their sex scenes was hotter because of it.
"I hate him BUT I cant stop cumming on his cock." is just hotter then plain "I can't stop cumming on his cock."
It shows heir emotions more (like suicide for Romeo and Juliette makes their love more tangible).
But simple:
"I hate him SO I'll go to another man." is not a contrast. And it sups any jealousy for the girl on top of it.

Because contrast for Jealousy is Love.
Again:
"I love him more then my life BUT I can't stop cumming while cheating." is hotter then plain "I can't stop cumming while cheating."

By the end of Laura's route she throws away BOTH: hate for Luca and love for Harry.
There's no contrast left.
So she gets less sexy the more you play.
Now she's just a woman with the shitty thoughts doing shitty things.

That does NOT have to be the case (with her or Aya).
For example:
She could become more addicted to Luca, feel more reverence towards his vile strength while being mentally destroyed by him AND BECAUSE OF IT getting more appreciation for Harry's kindness and genuine love, his care.
That way BOTH contrasts will grow the more you play.
And, hence - she would become SEXIER the more you play.

Which should be the case.
Your plot needs to snowball, not kneecap itself.

 

[PinchyCrabbo]

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[Yournewowner]

Ah finally the hero

 

[Latex224]

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Many thanks 4 the share

 

[nikoxmalus]

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Praise, Praise, Praise! The hero cometh!

 

[Chinel]

To get addicted to Luca's cock she doesn't need to hate Harry.
She can even fall for both of them at the same time - just for different reasons.

Just like you can fall in love with two different girls.

Hate in porn games could be fun if it leads to hate-fuck. Again - because of the contrast. Both Laura and Aya hated Luca's guts and their sex scenes was hotter because of it.
"I hate him BUT I cant stop cumming on his cock." is just hotter then plain "I can't stop cumming on his cock."
It shows heir emotions more (like suicide for Romeo and Juliette makes their love more tangible).
But simple:
"I hate him SO I'll go to another man." is not a contrast. And it sups any jealousy for the girl on top of it.

Because contrast for Jealousy is Love.
Again:
"I love him more then my life BUT I can't stop cumming while cheating." is hotter then plain "I can't stop cumming while cheating."

By the end of Laura's route she thews away BOTH: hate for Luca and love for Harry.
There's no contrast left.
So she gets less sexy the more you play.
Now she's just a woman with the shitty thoughts doing shitty things.

That does NOT have to be the case (with her or Aya).
For example:
She could become more addicted to Luca, feel more reverence towards his vile strength while being mentally destroyed by him AND BECAUSE OF IT getting more appreciation for Harry's kindness and genuine love, his care.
That way BOTH contrasts will grow the more you play.
And, hence - she would become SEXIER the more you play.

TBH I just think it would be the same as that ending in which Laura kills Luca.
Then again the level of selfishness in 'I want my cake and my cookies' is really impressive, but here is also another thing. Her mind destroyed due to it, we know she could kill Luca easy peasy.

For some reason I just don't see any ending in which she does not hate Harry. She might say she wouldn't tell to not 'hurt' him (which...it is the SAME KIND OF CONDESCENDING BULLSHIT LAURA HAS) but at the end of the day, the moment he discovers, I feel it would be too late for him, quite literally.

He might try to leave and Luca order Aya to use her Yakuza goons to arrest him or smth, because we know how much Luca cannot bear living without Harry I guess. Or she might be aware of all the pain she causes on him and for some reason still love and care for him (at this point I am not sure that is love, it is plain obsession and insanity) but from Harry, I guess she would only have hate and disgust. Her and Laura.

(To that point I wonder if Luca would just let Harry go. He effectively killed his 'will to love'.)

She could become more addicted to Luca, feel more reverence towards his vile strength while being mentally destroyed by him AND BECAUSE OF IT getting more appreciation for Harry's kindness and genuine love, his care.

Would that be the case? She has an alternate self that I don't think that likes Harry at all, or at best likes him akin to a fun prize to rub at Laura's face.

Also dunno...it just feels strange. She clearly does not love him at all.

Eh. I guess I can't understand that. I just think she hates him at that point and is lying to herself.

NTR requires aspects of love I sorely lack, I suppose. I see and I think 'well...tell him what it is going on instead of trying to make him guess. He at least ask questions and wish to know, tell, and let what it is next happen'. Obliviousness might be annoying, but it is hardly something worse than betrayal/backstabbing and rape.

 

[Mwi]

Don't really care about this game but if you do the 1.0.0 version (ANDROID) is on Androidmo.me (for free)

 

[Zeroo 00]

How to get good ending? And how many ending are there

 

[abirvg]

'well...tell him what it is going on instead of trying to make him guess. He at least ask questions and wish to know, tell, and let what it is next happen'.

Yeah, but it doesn't matter. Plot doesn't have to be realistic to bring you feelings. It just needs to function properly.
Like a well constructed machine.
With the sole purpose of bringing reader those specific types of feelings - and as strong as possible.

but from Harry, I guess she would only have hate and disgust.

Not necessarily.
And he doesn't NEED to know at all.
And he doesn't need to know until literally the last frame of the game.

There's a lot of tricks the author could utilize so we don't have to deal with it.
And it's pretty important that he does - because Hate and Disgust from Harry would function the same way as Hate and Disgust from the girls.
The more hate there are inside the couple, the less jealousy they get.

There's a good example:

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And you wouldn't want to make your horror game LESS scary by mentioning half way through that your monster is a pacifist, now would you?

Author already made that mistake - and he didn't have to. Definitely not for the sake of some 'realism'.

 

[Chinel]

Yeah, but it doesn't matter. Plot doesn't have to be realistic to bring you feelings. It just needs to function properly.
Like a well constructed machine.
With the sole purpose of bringing reader those specific types of feelings - and as strong as possible.

Well...but you see, a woman hating the MC she loved before is part of NTR tropes as well.

Not necessarily.
And he doesn't NEED to know at all.
And he doesn't need to know until literally the last frame of the game.

There's a lot of tricks the author could utilize so we don't have to deal with it.
And it's pretty important that he does - because Hate and Disgust from Harry would function the same way as Hate and Disgust from the girls.
The more hate there are inside the couple, the less jealousy they get.

There's a good example:

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I kinda liked it, you see, hate and disgust are funny things due to how they answer to me when I see them. I saw and I was all 'hate more and further...let it fester'. There is a reason why I like Anakin's journey. A good man, although spineless, becoming filled of hate and disgust? It smells like possible bloodlust and hah! I love it! Hate can be purifying and Harry...felt pure for the first time.

That is also why I liked Abrupt ending.
He took the knife and I knew. Blood would be shed, a damage irreversible would be bought and one life would be sacrificed. There is...something there. It was...human.

And you wouldn't want to make your horror game LESS scary by mentioning half way through that your monster is a pacifist, now would you?

Author already made that mistake - and he didn't have to. Definitely not for the sake of some 'realism'.

Who do you refer as a monster? TBH when I understood why Luca does what he does...he just felt pathetic. I remember the scene was uncomfortable, then after that I just laughed.

Harry taking a knife to kill felt far more threatening and far more certain. The only disappointment was the absence of what happened later, but oh well.

Then again I have to point out something.
Porn Wise I only cared about animations. The 'plot' didn't matter, hell, I didn't even knew what the characters were blabbering about...well, until I saw the amount of work put in there thanks to what I saw in this topic.

The main issue is.
Jealousy...is not a main point for me if there is no resolution to it. It feels incomplete and it is a...meh.

 

[jimmymcgill69420]

What choices do you make to get to the maya mirror scene? Is it shown in a specific ending?