Quite a long prologue, some games will be shorter in their duration. But despite the duration there is absolutely no content. And this means that the developer does not know how to make porn games or does not want to make them. And you should not expect anything interesting from this game.
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- Dec 5, 2020
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This is definitely the kind of story written by an adult for adults to read. Nothing like the typical teen porn fantasy about a supercool trooper fucking chicks left, right and center. Quite a depressing story, I must say, it’s good that the twins Haley and Bailey partly save the mood with their overwhelming positivity, witty banters and disarming care for the MC.
The graphics are great, the soundtrack is fitting. The appeal of the female characters is a matter of taste, I liked the twins, but the tattoos... Almost all the characters are painted from head to toe, not my thing. However, in the case of twins, large, colorful tattoos may be justified, they fit into their artistic image, as one of them is a singer and the other is an artist.
I really don't like how the game jumps between scenes with large gaps in time. Or even the transition between two close scenes can be quite abrupt, one moment the MC is here, and the next he's there, and it's unclear how he got from point A to point B. This can be jarring. However, I believe this choice is intentional, mirroring the MC's disjoined perception of reality as he struggles to cope with his ptsd.
In short, this is a great game if you're in for an adult story-driven novel, and almost nothing if you're looking for an adult porn game.
The graphics are great, the soundtrack is fitting. The appeal of the female characters is a matter of taste, I liked the twins, but the tattoos... Almost all the characters are painted from head to toe, not my thing. However, in the case of twins, large, colorful tattoos may be justified, they fit into their artistic image, as one of them is a singer and the other is an artist.
I really don't like how the game jumps between scenes with large gaps in time. Or even the transition between two close scenes can be quite abrupt, one moment the MC is here, and the next he's there, and it's unclear how he got from point A to point B. This can be jarring. However, I believe this choice is intentional, mirroring the MC's disjoined perception of reality as he struggles to cope with his ptsd.
In short, this is a great game if you're in for an adult story-driven novel, and almost nothing if you're looking for an adult porn game.
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I am not gonna put this in a review because I'm really impressed with so much about this and really hope everyone else loves it, but I just can't get past the fact that, months into the story where everyone is really in love with/supporting the MC, no one has even hinted at getting him into therapy. I couldn't even finish the prologue because it pained me so much to read it.
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Yeah, I felt the same. It seems to me that Haley and Bailey are incredibly naive in this case... Maybe because their father handled it better. For some reason, they seem to think that distraction is healthy, and that time heals all wounds. On the other hand, if you visit Cammy, she shows actual concern and insight.
I would love to see a bit of conflict when the MC wakes them up screaming, and him always answering "extra good", to cement this in the readers' minds, making the endgame conversation a bit more impactful.
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Agreed with all that is said here. I will definitely keep my eye on this one.
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- Jan 18, 2022
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Really great if you like something with flesh to the bone story- and characterwise and not just a fuckfest.
Be warned though, it is outright chocking sometimes - especially at the end of this version.
And I can say one thing: I am very glad I never had to serve in a warzone.
“The bad thing of war is, that it makes more evil people than it can take away.” - Immanuel Kant
Be warned though, it is outright chocking sometimes - especially at the end of this version.
And I can say one thing: I am very glad I never had to serve in a warzone.
“The bad thing of war is, that it makes more evil people than it can take away.” - Immanuel Kant
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this game is very good and i really liked the prologue so far, however as much as it pains me to say this, with the current pace of development i do not see this going very far.
Anyone having issues with split images? I've updated my drivers and still every image is plot in the middle
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Yeah, at times she came across as a snob to me, though I'm sure she means well. Same for her banter, it seemed at Riley's expense a lot of the time.
Personally, I don't see anything Riley has in common with anyone, but least of all Bailey. She lives in a world of overpriced foodie foods and drinks, and has a passion for old and foreign books.
Mind you, this isn't criticism, the opposite really. It's because she has enough depth that we can have these conversations.
wait where are my saves? and he take all this time to do the same so....a rework ,and where is the cha[ter 1?
- Sep 29, 2023
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Your saves might be in %appdata%\RenPy\ATR4k-1699018806 ... But they won't work because the game's logic has been reworked.
You can't join as a free member ?Good stuff dude. Was gonna join your Patreon, but it says you aren't accepting new signups. Can't comment there either cuz you gotta be a member.