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VN Ren'Py A Touch of Magic [v0.1 Ch.1 Remake] [First Sin, JAD]

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Darth Vengeant

Darth Vengeant

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The game story isn't bad. The characters aren't bad either. Nice renders, nice atmosphere.

So, this game started long ago and is being "remade" even through is is still a 0.1 version. Well, for a "remake" there is still problems. 10 min in and already issues I can see.

Secret images. Many are so small it barely was the size of the end of my mouse pointer (the one at the bar for example). I spent forever on the screen trying to find some. There is hidden secrets, but then there is just being stupid. Make them bigger and the click box bigger. The warning needs to last for more than one screen as well. I click through games fast, and they often don't show up. I also never got a pop up for the second image until I went and replayed the scene, clicking slower. You are essentially forcing me to play very slowly, and I don't like that.

Secret image 12 is not obtainable since the game errors and says there is no idle image .png for it.

Gallery Replay should be accessible while in the game to see what you have unlocked so far without having to exit back to the main menu. Furthermore, the Gallery has no "back" button to get out of if like most games have, you have to click the right mouse button to go back. Also in the gallery, some of the secret images only show half the image.

There is no scene replay. That should be in the game day one.

Need an option to make text boxes transparent. I hate text boxes. (I ended up installing a mod for it)

Naming characters and their relationship to you, 20+ min into the game, without really knowing context and age needs to be adjusted. Verona for example. Is she old enough to be a grandma, or an aunt? Hard to know right off the bat like that.

The scene where the female cop comes in the room after the Japanese guy has been murdered. They act as if no person was just killed and were flirting with each other etc. A bit ridiculous considering the main character has just been accused of murder.

So, ya. If you are going to "remake" a game that is still essentially in it's first storyline cycle, then you might want to make it right, bug free, and playable.
 
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jadepaladin

jadepaladin

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Adhdclassic said:
think she is supposed to be the mom and the one in the library is his aunt. When you write who they are there is lines for example the aunt she has for lines this character has six. you will notice the lines quantity change with each character.
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You're saying Verona is the aunt? I'm not buying it.

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drifter139

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I need to correct you on something, dev. you call the MC a Nephilim but he is referred to as half human and half dragon. a Nephilim is the child of an angel and a human. specifically they are defined as the offspring of the sons of God and the daughters of man. you should really correct that going forward or some people will be confused
 
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HornyyPussy

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drifter139 said:
I need to correct you on something, dev. you call the MC a Nephilim but he is referred to as half human and half dragon. a Nephilim is the child of an angel and a human. specifically they are defined as the offspring of the sons of God and the daughters of man. you should really correct that going forward or some people will be confused
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Not in the Dev's universe apparently, his game, his rules.
 
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