Holy Bacchus

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I hardly saw it as jumping the shark. Why wouldn't Ellie confide in her mom about Julia? She's already close to her mom and with the shower adventure it only makes sense she would tell her feelings about Julia. Also this happens after she witnesses her mom kissing her sister at the club so naturally she'd be curious of her mom's point of view while exploring her own feelings with Julia.
That wasn't "confiding", that was an overly-blunt and far too sudden diatribe that would be too cheesy and cringey even for a romantic novel. The only reason for it was to get the admittedly hot scene with Julia, but even that felt way too soon and very out of place.

It's not even about Ellie's curiosity either, it was just about finding a really contrived way to include a steamy lesbian scene with Sophia but the whole thing is far too rushed. Ellie was supposed to take some time to think about things with Julia but now we find out they've done a lot in the last 3 days, so it clearly didn't that long, and somehow they've done so much that both she and Julia are comfortable being this open with Sophia? Nope, not buying it.

The whole justification for this, that Julia saw Sophia, is also bogus because Julia's back was to where Sophia was the whole time so there's no way she saw her. It was just a plot contrivance to force this scene.

As for Dylan again why is it so strange he'd want to peep on the ladies in the shower. His experiments with his mom have only increased his desire to finally see a naked woman and now he has the chance to see 4 at one time. It comes off as more of a learning experience for him than anything perverted.
Because it's the typical porn game trope that I'm sick of seeing and really thought this game was above. L&P lowered and debased themselves by including this.

As for Sophia she has already established a good connection with Alyssa right from the first meeting with her which has only frown with each additional meet. And by this time has explored a lot of temptations in experimenting with other women. Couple this with her increased frustration with not getting any sex from her husband for weeks as well as Alyssa almost causing her to orgasm in the cafe, I don't see it as a stretch she'd experiment with the sybian given her heightened arousal by that time.
Good connection, yes, but she only met her a handful of times and given how prudish she still is about so many things, riding a sybian just seems way out of character for her right now. She doesn't even masturbate with a dildo for Christ's sake, and we're supposed to believe she'll take a ride on a sybian? Again, not buying it.
 

Holy Bacchus

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Dylan had good intentions but he chose poorly very poorly,stupid/naive in fact and it was never his intentions to offer his mother up.Aiden changed the rules not Dylan he should of known better.
I've said it before and I'll say it again: Fuck. His. Intentions! His intentions are flawed anyway so he's already on very shitty ground as far as that's concerned. If he were my son, I'd disown his ass for doing something like this. I'd kick him out of the house and tell him to never darken my door again. He would be dead to me!

The whole problem I have with this is that, up until now the game has felt reasonably well-grounded, even with the incest, blackmail, lesbian feelings, etc, and that has been one of its greatest strengths. But this revelation is a huge steaming pile of horsecrap that has totally obliterated that grounded feeling for me because there is absolutely no rationale for why Dylan should have ever thought that this was a good idea. This is a shit idea, not simply from Dylan, but from L&P who wrote the damn thing. They have sullied themselves with this horsecrap, piss-poor bit of writing, and it is shameful for someone as talented as them.
 
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ST-9Pol

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Hey,

Really liking the game, but seems im getting error always on day18 when entering grocerie after pool/treehouse event with Sam. Any way to bypass it or what causing the error?
I'm getting the same error.... no fix yet
 

MattShizzle

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Someone could make a porn game and not have a sex scene for 10 years and people would be saying "good slow burn, so glad this game isn't a meaningless fuckfest"
TBH at this point someone could make one that would be approved in Iran and Saudi Arabia that would get that reaction. Some people who like could be members of the Committee for the Promotion of Virtue and Prevention of Vice. At this point Sophia is just frigid. Also given how hot she is and he won't go for it when she wants, Liam either can't get it up or realizes he is gay. That would be a good update. Liam leaves her for like a 20 year old rentboy and she becomes a rampaging cougar slut.
 

Leldorin

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Sophia : literally getting admired or lusted upon by every living being in the city regardless of gender, race or age . To the point of being blackmailed (Bennett), almost raped (the thugs in the subway station) or drugged (Neil). Dylan : Getting annoyed each time someone compliments or flirt with his mom. Which happens every time . Dylan plan : Getting his mom to dress even more sexy, so that she’ll get even more admired and lusted upon.... Make perfect sense
 

Bill_Buttlicker

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That wasn't "confiding", that was an overly-blunt and far too sudden diatribe that would be too cheesy and cringey even for a romantic novel. The only reason for it was to get the admittedly hot scene with Julia, but even that felt way too soon and very out of place.

It's not even about Ellie's curiosity either, it was just about finding a really contrived way to include a steamy lesbian scene with Sophia but the whole thing is far too rushed. Ellie was supposed to take some time to think about things with Julia but now we find out they've done a lot in the last 3 days, so it clearly didn't that long, and somehow they've done so much that both she and Julia are comfortable being this open with Sophia? Nope, not buying it.

The whole justification for this, that Julia saw Sophia, is also bogus because Julia's back was to where Sophia was the whole time so there's no way she saw her. It was just a plot contrivance to force this scene.
Well just because you don't see the character all the time doesn't mean they aren't doing other things when off screen. Remember this isn't a video or TV show it's a story represented by static screenshots at times so it's not going to show what a given character is doing every second even when they are being focused on. Julia could have seen Sophia out of the corner of her eye at any time. It doesn't strain credulity to think that could have happened.

Because it's the typical porn game trope that I'm sick of seeing and really thought this game was above. L&P lowered and debased themselves by including this.
lol I didn't realize this was a trope of porn games. It wasn't like he was constantly doing it every chance he gets since the game began. The creator could have given Dylan plenty of options to do it right from the get go since the parents bathroom door had no lock so he obviously didn't fall into that trope. Also you are given the option of having Dylan not go through with it, so if you don't like it you can choose to ignore it.

Good connection, yes, but she only met her a handful of times and given how prudish she still is about so many things, riding a sybian just seems way out of character for her right now. She doesn't even masturbate with a dildo for Christ's sake, and we're supposed to believe she'll take a ride on a sybian? Again, not buying it.
Well when would you like her to experiment with a dildo? It looks like she did just that with the sybian. You're saying she has to use a dildo first before a sybian? She has been shown to masturbate a few times with her hand so why would it be against reason for her to finally decide to try and up her game with someone she connects with and trusts? Again the option exists for you to not have her do it so I don't see the problem you're having with it.
 

TheDavyJones

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What do I do ?

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
  File "C:\Games\A_Wife_And_Mother-0.100-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "C:\Games\A_Wife_And_Mother-0.100-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Mon Sep 14 10:14:01 2020
 
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Lord_Xanatos

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You are damn right, look at Zac eyes when Sophia is talking about
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Precisely! Then check this out...

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Because he has a crush on Sophia, he wanted to also see her dressing sexy so he agreed to the plan.

He decided on his own to go with the deal and make Sophia dress sexy for a class he is attending. He wanted to enjoy the show but not telling that Aiden changed the deal and now forcing Sophia to do more tasks.
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Now very agreeable...
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And now that the "shit hit the fan" time to cover his ass and keep Alyssa from knowing about it because Alyssa would most likely ask him why?
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I've kept thinking not so much saying but when people are worried about NTR...From Bennet? From Aiden? those can be discarded and get rid of, the ones who can bring the NTR and the backstabbing are his one and neighbor kid, those are the ones that I want to keep away from Sophia because those are the ones most likely to get to her and thus get the damn NTR.

That's why I rather have Zac to have an affair with Alyssa than bring any NTR with Sophia, "Fuck your own mother not your friend's".
 

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What do I do ?

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
  File "C:\Games\A_Wife_And_Mother-0.100-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "C:\Games\A_Wife_And_Mother-0.100-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Mon Sep 14 10:14:01 2020

I have encountered this as well.
 

Leldorin

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Precisely! Then check this out...

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Because he has a crush on Sophia, he wanted to also see her dressing sexy so he agreed to the plan.

He decided on his own to go with the deal and make Sophia dress sexy for a class he is attending. He wanted to enjoy the show but not telling that Aiden changed the deal and now forcing Sophia to do more tasks.
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Now very agreeable...
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And now that the "shit hit the fan" time to cover his ass and keep Alyssa from knowing about it because Alyssa would most likely ask him why?
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I've kept thinking not so much saying but when people are worried about NTR...From Bennet? From Aiden? those can be discarded and get rid of, the ones who can bring the NTR and the backstabbing are his one and neighbor kid, those are the ones that I want to keep away from Sophia because those are the ones most likely to get to her and thus get the damn NTR.

That's why I rather have Zac to have an affair with Alyssa than bring any NTR with Sophia, "Fuck your own mother not your friend's".
Poor Liam, literally getting NTRed by everybody. And no one thinks about him :cry:
 
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