PietruccioTheHilander

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Just a small suggestion to LP if he watch it..Dude open your eyes, wake up...you need new plan for this game..scrap all the old schemes...play part 1 of this game yourself that you developed and see what it was.

We want you to continue the story with the essence of real part 1 that you developed yourself from sophia's perspective....we don't want you to dwelve yourself inside the teenage body and keep thinking about first time sex and stretch the story like a rubberband for years. Dwelve yourself inside the body of a married woman who has sexual deisre and corrupt her for cheating with her lifestyle...i.e. in married woman work culture and in terms of who sophia should hang around with after work like neighbors, her sister, her friends etc lol.

Please get your story out from Dylan, Ellie their friends and teenage perspective of sex asap. And get back on the track of cheating and corrupt wife and develop the story from the middle age woman perspective.
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bluehound36

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Just a small suggestion to LP if he watch it..Dude open your eyes, wake up...you need new plan for this game..scrap all the old schemes...play part 1 of this game yourself that you developed and see what it was.

We want you to continue the story with the essence of real part 1 that you developed yourself from sophia's perspective....we don't want you to dwelve yourself inside the teenage body and keep thinking about first time sex and stretch the story like a rubberband for years. Dwelve yourself inside the body of a married woman who has sexual deisre and corrupt her for cheating with her lifestyle...i.e. in married woman work culture and in terms of who sophia should hang around with after work like neighbors, her sister, her friends etc lol.

Please get your story out from Dylan, Ellie their friends and teenage perspective of sex asap. And get back on the track of cheating and corrupt wife and develop the story from the middle age woman perspective.
People have been telling him this for several years now. He refuses to listen to anyone. Just the way it is.
 

crabboid

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It's not been years, we're on day 21 in the novel, so 3 weeks.
So then she went from complete prude to jerking her son off and eating her daughter’s vag within a three week period, but is still trying to act like she has scruples when it comes to sexual activity with anyone who she’s not actually related to. That’s nonsensical too, unless she has a head injury at some point that I didn’t notice.
 

DarkShadow29

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It's not been years, we're on day 21 in the novel, so 3 weeks.
This is not an excuse for bad storyline...the thing is it should have stick to cheating wife path and sophia's story only...obviously if dylan and ellie are involved then make a short background like he did with sam...where Sam told sophia how he was attracted to her when he was a child...that's all....same thing he could have done with dylan and ellie...but streching the story from dylan and ellie perspective from day 17-day21 is bs...3 weeks maybe in story but it seems like the story has lost it's identity and changed it to teen perspective since past 2 years or 4-5 days of gameplay..sophia is out of focus and she is on focus only when dylan and ellie story require her ....these are side storylines....and these could be developed after the main story gets completed (he can show all ellie and dylan sex with their friends including/excluding sophia later on)...dylan was a cuck in sidestory previously ..and we liked it that way...now he was MC for an year of development and he has his own storyline with his friends n all. its bullshit...no need to waste novel days of the story by telling other characters story as a main storyline. For example, if he develop day 22....there is no need to tell the story from patricia or ellie point of view...he could continue the story from sophia point of view and increase the MC corruption...every day in the novel he choose some other character as MC and start their corruption level from zero, like by showing boobs then blowjob etc and end the novel day....next time he will show patricia and start the same thing again by showing patricia boobs, then blowjob and end it ...each and every characters doesn't need to be corrupted slowly. This is not slow burn..this is scam.
 
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