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:winkytongue:I noticed the massive contradiction too.
You beat me to it.
:winkytongue:I noticed the massive contradiction too.
You beat me to it.
Isn't really like that. The game has 30 days planned, but doesn't mean that there will be 30 updates. Some days will be skipped.its far ahead of now, at least ten updates ahead.
That scares me to be honest, well not in like bohoo-scares me, but with 30 Days, i see all this wonderful characters that she is bonding with that potentially could be great sexscenes and soon we are halfway and she hasnt had sex once , not even her husband, excebt a bj. So there is not many Days left (17?) for her to have sex on. She keeps on squibling away and nothing happens, so will Everything happen the last 5 Days, will she fuck everybody in thoose Days. Moving guys, postman, old guys, 10 different women, muggers, son and daughter, sister and sisters man, teacher and maybe even her husband. can you say rushed?I'm agree with you. People come here like the dev is cheating on they. But
Isn't really like that. The game has 30 days planned, but doesn't mean that there will be 30 updates. Some days will be skipped.
Take it or leave it, no one obliges.That scares me to be honest, well not in like bohoo-scares me, but with 30 Days, i see all this wonderful characters that she is bonding with that potentially could be great sexscenes and soon we are halfway and she hasnt had sex once , not even her husband, excebt a bj. So there is not many Days left (17?) for her to have sex on. She keeps on squibling away and nothing happens, so will Everything happen the last 5 Days, will she fuck everybody in thoose Days. Moving guys, postman, old guys, 10 different women, muggers, son and daughter, sister and sisters man, teacher and maybe even her husband. can you say rushed?
To create that and call it realistic, i dont know...
Definitely. Not necessarily have to be a bad person, but can simply be a bad husband in a way that he didn't do what a husband is supposed to. Think about what's a good wife is like, then that should be what a good husband is like. Same with bad wife and bad husband. Bad wife can be about ignoring the husband, ignoring the kids, etc.What did you mean by "bad husband" exactly then? Because I interpreted it that you meant how he fails in Sophia's eyes, not that he is overall a bad person or anything.
It's unfortunately the trend in the game. The one person (husband) that is supposed to be nice to her is being no good. The other people (non-husband male characters) that are supposed to be good to her are all jerks. The one path that seemed to be rewarding is lesbianism where the female characters are actually nice to her.The teacher character could have been put to better use if given a different personality.
Assume instead he was a charming, friendly, nice one...
Exactly. For a game that is this large so far, it's very disappointing that there is no plot existing.He builds up his characters for to long. Doesnt know which plot should be the main plot to follow so he cant transition clean into it cause no one knows what the main story even is but can name me alot of side stories who lead to alot of things except sex or even naked ppl.
But what exactly is the plot? You said it's a masterpiece before, now you said it develops perfectly. But you haven't actually been able to explain what the plot actually is. Please explain what the plot is and why it develops perfectly and is such a masterpiece.The plot develops perfectly. We went through the introductory part and go to the main one
I actually find the teacher character and path to be more exciting and believable than either of the suggestions above.Before the update, I've personally imagined the whole teacher drama a lot more elaborated, if I may say so.
The teacher character could have been put to better use if given a different personality.
Assume instead he was a charming, friendly, nice one...
On the good path > teacher accepts dinner at Sophia's home > makes friends with Liam > solve Dylan's problem ofc > starts more friendly events with Sophia's family > at some point there's a threesome with him, Liam and Sophia > maybe he has a student girlfriend and they could go for a foursome.
On the filthy path > teacher is still charming and friendly > Sophia gets romantically involved with him, ofc in his bed as well > the blackmail route comes from the school principal who finds out about their relation. In such a case the blackmail would have more ground than the history test one. Plus, Sophia would switch from good wife to cheating wife first and only then to the filthy one, making things more plausible given her prudeness.
Using characters on both paths would also help the dev by saving some renders instead of creating new events, he would only need to change text and add the different sexual content.
Plus could offer him a chance later to add more side-stories: like what if the young teacher gets involved with Ellie or Patricia?
Well, I'm really curious now to see what the dev actually has in store on this.
in update 0.4 you have to chose other choise , when sophia go to by some mexican food out from schoolfor what ever reason, I don't have the scene on the train. She just gets on the bus and goes home what do I need to do to get that scene
Yeah, and the guy in the middle not moving is me, the one that don't give a shitThis thread is like
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Let me explain what I meant: they've not gone much beyond their stock personality types, only the daughter got some insight in the scene with her friend this go around. That was the only good scene in the update, because I learned a little something about her. The rest was just filler, you don't learn anything from someone's shirt tearing open AGAIN. That's great that you have plans to go deeper, I wish you the best on that. I really do. But good storytelling is about using your time efficiently.If you hardly know anything about the characters yet then I'm really sorry for you because there has been shown and explained a lot about them! Really every characters has a different personality! And of course you'll still learn more about them, after all this has been just maybe 18% of the whole games!
I never said that even once at all in any of my post.With "nothing happened at all" you and many other means no "porn content"!
You're completely missing the point, and what you said here actually supported what @Yggalf mentioned as a problem of the writing. You're writing A LOT of side-stories that are pretty much individual and disconnected from one another because there is no main plot.Because actually there happened some really important things for the further course of the story: 1) the little approach of Sophia and Ellie 2) the reaction on the subway assault 3) If nursing job accepted: Sophia and the old men got to know each other a bit 4) Emma's "transformation" and a further approach to Sophia (they got kind of a friendly relationship now) 5) Dylan got some new bruises - Sophia becomes a little suspicious and talks with her husband about it 6) Liam meets Nathalie 7) The dinner with Dylan's teacher and him showing his real face (he's currently the obstacle of Dylan's way to college!)
Thank you, and this is why your game is more like a Kardashian reality show where the camera simply follows the person and see what happens in their life without necessarily having any narrative. Reality shows have a bunch of episodes but no singular overarching storyline from beginning to the end. That's why I disagree with someone who said your plot is a masterpiece. The game is simply "be Sophia", and that is not a plot. It's just content.My game is much more like a real life adventure, where the main goal is the approach to the people you met, get to know each other better and maybe helping to solve their problems.
You have even the author of the game explained everything. Enough of subjective and unreasonable criticism. The game is gorgeous. It is beautiful all the models, conversations, dialogues, plot. Smooth, unhurried development of the plot - this is the strength of the game, not a flaw. The absence of stupid porn scenes at the beginning of the game is good, not bad. If you do not like it, this game is not for you. Play in stereotyped, stupid porn.But what exactly is the plot? You said it's a masterpiece before, now you said it develops perfectly. But you haven't actually been able to explain what the plot actually is. Please explain what the plot is and why it develops perfectly and is such a masterpiece.
If someone asked what the plot of Harry Potter is, the answer is not simply "well it's about Harry" though a boy named Harry is indeed the main character. There are things happening around him, there is a plot going on, and that Harry is simply the character within the plot that the main story revolves around.
On the other hand, there is no actual plot going on in this game other than just being Sophia. Yes, there are things happening to other characters, yes there are things happening to Sophia herself, but there is nothing that ties them around together to be called a plot. It's simply individual mini stories that don't really go anywhere, and not really connected to one another either. They exist simply so the game has content. That's why plot-wise, it's pretty much like a Kardashian reality show where it's simply about things happening to Kardashians without necessarily having a plot/narrative to the story. To me, that is not a masterpiece.
And once again you praised the plot without ever able to explain what the plot is. It's amazing how one can enjoy something that one doesn't even know what it is.Smooth, unhurried development of the plot
your gif ! Can you tell me what the name of the movie please ????????Just more Ellie please....
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