VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.205] [Lust & Passion]

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karleston

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Luxu_Esp said:
He had introduced the flashback to justify things accelerating.

At the moment, if you play the story from zero like a newcommer, it makes no sense most of the things she is probable going to do in 3/4 day games like hotwifing, cuckolding, bbc ing, incesting, etc... She was 16 days ago a conservative mother scared to show up with a bikini, and now she is about to have sex with kids, thugs, mafia bosses, janitors, her husband boss, too much of a jump.

The flashback makes no sense. A girl who fucked proactively her friend's father and possed naked for a bikini magazine, is not afraid to show a boob in a small private sauna where everybody is fully naked, for example...

This update woman is not Sophia, the writter had fundamentally changed the character. Im confused now, I feel like I don't know her anymore and I've lost almost all empathy for her. To be fair, I feel right now like she is a fraud, instead of feeling like protecting her from events, I feel like throwing her on every posible shit.

That flashback is a cheap writting trick to accelerate and justify things. So from now on, I would expect this novel instead of being "the slow one with true writting" into a "compressed collection of brazzer porn clips". So for the impatients, I'm guessing your time is getting close.
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So if this was D-S part 1 and part 2 happens on the same day...its already about 11pm so does Sophia go to Dylans room after Liam goes to sleep??
 
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kewlbigdan said:
Is there a way to get to the dialog text without the pics. Or do you need to open the code?
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If you would scroll up two posts from yours you will see someone has quoted someone that has links to images from a few of the updates.
 
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Luxu_Esp said:
He had introduced the flashback to justify things accelerating.

At the moment, if you play the story from zero like a newcommer, it makes no sense most of the things she is probable going to do in 3/4 day games like hotwifing, cuckolding, bbc ing, incesting, etc... She was 16 days ago a conservative mother scared to show up with a bikini, and now she is about to have sex with kids, thugs, mafia bosses, janitors, her husband boss, too much of a jump.

The flashback makes no sense. A girl who fucked proactively her friend's father and possed naked for a bikini magazine, is not afraid to show a boob in a small private sauna where everybody is fully naked, for example...

This update woman is not Sophia, the writter had fundamentally changed the character. Im confused now, I feel like I don't know her anymore and I've lost almost all empathy for her. To be fair, I feel right now like she is a fraud, instead of feeling like protecting her from events, I feel like throwing her on every posible shit.

That flashback is a cheap writting trick to accelerate and justify things. So from now on, I would expect this novel instead of being "the slow one with true writting" into a "compressed collection of brazzer porn clips". So for the impatients, I'm guessing your time is getting close.
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You are a little late... nothing here makes sense, the Dylan scene is par for the course.

It never made sense with how much of prude she was early for any of this to happen in the span of a month(that LP set it for himself).
In a couple of weeks she went from prude to woman who gets off showing her tits to any guy who will look... and in another week will graduate to riding cocks(presumably).

It also doesn't make sense that in a single day, she showed her tits in class, got groped(and enjoyed), showed her tits to a gang, allowed kids to play with her tits and ass (and enjoyed "again"), teased and got her tits sucked by the neighbors kid (and enjoyed immensely), was having a blast showing her tits yet again in the hair saloon and the husbands boss to boot... before showing her tits and getting groped by her son, and again enjoying a lot.
Did all these events before the Dylan one make sense to you?

How can a person do this so many times in a single day and still act like this is all new to her and doesn't understand what's going on? At least write some alternate dialogue to acknowledge if someone is going heavily in the filthy path she understands that she enjoys this now, doing this so many times and still thinking "i don't understand this", is the worst sin of this game, even worst than the interruptions...

And LP is still saying that Sophia "needs to be chased" because "women need to be chased" or some shit... sure rings hollow when she's about as resistant as wet paper to putting on a show for anyone who'll watch it.
 
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Luxu_Esp said:
He had introduced the flashback to justify things accelerating.

At the moment, if you play the story from zero like a newcommer, it makes no sense most of the things she is probable going to do in 3/4 day games like hotwifing, cuckolding, bbc ing, incesting, etc... She was 16 days ago a conservative mother scared to show up with a bikini, and now she is about to have sex with kids, thugs, mafia bosses, janitors, her husband boss, too much of a jump.

The flashback makes no sense. A girl who fucked proactively her friend's father and possed naked for a bikini magazine, is not afraid to show a boob in a small private sauna where everybody is fully naked, for example...

This update woman is not Sophia, the writter had fundamentally changed the character. Im confused now, I feel like I don't know her anymore and I've lost almost all empathy for her. To be fair, I feel right now like she is a fraud, instead of feeling like protecting her from events, I feel like throwing her on every posible shit.

That flashback is a cheap writting trick to accelerate and justify things. So from now on, I would expect this novel instead of being "the slow one with true writting" into a "compressed collection of brazzer porn clips". So for the impatients, I'm guessing your time is getting close.
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Luxu_Esp said:
He had introduced the flashback to justify things accelerating.

At the moment, if you play the story from zero like a newcommer, it makes no sense most of the things she is probable going to do in 3/4 day games like hotwifing, cuckolding, bbc ing, incesting, etc... She was 16 days ago a conservative mother scared to show up with a bikini, and now she is about to have sex with kids, thugs, mafia bosses, janitors, her husband boss, too much of a jump.

The flashback makes no sense. A girl who fucked proactively her friend's father and possed naked for a bikini magazine, is not afraid to show a boob in a small private sauna where everybody is fully naked, for example...

This update woman is not Sophia, the writter had fundamentally changed the character. Im confused now, I feel like I don't know her anymore and I've lost almost all empathy for her. To be fair, I feel right now like she is a fraud, instead of feeling like protecting her from events, I feel like throwing her on every posible shit.

That flashback is a cheap writting trick to accelerate and justify things. So from now on, I would expect this novel instead of being "the slow one with true writting" into a "compressed collection of brazzer porn clips". So for the impatients, I'm guessing your time is getting close.
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ALL MOOD FOR THIS GAME VANISHED WHEN I FOUND ITS NOT POSSIBLE ROMANTIC PLAY FOR ONLY DYLAN ROUTE.....
 
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LSC82 said:
You are a little late... nothing here makes sense, the Dylan scene is par for the course.

It never made sense with how much of prude she was early for any of this to happen in the span of a month(that LP set it for himself).
In a couple of weeks she went from prude to woman who gets off showing her tits to any guy who will look... and in another week will graduate to riding cocks(presumably).

It also doesn't make sense that in a single day, she showed her tits in class, got groped(and enjoyed), showed her tits to a gang, allowed kids to play with her tits and ass (and enjoyed "again"), teased and got her tits sucked by the neighbors kid (and enjoyed immensely), was having a blast showing her tits yet again in the hair saloon and the husbands boss to boot... before showing her tits and getting groped by her son, and again enjoying a lot.
Did all these events before the Dylan one make sense to you?

How can a person do this so many times in a single day and still act like this is all new to her and doesn't understand what's going on? At least write some alternate dialogue to acknowledge if someone is going heavily in the filthy path she understands that she enjoys this now, doing this so many times and still thinking "i don't understand this", is the worst sin of this game, even worst than the interruptions...

And LP is still saying that Sophia "needs to be chased" because "women need to be chased" or some shit... sure rings hollow when she's about as resistant as wet paper to putting on a show for anyone who'll watch it.
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Have you read JRR Martin's series of Game of Thrones? Some 800 pages in each book just to see your favorite characters getting killed off and taking forever to get a major plot resolved. Now imagine the DEVs made this game like Martin's books. We would still be playing the fraking Prolog after all this time.

So sure, mom was a bit looser with her morals before she got married--found religion when she got married--and now after some temptation is soon going to be the neighborhood doorknob.

Buttttttttt... remember who is making her choices for poor old Sophia? LOL! All kidding aside, sure things are happening fast and for others not fast enough. Some people think Pablo Picasso is one hell of an artist and others, like myself, even if I could afford buying his paintings wouldn't.
 
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kewlbigdan said:
Is there a way to get to the dialog text without the pics. Or do you need to open the code?
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In the game folder there's a file called day20.rpy. Open it with notepad and you can get the dialog, although there's some code in between too. In the first part of the game that file was script.rpy

I used it to put some voices to Julia's scene with Sophia.
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By the way, I think that Julia's scene was one of the best written scenes so far, one of my favorites.
 
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TomUK said:
No, if they do it should be Liam's father as then you could, if it isn't already planned, make out he is the Liam Parker that took the photos of Sophia that Dylan found and they had an affair which continued after she married her husband and Ellie and Dylan are his kids and not Sophia's husband's.
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Where did this theory come from? It looks to me more like a speculation (or even better a f95 speculation) as I haven’t seen any sources being shared…
 
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rowdyranger

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jstreet said:
Part 1 is finished and as for Part 2 it is alright but it's a gamble on each update if you will see anything on the path you're playing.
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Not worth playing. To unrealistic!!!! Time span and corruption of Sophia doesn't make sense.... No women who hasn't had sex for a couple of weeks will result in these kinds of activities. Mostly if they have been fateful for 20 years... I could see if Liam had been working very long hours or out of town lots while trying to sell or merging his company for the last 8 or 10 months and she is not getting satisfied. Only my opinion!
 
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