As a truly outside observer that is way more interested in the development insanity than game, I would agree. It makes zero sense from a plot pacing or logic standpoint (even for a porn story) but the most happens from a forking point from it.
I will wait every few updates and skim through it to see what has happened and this was the last one that felt like it wasn't outright trying to waste time or milk. Yet, it did plenty of that through being absolutely illogical in every way, lol.
Oddly, Sam has both of the top two moments there. The most coherent happening so far in this entire story is when Sam has the concert and then got in the hot tub with her. It made logical sense and you could believe more would have happened had the husband not come home (what a coincidence).
She is excited by this teenager's interest and advances so she goes to his show. She is actually impressed, forgetting herself for a bit and turned on. She gets a ride home with him, he makes a move that she denies. She then hops in the tub and he joins her. He makes more advances and she slowly gives in to wanting to feel young again. The wine also helps. Then, boom, they're interrupted.
Believable.
The instance in his bedroom the next day is "hotter" but makes no sense. Not that this woman couldn't have gone to stop it and found herself unable to. That's not hard to believe. What's hard to believe is the pacing of events (she takes her clothes off like 3x, lol) and Sam himself.
This teen boy has been obsessed with her since childhood. The night before he felt her up, made out with her and licked her pussy over the bikini. The next day he gets her shirt/bra off and...doesn't even try to do more beyond a slight move that she rebuffs and he 100% stops at. This is AFTER talking her into not stopping it all to begin with! That wouldn't illicit fear of scaring her off, it would essentially be a green light to push it.
Then he takes her panties down with his face incesfrom her pussy and...doesn't try anything. Not a kiss or lick or nuzzle. His dick has to be leaking and balls hurting yet he just doesn't try, lol. Ok.
No. At that point you have her. I'm not saying he fucks her but you write it differently before trying to pass that off as realistic (which is what he claims to strive for).
Long diatribe that I could have went into more detail on but while I'd agree it's the best overall scene it doesn't male any sense beyond throwing a bone to the fans that are slowly getting fed up.
