VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.205] [Lust & Passion]

[Nick198]

Said it before and I'll say it again. He needs to hire a team to help him. For the amount of time it has taken to get to the latest update from start of the game Dessert for Daughter was well on it's way to being completed.

He has pigeon-holed himself creating too many branching storylines. Too many superfluous characters and hasn't got a clear direction he is going in. Ever since he split the game from standard updates to Part 1 and Part 2. The updates have been all over the place.

Don't missunderstand me, the game is brilliant but he is running the risk of not the game being abandoned but his following.

Now I don't pretend to know what the delevopment cycle is like. I haven't the first clue how to design a VN. Let alone one like this but anyone can see LP needs help with this. He shouldn't be afraid to ask for it.

No, he doesn't need help. His goal is to make this game for the rest of his life, understand?

 

[rAmSiMaL]

I cried in joy .. yes today I feel happy.. yes I'm a happy man

And what about this…? Did you wet your pants? (Just kidding)

 

[LSC82]

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There is "something" in Sophia's past and there is evidence for it. After this last release where Dylan was asking questions about Sophia's modeling experience, Sophia deliberately left out that the photographer was Liam. We learned that when Dylan re-looked at his research and saw Liam's name.

I've already put out there the idea that Sophia wasn't totally truthful recounting her past, such as 'was there more to Sophia's "first time" with her best friend's father. No one picked up on that possibility.

So why would Sophia not tell Dyaln that his where she met his father? What other half-truths are there? This is a stretch, but Liam and Sophia are or have talked about a wife-swap with the soon to be married new couple. Normal straightlaced marriages usually don't have that topic come up.

Now how strategic is the developer here is the big question. Because how the story is evolved will be how clever the writer is. A bit of a colored past could explain why Sophia lets things get a little out of control.

The overarching story(it's obviously still unfolding so i may be wrong) could be heading to that of a girl who was somewhat adventurous and then got married and pregnant(i don't remember if they ever explicitly say which order) and fell into the rut of being "a Wife and Mother" (insert "there he said it" gif ).
With time and responsabilities of being a mom this woman became extremely conservative and even a prude, but upon moving to a different town, meeting new people, getting involved in some weird situations... she starts to get in touch with her old slutty self and remember how much she enjoys showing her body and being sexual.

I don't think it will be full "she was a pornstar", but her past is wide open, things like being a raging party girl, dabbled in show girl dancing... are entirely possible, the only limit is the writers creativity.

Her reluctance to open up about her past gives this opening for more stuff to come out.
Patricia, the only person who truly knows everything about Sophia seems to believe there's a lot more to Sophia than "good wife".

 

[Rajesh Ram]

And then come back for the next update

Come Back after 2-3 years,
Because until then there will be unnecessary boring fillers to waste some more time.

 

[tofhdns]

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[LSC82]

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This is the silliest aspect of this game, she got groped over and over and over a few hours apart from each event, and somehow she manages to be surprised that she ends up enjoying it each time it happened.

 

[meduusa]

This is the silliest aspect of this game, she got groped over and over and over a few hours apart from each event, and somehow she manages to be surprised that she ends up enjoying it each time it happened.

That's why you can tell L&P doesn't have the story already written, or he is just a bad, bad writer

 

[rAmSiMaL]

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[Jude6]

This is the silliest aspect of this game, she got groped over and over and over a few hours apart from each event, and somehow she manages to be surprised that she ends up enjoying it each time it happened.

I don't think this is an entirely fair criticism though - we have to acknowledge that very few story-lines are allowed to reference each other.
If sophia is getting felt up by Dylan and thinking about how "This is okay because I was already felt up today by Zac, Andre, the Myers Boys and Sam" but you're not playing any of those paths then it would be pretty jarring.

Don't get me wrong I'm all for criticising the developer's strange choices, but compartmentalizing story-lines is pretty low on my list, at least when compared to the 40 Year Development Schedule.

 

[Barretto24]

No, he doesn't need help. His goal is to make this game for the rest of his life, understand?

That's your opinion.

 

[wzelisen]

And what about this…? Did you wet your pants? (Just kidding)

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again bathtub scene，What more scenes creation？

 

[LSC82]

I don't think this is an entirely fair criticism though - we have to acknowledge that very few story-lines are allowed to reference each other.
If sophia is getting felt up by Dylan and thinking about how "This is okay because I was already felt up today by Zac, Andre, the Myers Boys and Sam" but you're not playing any of those paths then it would be pretty jarring.

Don't get me wrong I'm all for criticising the developer's strange choices, but compartmentalizing story-lines is pretty low on my list, at least when compared to the 40 Year Development Schedule.

I've seen VNs that do a much better job at acknowledging past events, minor dialogue differences that trigger depending on previous choices.
AWAM seems wholly unaware of anything that happened outside the current scene, maybe the previous scene with the particular character involved in it, but nothing of what Sophia has been up to lately.

It's not helped by the fact that progression is more or less linear and kept on par between the different characters, so depending on how you play Sophia may end up flashing her tits 50 times in a day and somehow surprised each time that she finds this exciting.
If LP doesn't learn how to do path/dialogue flags it's gonna be even worst in 25 years when she's giving blowjobs to each guy that passes her by in the street and that keeps surprising her....

Also i'd like to point out that i called this thing "silly" not "the worst" aspect of AWAM.
But yeah, it's silly, a little stupid, unintentionally funny right now... it can get worst when/if the sex acts start to scale up.

 

[tofhdns]

I don't think this is an entirely fair criticism though - we have to acknowledge that very few story-lines are allowed to reference each other.
If sophia is getting felt up by Dylan and thinking about how "This is okay because I was already felt up today by Zac, Andre, the Myers Boys and Sam" but you're not playing any of those paths then it would be pretty jarring.

Don't get me wrong I'm all for criticising the developer's strange choices, but compartmentalizing story-lines is pretty low on my list, at least when compared to the 40 Year Development Schedule.

Sophia made "Jack, Aiden's group, Meyer's children, Sam, Claire, bathtub-Dylan, jacuzzi-Dylan" touch her breasts, it was one route, and this happened in one day on the 20th.

 

[DIRTY MIND]

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Sophia made "Jack, Aiden's group, Meyer's children, Claire, bathtub-Dylan, jacuzzi-Dylan" touch her breasts, it was one route, and this happened in one day on the 20th.

i think, tofhdns you forgot the hottest event of pd 13 and whole AWAM game. plz add.

 

[DIRTY MIND]

We will have to wait many years before we see another hottest event like Sam's.

 

[tofhdns]

i think, tofhdns you forgot the hottest event of pd 13 and whole AWAM game. plz add.


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I lost points in the process of redoing.
And I just got that point back and enjoyed the Sam scene again.

 

[Brazzoth]

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Probably some maternal issue from the dev

 

[tofhdns]

i think, tofhdns you forgot the hottest event of pd 13 and whole AWAM game. plz add.




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I just realized that I missed the last part of the post.
I added it.

 

[Deleted member 3230034]

Do you guys think they’ll both be completely naked? That’s one of the only ways Dylan, passes sam progress but not by much as LP mentioned in his previous post.

 

[Captain Bipto]

Do you guys think they’ll both be completely naked? That’s one of the only ways Dylan, passes sam progress but not by much as LP mentioned in his previous post.

ima say he gets a hand down her panties or he gets her to touch his pee pee (I'm optimistic)