VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.205] [Lust & Passion]

[tofhdns]

On the basis of the classic three-act structure, which I simply assume, AWAM is now clearly in the second act (development). Here, in my opinion, we are still at the very beginning and it will be some time before the story really comes to an end (solution or disaster of the story). However, it should be clear to everyone here that L&P spent a lot of time on the exposition of the characters and the basic stettings. I think there is little to discuss here and if you have a problem with the time investment, then you are certainly not alone, because I also think that L&P is bad at project management.

Where do you see a change in AWAM setting?!? The point I was trying to make is that in a good story, the characters going through changes based on the story ( beased on the challenges that have to be overcome in the story). For Sophia, this certainly includes her curruption. But all this is part of the story and not a change of setting. Sorry, either I have completely misunderstood you or you are talking nonsense.

I agree with you that the story of the game has moved on to the next branch.

But, the period was too long. (more than 6 years)

He also abruptly put Sofia's past in because he felt limited in advancing the story. (my feel)

As a result, Sophia, who had been "the daughter of a wealthy, conservative scholarly family living in a small town," became a poor, impulsive, promiscuous woman.

This is a setting change.

Dylan went from a kid who couldn't fight but was just, to a kid who was good at fighting but cheated on his mother.
Also, he was a naive kid who had difficulty approaching girls, but he changed into a kid who receives interest from various girls and knows the nightlife.

This is also a setting change.

This isn't growth, it's discarding the initial settings.

Six years is the period in which a drama can come out until season 3 or 4.
This game is old enough that the developer wanted to change the start date of the game from 2017 to 2020.

This developer should have started years ago with whatever he was going to do, including changing the settings.

 

[tofhdns]

addition:

When there was no flashback of Sophia.
she was a woman who fell in love with her first love, Liam, at a relatively young age, became pregnant and married. (many people would have thought so)

When Sofia's flashbacks appear.
she was promiscuous from her childhood, that she had sex with several men, and that she had sex with Liam, and when she became pregnant, she became the woman who married him.

The two are completely different in content and feel.

There's a reason so many people complained when the flashbacks appeared, saying, "Sophia turned into a whore."

 

[DylansMoM_001]

Progress Report Ver. 0.190.

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Ffs just release it already

 

[hzjujk]

addition:

When there was no flashback of Sophia.
she was a woman who fell in love with her first love, Liam, at a relatively young age, became pregnant and married. (many people would have thought so)

When Sofia's flashbacks appear.
she was promiscuous from her childhood, that she had sex with several men, and that she had sex with Liam, and when she became pregnant, she became the woman who married him.

The two are completely different in content and feel.

There's a reason so many people complained when the flashbacks appeared, saying, "Sophia turned into a whore."

Completely exaggerated! Sophia is portrayed as a normal young woman who enjoys the freedoms of the 20th/21st century. I have yet to see anything from Sophia's youth for which Sophia deserves the label "whore".

 

[tofhdns]

Completely exaggerated! Sophia is portrayed as a normal young woman who enjoys the freedoms of the 20th/21st century. I have yet to see anything from Sophia's youth for which Sophia deserves the label "whore".

I admit that it was an exaggeration.
But it was such a shock and a betrayal.

 

[sssaam.cindy.2019]

I think someone else did the renders there and just slapped a youth story then got bored and finished quickly... let me suck my friend's dad cock ... so like Sophia

I admit that it was an exaggeration.
But it was such a shock and a betrayal.

 

[Golden Trump]

I once had a dream...
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It will come true, maybe by Christmas 2040 at the earliest.

 

[tofhdns]

I think someone else did the renders there and just slapped a youth story then got bored and finished quickly... let me suck my friend's dad cock ... so like Sophia

yes.

I think he realized at some point that he couldn't continue the story this way.
Or I think there must have been pressure from sponsors.

But his methods are so wrong.

Like I've said many times, he delayed the story too much and piled it on too much, so he ended up driving himself into a corner, and as he admits, he can't handle this anymore.

He should have started years ago what he was about to do now.

If he did, he wouldn't have done anything to change Sofia's past, and he would have been able to make Dylan's growing up (the changing process) convincing enough. not Dylan's setting change.

Also, even without the flashbacks, it would have been convincing enough for Sophia to change her behavior after moving to the big city. if had the principal or Neil pressured her a little more, if had progressed her relationship with Larry a little more, if had Sam and Sophia had sex.

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

Progress Report Ver. 0.190.

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what's the fucking problem with that 5% render?

 

[菊花献给党]

Is it possible for September

 

[arifarfi]

it seems L&P wake up his dreams and get back to work.
Nice news.
Keep Going Man...

 

[Mortem67888]

Any other interesting game suggestions?

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

Any other interesting game suggestions?

True_Bond

 

[RUSSIAN MAFIA]

Purely theory (fantasy)! Sofia's scene at the Jacuzzi! The cunning dick Dylan, as usual, persuades Mom to take a refreshing bath (Jacuzzi). Dylan begs (begs) take off her underwear.... As usual, Sofia is wrong, we shouldn't and so on and so forth.... Suddenly she notices a dim light on the house (which is on a tree). It turns out that all this time, Sam was watching them.... Since Sofia likes to tease Sam, she starts to slowly take them off (showing a little show for Sam! ). At some point, Sam loses consciousness and falls.... They hear a noise and run to see what happened....While Dylan walks around the yard looking for noise, Sofia climbs the stairs to the tree house and sees Sam lying with a dick in his hands... And since they were completely naked in the Jacuzzi, this means that Sofia is standing completely naked on the stairs, then an epic view opens up from behind ..... And there are tons of options.... phaaaaah for taste and color! .... Her whole ass is at Dylan's disposal, and her mouth and hands are at Sam's disposal!

 

[Rajesh Ram]

Any other interesting game suggestions?

No more money , Life in Santa country , Away from home, Monkey Business.

 

[E = mc^2]

what's the fucking problem with that 5% render?

It's a reason if required.

 

[S.t.s]

This update has no value because even though it doesn't have any animation, it has passed so much time, I think it's time for the members of this game to ban it, so that maybe the developer would be disciplined a little, if he also abandons the game, it's not a problem Because firstly, there are many beautiful games with excellent progress and secondly, with this progress that this game has, 10 centuries will not end. This developer is very annoying.

 

[BigBrotherrrr]

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Best scene in the entire game

What is happening here?

 

[Radoslaw Wolf]

what's the fucking problem with that 5% render?

A safety buffer to lure his imbecile enablers to the max.

 

[XaGnard]

I agree with you that the story of the game has moved on to the next branch.

But, the period was too long. (more than 6 years)

He also abruptly put Sofia's past in because he felt limited in advancing the story. (my feel)

As a result, Sophia, who had been "the daughter of a wealthy, conservative scholarly family living in a small town," became a poor, impulsive, promiscuous woman.

This is a setting change.

Dylan went from a kid who couldn't fight but was just, to a kid who was good at fighting but cheated on his mother.
Also, he was a naive kid who had difficulty approaching girls, but he changed into a kid who receives interest from various girls and knows the nightlife.

This is also a setting change.

This isn't growth, it's discarding the initial settings.

Six years is the period in which a drama can come out until season 3 or 4.
This game is old enough that the developer wanted to change the start date of the game from 2017 to 2020.

This developer should have started years ago with whatever he was going to do, including changing the settings.

It is not uncommon in story telling to break the timeline through flashbacks (in this case, through memories). But this is not a break with the setting, it is simply a storytelling element. I can't remember if Sophia said anything at the beginning of the story that contradicted the flashback. However, the conditions you mentioned could very well fit into a coherent story, considering that Sophia started her own household with Liam and this may not have been easy financially in the beginning.

The transformation of Dylan is very much part of the story (with the combat training) but does not fit at all with the idea of the game days. If L&P had spread the story over maybe a in game year, then the whole thing could have fit at least halfway. It's a too-fast transition based on Dylan's development in the story, but not a change of setting.

As I said, I think L&P is bad at project planning. AWAM simply needs far too much time for the development. That this should have an impact on the story is, in my opinion, unavoidable, since initially many planned contents should be omitted to speed up the development. I wish L&P would even go further here and take certain side stories, such as Aiden's, out of the game. For me, the story is mostly tied around Dylan, Ellie, Sam, Liam, Patricia, etc. Here lies the potential and the core of the story.