doccop63

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It's becoming less fun. In the story of Sophia, Dylan, and her older sister, I think the sudden development really ruined the game.
Tbh, I think the story should shift to that dynamic. Patricia is Definitely the more sexually open of the sisters and she has eyes on her nephew who she sees as a young man and possible side LI. It would make an interesting story with Sophia trying to keep Patricia away from Dylan while being somewhat hypocritical as she goes after Sam. Adding Amber to the mix would make for serious fireworks. I could see it now. Amber lusting for and going after Dylan, Sophia after Sam, both women trying to keep their affairs with their sons from each other.
Then there's Patrica who has the hots for her nephew and having no qualms about screwing him but being sneaky about it. Finally there's Dylan who clearly intends to get closer with Amber, while also being in love with and lusting after his mother and then developing feelings for Aunt Patricia that she's subtly opening. THAT would be great storytelling.
 
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OZtheW1ZARD

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The year 2020 is 2328, so how can the year 2019 be 2480?

Write the figures by year starting from 2018 here.
Oh, I get it now. You don't understand what these numbers are. That is why you are so confused.

This is the total number of renders L&P did in 2019 (2480 individual renders) and 2020 (2328) respectively.
In total he did more renders in 2019 than in 2020, hence the lower number.
 

AlfredBundy4

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He went to event based updates to speed up development time but it had the oppersite effect and adding events out of the blue does not help either.
But we really need to know what happens between Ellie's best friend and her BF...by themselves!

People cannot possibly enjoy this story to a full conclusion unless we see the 6 month update showing that time Dylan went to the bathroom while at the baseball game and in the bathroom he saw two total strangers making out!

Not adding those events would make the story about A WIFE AND MOTHER totally incomplete.
 

AlfredBundy4

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What I don't understand is how L&P hadn't anticipated all of that? If he/she intended the story to be a "slow burn" tale of corruption?, how did he/she expect 2 years worth of writing to do that?
I'm an amateur writer who's story about a nymphomaniac porn actress, started 5 years ago and is currently not even at 1/3 of the story being told. I've only covered about 10 days in my tale. Tbh, given the number of characters that I introduced, I may not get to finish anytime soon, and I don't even have illustrations involved!
I'm fairly certain that, if I tried to turn it into a VN, I would be at the same point as L&P. The thing is when introducing ancillary characters, your story grows exponentially. Again, how could he/she not anticipate how long a "slow burn" would take and having people helping to get it told?
Not trying to defend L&P in this next comment but, if you're hiring people to help you with an illustrated story, doing so Ain't cheap. If you go online to find someone to help with rendering or such, many have an asking price of at least €/$1500 per month; quite expensive. When doing collaborative work, it takes time because their work needs to be approved by the dev before being put into production.
My biggest gripe is, if you have the help, the rendered scenes should be getting better. Changing the character model, which was blamed for a delay, shouldn't have been a necessity. If he/she wants to move the story along, you don't need 15- 16 panels to cover a convo on the couch when 8 or 9 would do or, as someone pointed out, 3-4 panels showing Sophia leaving the room when 2, at the most, would do. I have to call into question L&P's judgment as well as their intent.
Because they so clearly didn't plan any of it ahead of time, much less have it all planned and written out.

They just make the shit as it comes off of the loosest framework/timeline possible.
 

tofhdns

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Oh, I get it now. You don't understand what these numbers are. That is why you are so confused.

This is the total number of renders L&P did in 2019 (2480 individual renders) and 2020 (2328) respectively.
In total he did more renders in 2019 than in 2020, hence the lower number.
I know.

Write down everything you calculated by year.
 
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tofhdns

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I did. Literally few pages back.
It is clear to me that you don't even understand what am I talking about so don't bother mate.
Seriously, just stop.
:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:

I agreed with the 2328 figure for 2020.
But I disagreed with the 2480 figure for 2019.

I'm telling you that your numbers are wrong.

Your method of running away is also really trivial.

There is no need for unnecessary words. Just write down the numbers.
The year 2020 is 2328, so how can the year 2019 be 2480?

Write the figures by year starting from 2018 here.
 
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tofhdns

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If the number in 2020 year is 2328 and the number in 2019 year is 2480, you must either intentionally omit 295 or the number in 2018 year must be 2980.

In this case, there is a problem with your counting method or your % is wrong.

I would like to know whether you intentionally manipulated the numbers or not.

I already know that number.



Just write down the numbers. No need to say anything else.
 
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