VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.205b] [Lust & Passion]

[asprin33]

when next update publish?

 

[Woodalicca]

when next update publish?

Tomorrow.

 

[fishbrain]

Let him forget about those decrepit old wrinkled men and what history contains Without them. Who would want to see living corpses being masturbated by the beautiful Sofia

For real, get rid of the kiddie porn too, both sidejobs are pointless to the story.

 

[Bill_Buttlicker]

when next update publish?

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Finished the update yesterday.

Pros: good renders. Good erotic story telling.

Cons: too much unnecessary dialogue used as filler and extra unnecessary renders.

I mean for the time constraints of the tutoring lesson some of the sexual situation makes sense, however we're to believe the one standing next to her rubs his dick on her thigh, but the one standing behind her ( the natural coitus position) all pumped full of hormones and youthful curiosity isn't going to attempt to at least rub his dick on her butt? Especially while he's gripping her waist?

So Sofia attempts to establish some ground rules, yet effs the timing so badly she tries to get the boys off faster by letting them grope her and she talks dirty to them. Meanwhile is getting massively aroused by all of this. Yet still somehow retains a smidgen of control? I don't fucking buy it. Yet L&P throws in a handy animation that teases she's going to kiss a dick and a double blow job. And tells one of the boys to grab her tit and pinch her nipple. She tastes a tiny drop of cum and that's supposed to excite us?

The cliffhanger was equally lame. Prediction: she just walks by an open door masturbation scene. Quickly grabs the bag and leaves.
L&P style has become so sophomoric, throw in unnecessary dialogue and predictable it steals away from his erotic writing.
If he got rid of the unnecessary dialogue and was a bit more realistic with the sexual tension he could do two scenes per update and get the story moving along at a normal pace.

This game is basically becoming one to watch to see if L&P finally gets it, and learns how to move a story along or continues fumbling along like a virgin scared to pull the trigger.

I support a few other devs, but this one.......is still a bit clueless.

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yourmomma, good review... and spares me the bother of doing the download

But in some ways, you sound surprised as to the outcome. I said in an earlier post that there wasn't really going to be anything with this release-- that no way some 3 little snots were going to nail Sophia considering the rest of the things she has already been through.

And your 100% spot on:

"L&P style has become so sophomoric, throw in unnecessary dialogue and predictable it steals away from his erotic writing.
If he got rid of the unnecessary dialogue and was a bit more realistic with the sexual tension he could do two scenes per update and get the story moving along at a normal pace." Oh, there is a detectible plan L&P is working on... a plan and rather stupid at that. L&P is building for a grand climatic series of endings. In theory, this time, next year, maybe the boys get to rail Sophia... and I only say that because just ahead of that event, everyone ELSE has had themself some Sophia and she ought to be absolutely corrupted and "filthy."

"This game is basically becoming one to watch to see if L&P finally gets it, and learns how to move a story along or continues fumbling along like a virgin scared to pull the trigger." Actually, for many of us it's like waiting around for a predictable train wreck and standing there with our lawn chairs and popcorn. However, just to follow up on your critique with regards to the story plot. The last "tutor" scene was a complete dud because L&P missed the opportunity to set up this latest "tutoring" update. If you recall toward the end of that scene Sophia had to take a phone call and the boys got handsy with her. Yes Anna in part acted like what a "normal" person would have (sort of) and didn't get really aroused by it. For the sake of the story, Sophia should have become more aroused to set up THIS UPDATE. As it is two huge plot holes exist. The first how is lingerie a topic for sex ed. L&P's reasonings for the lingerie plot are worse than the plot hole it created. And second it sounds like Sophia was 'planning' a naughty adventure rather that she falling into it as is the case in most of her adventures. If L&P is finally moving the needle to where Sophia is actually encouraging naughty time and planning for it. at least that is some progress. Guess we'll all know in about 7-8 months when there are more Dylan events if that is the case.

 

[tofhdns]

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yourmomma, good review... and spares me the bother of doing the download

But in some ways, you sound surprised as to the outcome. I said in an earlier post that there wasn't really going to be anything with this release-- that no way some 3 little snots were going to nail Sophia considering the rest of the things she has already been through.

And your 100% spot on:

"L&P style has become so sophomoric, throw in unnecessary dialogue and predictable it steals away from his erotic writing.
If he got rid of the unnecessary dialogue and was a bit more realistic with the sexual tension he could do two scenes per update and get the story moving along at a normal pace." Oh, there is a detectible plan L&P is working on... a plan and rather stupid at that. L&P is building for a grand climatic series of endings. In theory, this time, next year, maybe the boys get to rail Sophia... and I only say that because just ahead of that event, everyone ELSE has had themself some Sophia and she ought to be absolutely corrupted and "filthy."

"This game is basically becoming one to watch to see if L&P finally gets it, and learns how to move a story along or continues fumbling along like a virgin scared to pull the trigger." Actually, for many of us it's like waiting around for a predictable train wreck and standing there with our lawn chairs and popcorn. However, just to follow up on your critique with regards to the story plot. The last "tutor" scene was a complete dud because L&P missed the opportunity to set up this latest "tutoring" update. If you recall toward the end of that scene Sophia had to take a phone call and the boys got handsy with her. Yes Anna in part acted like what a "normal" person would have (sort of) and didn't get really aroused by it. For the sake of the story, Sophia should have become more aroused to set up THIS UPDATE. As it is two huge plot holes exist. The first how is lingerie a topic for sex ed. L&P's reasonings for the lingerie plot are worse than the plot hole it created. And second it sounds like Sophia was 'planning' a naughty adventure rather that she falling into it as is the case in most of her adventures. If L&P is finally moving the needle to where Sophia is actually encouraging naughty time and planning for it. at least that is some progress. Guess we'll all know in about 7-8 months when there are more Dylan events if that is the case.

I guess LP is going to be in a huge dilemma with the cuck Dylan route.

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[yourmomma]

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yourmomma, good review... and spares me the bother of doing the download

But in some ways, you sound surprised as to the outcome. I said in an earlier post that there wasn't really going to be anything with this release-- that no way some 3 little snots were going to nail Sophia considering the rest of the things she has already been through.

And your 100% spot on:

"L&P style has become so sophomoric, throw in unnecessary dialogue and predictable it steals away from his erotic writing.
If he got rid of the unnecessary dialogue and was a bit more realistic with the sexual tension he could do two scenes per update and get the story moving along at a normal pace." Oh, there is a detectible plan L&P is working on... a plan and rather stupid at that. L&P is building for a grand climatic series of endings. In theory, this time, next year, maybe the boys get to rail Sophia... and I only say that because just ahead of that event, everyone ELSE has had themself some Sophia and she ought to be absolutely corrupted and "filthy."

"This game is basically becoming one to watch to see if L&P finally gets it, and learns how to move a story along or continues fumbling along like a virgin scared to pull the trigger." Actually, for many of us it's like waiting around for a predictable train wreck and standing there with our lawn chairs and popcorn. However, just to follow up on your critique with regards to the story plot. The last "tutor" scene was a complete dud because L&P missed the opportunity to set up this latest "tutoring" update. If you recall toward the end of that scene Sophia had to take a phone call and the boys got handsy with her. Yes Anna in part acted like what a "normal" person would have (sort of) and didn't get really aroused by it. For the sake of the story, Sophia should have become more aroused to set up THIS UPDATE. As it is two huge plot holes exist. The first how is lingerie a topic for sex ed. L&P's reasonings for the lingerie plot are worse than the plot hole it created. And second it sounds like Sophia was 'planning' a naughty adventure rather that she falling into it as is the case in most of her adventures. If L&P is finally moving the needle to where Sophia is actually encouraging naughty time and planning for it. at least that is some progress. Guess we'll all know in about 7-8 months when there are more Dylan events if that is the case.

Not really surprised, more disappointed. I predicted this update was just going to be a hand job one in the off topic thread.

You bring up some good points. Expanding on your observations about the lingerie, any woman that brings lingerie to a private event knows exactly what she's doing. This is what frustrates me about L&P's writing. It's obvious to me it lacks real world experience and pools from erotic fiction.

I mean L&P even hints to it himself. Sofia constantly has slutty thoughts and fantasies. Constantly puts herself in situations to act on these slutty thoughts, but never does.

So okay in reality if Sofia got that aroused during that entire shota threesome hand job, she'd eventually go home and at least masturbate or jump on Leam. But she doesn't do any of that. If she doesn't end up unleashing in game days worth of pent up sexual frustration sometime, I'm going to simply treat this game like an unintentional comedy of predictability.

On the other hand I almost do feel sorry for L&P, because people keeping track of all of his hints for the game has really backed him into a corner and now if he deviates away from that he runs the risk of upsetting supporters.

 

[tofhdns]

Not really surprised, more disappointed. I predicted this update was just going to be a hand job one in the off topic thread.

You bring up some good points. Expanding on your observations about the lingerie, any woman that brings lingerie to a private event knows exactly what she's doing. This is what frustrates me about L&P's writing. It's obvious to me it lacks real world experience and pools from erotic fiction.

I mean L&P even hints to it himself. Sofia constantly has slutty thoughts and fantasies. Constantly puts herself in situations to act on these slutty thoughts, but never does.

So okay in reality if Sofia got that aroused during that entire shota threesome hand job, she'd eventually go home and at least masturbate or jump on Leam. But she doesn't do any of that. If she doesn't end up unleashing in game days worth of pent up sexual frustration sometime, I'm going to simply treat this game like an unintentional comedy of predictability.

On the other hand I almost do feel sorry for L&P, because people keeping track of all of his hints for the game has really backed him into a corner and now if he deviates away from that he runs the risk of upsetting supporters.

I agree with most of your opinions, but I never feel sympathy for LP.

All the recorded schedules are conversations between LP and his sponsors.
This is LP's responsibility and his duty.

However, he changed his plans several times.
He had planned Dylan's twist, Emma's story, Claire's lesbian route, and he said he wanted to expand Dylan/Kristen's story (It's been 10 months already), but I found out recently that he backed down from that statement.

: Of course, he didn't change it arbitrarily.
: Sometimes there was a strong demand from sponsors, and sometimes he held a vote.

Recently, he held a vote on whether to continue or stop the senior event.

He announced the update date in advance, but it was never kept, and he always updated the game after making the first or second revision of the date.

He also held a vote on clothes and faces, but he lightly ignored the results.
(He eventually reworked the faces after receiving protests.)

He can change the schedule at any time.
It's just that he doesn't do it because he doesn't want to.

 

[platypushperry]

why .210 gone from op?

Is it for Shota Update?

I hope the game doesn't get banned from the site because of the update.

 

[HikenNoAcee]

update about which road ?

 

[zxcvb100]

how do I play the new update?? I got the previous version only.. nothing new

A patch that restores the second job (Tutoring) for A Wife and a Mother - Part 2 only.

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there is no link?? can someone upload it again

 

[BDFanZone]

there is no link?? can someone upload it again

please restore the patch that restore the second job...

 

[lockerxx]

so the next update is the Sophie/Leah and the first sidejob with the old people

 

[kufroe]

Any news on the Android port?

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

so the next update is the Sophie/Leah and the first sidejob with the old people

Got no interest in this next update, just hope it cums and goes as fast as Liam “the minuteman”

 

[Doloman]

The hospital part-time job in this firework of absurdity seems the most plausible. What could be more truthful than two old men with rich life experience wanting to spin a young woman they liked into a striptease and a blowjob. Everything else is outright nonsense, which is difficult to explain even by the fact that this is a porn game.
A woman without brains and goals rushes from one erotic situation to another. Long updates work for the author here. Almost every day of Sofia is very erotically tense.
If she decided to find a lover, why do she need children?
If she reached a state where she needs sex with anyone, where is the backstory? It is very doubtful that she missed sex so much in 3 weeks. She does not even have a vibrator, which would not satisfy her at this stage...
If she has an age stage of sexual activity, then why did it happen so unexpectedly? That is, everything is like in a comic or a porn video, the situation is here and now, the forms, moans and methods of intercourse are important, the rest is garbage. The author's position is strange, but what a good idea it was!

 

[lockerxx]

Got no interest in this next update, just hope it cums and goes as fast as Liam “the minuteman”

i only care about the Sophie/Leah part.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

i only care about the Sophie/Leah part.

we were guessing over in the other thread who Leah’s boyfriend might be, would be funny if it was Sam. But it will probly be one of the college guys like Logan or Tyler, cause he does not need to waste time rendering a new guy for this game

 

[TurboWojtek]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading the script.
ScriptError: Name ('game/scripts/day20.rpy', 1644943256, 24) is defined twice, at scripts/day20.rpyc:17 and game/scripts/story/day20.rpyc:18.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 359, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\main.py", line 470, in main
renpy.game.script.load_script() # sets renpy.game.script.
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 359, in load_script
self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", [ "_ren.py", ".rpy" ], dir, fn, initcode)
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 957, in load_appropriate_file
self.finish_load(stmts, initcode, filename=lastfn) # type: ignore
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 590, in finish_load
check_name(node)
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 566, in check_name
raise ScriptError("Name %s is defined twice, at %s:%d and %s:%d." %
ScriptError: Name ('game/scripts/day20.rpy', 1644943256, 24) is defined twice, at scripts/day20.rpyc:17 and game/scripts/story/day20.rpyc:18.

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.3.2.24090902
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.205b 0.205b
Wed Oct 23 17:18:38 2024

Does anyone know how to fix this, I have a problem starting part 2

 

[joelurmel]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading the script.
ScriptError: Name ('game/scripts/day20.rpy', 1644943256, 24) is defined twice, at scripts/day20.rpyc:17 and game/scripts/story/day20.rpyc:18.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 359, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\main.py", line 470, in main
renpy.game.script.load_script() # sets renpy.game.script.
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 359, in load_script
self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", [ "_ren.py", ".rpy" ], dir, fn, initcode)
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 957, in load_appropriate_file
self.finish_load(stmts, initcode, filename=lastfn) # type: ignore
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 590, in finish_load
check_name(node)
File "D:\A wife And Mother Part 2\renpy\script.py", line 566, in check_name
raise ScriptError("Name %s is defined twice, at %s:%d and %s:%d." %
ScriptError: Name ('game/scripts/day20.rpy', 1644943256, 24) is defined twice, at scripts/day20.rpyc:17 and game/scripts/story/day20.rpyc:18.

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.3.2.24090902
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.205b 0.205b
Wed Oct 23 17:18:38 2024

Does anyone know how to fix this, I have a problem starting part 2

move the content of game\game into game. You have badly installed a mod