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As I have said I am sure about it and all I can do is wait and see if I right.In the end it may all come down to whether the player will have the choices to make or not.
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This comment will probably get lost in the throng, but I really feel like the Ellie/Julia event was a mixed bag. On the one hand, it was hot as fuck seeing Sophia and Julia going at it, but how it came to be feels like it was executed poorly.
For starters, it just felt really forced, not only by having Sophia there with them, but the way that Ellie just so casually and blatantly spills pretty much every little detail about her and Julia. It was so direct and straightforward that it just felt really out of place and, at times, cringy. It was a bit too descriptive and mushy, and felt more like an entry in Ellie's diary than something she would say in conversation with her mother.
It also feels like too rapid a change given that Ellie said after the kiss that she needed time to think about it all, but then reveals here that they've been doing a lot with each other over the last 3 days. So how long did she take to figure things out? 2 hours? Seems like it didn't take her that long to decide to commit to whatever this is she has with Julia only for the sake of giving us this scene which, again, is hot as fuck, but felt like it was just to push that envelope in a rather contrived way.
A better alternative might have been if this was Ellie and Julia hanging out for the first time since that kiss, and Ellie invites Sophia to hang out with them because she's secretly worried it might be awkward. She doesn't say that to Sophia, but she picks up on it. The 3 would then hang out and chat for a bit before Sophia gets a call from Alyssa asking if she wants to go shopping which she agrees to or doesn't saying she has to pick up Dylan. Then, in either case, Sophia goes inside to change and then goes back down to the kitchen and becomes curious about the girls so she spies on them again which would be when Ellie and Julia talk about things and Ellie decides to take things further with Julia which Sophia would watch and be turned on by.
It sounds a little less hot than what we got, but at least it would've felt like more natural progress and would still peak Sophia's lesbian temptation, plus we'd have seen some action between Ellie and Julia rather than just being told about it.
For starters, it just felt really forced, not only by having Sophia there with them, but the way that Ellie just so casually and blatantly spills pretty much every little detail about her and Julia. It was so direct and straightforward that it just felt really out of place and, at times, cringy. It was a bit too descriptive and mushy, and felt more like an entry in Ellie's diary than something she would say in conversation with her mother.
It also feels like too rapid a change given that Ellie said after the kiss that she needed time to think about it all, but then reveals here that they've been doing a lot with each other over the last 3 days. So how long did she take to figure things out? 2 hours? Seems like it didn't take her that long to decide to commit to whatever this is she has with Julia only for the sake of giving us this scene which, again, is hot as fuck, but felt like it was just to push that envelope in a rather contrived way.
A better alternative might have been if this was Ellie and Julia hanging out for the first time since that kiss, and Ellie invites Sophia to hang out with them because she's secretly worried it might be awkward. She doesn't say that to Sophia, but she picks up on it. The 3 would then hang out and chat for a bit before Sophia gets a call from Alyssa asking if she wants to go shopping which she agrees to or doesn't saying she has to pick up Dylan. Then, in either case, Sophia goes inside to change and then goes back down to the kitchen and becomes curious about the girls so she spies on them again which would be when Ellie and Julia talk about things and Ellie decides to take things further with Julia which Sophia would watch and be turned on by.
It sounds a little less hot than what we got, but at least it would've felt like more natural progress and would still peak Sophia's lesbian temptation, plus we'd have seen some action between Ellie and Julia rather than just being told about it.
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Nice to see that you survived the Ellie/Julia/Sophia eventI think, I can swear that I heard these words somewhere before
- Dec 13, 2018
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It was neither boring or short, but for me it felt like it jumped the gun with that Ellie/Julia event (even though it was very hot), did not need Dylan at the yoga event, and ended with a very weak-sauce request from Morello.
- Oct 11, 2018
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Well as always with this game. As with this update, you never know exactly where it will take you.I think, I can swear that I heard these words somewhere before
It can be short and boring depending on choice. Mean if you don't go the lesbian route then you might skip that whole event, making for a shorter update.
- Jul 20, 2019
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For some people this update will be boring and short, much like the April update was for me. But this was a near perfect update for me. I just found Dylan being at the Yoga event when I'm on the boarding school route to be forced and annoying.
I kinda like that Ellie was being forceful and manipulative. It was a bit of a shock and disappointment at first, but then I realised it was because she was trying to make her girlfriends secret desires come true. Which is actually really sweet and awesome. Sure, Ellie may well have to do some damage control during the event Thursday morning. But she made her girlfriends secret desires come true, so it appears Ellie is prepared to pay the price.
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- Dec 19, 2018
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Ok, so Sophia finally "fucked" something different than her husband, showed us some of her lovely assets and that upcoming prisoner thing is going to be hot af in my opinion. Things are finally starting to move and i'm sure in the next 5-10 updates we'll hopefully see foreplay or blowjob atleast (Probably Bennet involved).
- Nov 5, 2018
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I love Ellie even more now. Can't wait for her to be more dominant with her mom and Julia and make them do things to each other as she watches and tells them what to do And then at the end they both pleasure her...
And then at the end they both pleasure her...
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The shower scene is clearly going to involve some kissing, groping, and maybe touching each other's pussies, because Ellie's going to want her mother to do as much, if not more, as she did with Julia. But the whole setup to this event still doesn't sit right with me. Ellie's getting a little too bold for my liking by being so direct about her and Julia, and she also quickly went from, "I have some things to think about", to, "in the last few days we got a little closer to each other than regular friends would actually do". Also this major plot hole:
Both times when the girls kissed, Julia had her back to where Sophia was, so how did she spot her first? Seems like a plot contrivance just to give Ellie a reason to tell her mother everything about her and Julia, but the whole thing comes across as forced and out of place.
I'm all for moving things along a little more quickly, but this felt like it jumped straight up from Mach 1 to Mach 10 without even going through the other levels first, when jumping to just Mach 5 would have been more than enough.
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I am getting the following error for the new version. Cannot continue on the story of ver 0.100.
Can somebody help pls??
Can somebody help pls??
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
File "D:\ARCCHIT\imp\New folder\A Wife and Mother\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "D:\ARCCHIT\imp\New folder\A Wife and Mother\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Sun Sep 13 20:38:15 2020I am getting the following error for the new version. Cannot continue on the story of ver 0.100.
Can somebody help pls??
Can somebody help pls??
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
File "D:\ARCCHIT\imp\New folder\A Wife and Mother\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "D:\ARCCHIT\imp\New folder\A Wife and Mother\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Sun Sep 13 20:38:15 2020I am getting the following error for the new version. Cannot continue on the story of ver 0.100.
Can somebody help pls??
Can somebody help pls??
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
File "D:\ARCCHIT\imp\New folder\A Wife and Mother\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "D:\ARCCHIT\imp\New folder\A Wife and Mother\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Sun Sep 13 20:38:15 2020- Nov 5, 2018
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I can understand that but this is Ellie who asked to shower with her mom and then asked her mom to share a kiss in the shower. That's pretty bold.
- Jul 20, 2017
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I agree that the plot has moved along quite quickly and even Sophia's language has changed,Talking to Zac.
Even the " Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation " got a mention in game,funny.