- Feb 20, 2018
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Finally a "Good Update" after all the garbage Aiden focus we had ! Would I have liked to see full on sex ? Of course ! but what we got finally lived up to "erotic writing" as L&P is so fond of saying.
1. Amber was teasing, she clearly wanted something to happen after having felt Dylan's tool during the pool event
2. Dylan while caught off guard, was totally into feeling up this hot sexually frustrated milf
3. In order for something to be erotic "some nudity or heavy touching/kissing" has to be involved
4. The situation that escalated during the desert part of the table meal was HOT
5. Most importantly it was consensual !! Thats my kind of corruption, Amber wanted something she was not getting !
6. No blackmail or forced crap... thats not corruption, its moronic to think "she'lll hate it till she doesnt lulz".
There were some bad points in the update though, and I feel the need to talk about them...
1. Dylan is such an unlikable prick ( I def want to see his route with every girl, but it doesnt mean I am a fan of him)
- He acts like a moron, and the more mature Sam calls him out, and his response is always something that shows him for the tool he is... Its always the equivalent of some idiot that got roasted saying "your mom" as a comeback... example
Sam: Whats with that dumb grin dude ? you look like an idiot
Dylan: nothin... *ohh yeah well this idiot just fingered your slutty and horny mother*
- I mean wtf is that ? it doesnt make him a chad or alpha, he comes across as a petty little shit... and he smears Amber into the shitter with his comment... Yeah insult in your thoughts the sexy milf that allowed your virgin midget ass to get to third base out of pity and cause she's frustrated... that shows how grateful you are.
2. While the scene was hot... its very... very unrealistic, am I to believe no one noticed their arms moving in the direction of the other person ? I've had a second cousin who was very slutty once rub my leg during a family dinner, and everyone immediately noticed she did it. Can you imagine jerking a penis ? or fingering someone ? those are far less subtle arm movements.
I honestly dont remember Sam ever having thoughts about "I am doing stuff with your mom" towards any of Dylans taunts and shit, I have trouble believing that Dylan considers Sam his friend with the way he acts.
1. Amber was teasing, she clearly wanted something to happen after having felt Dylan's tool during the pool event
2. Dylan while caught off guard, was totally into feeling up this hot sexually frustrated milf
3. In order for something to be erotic "some nudity or heavy touching/kissing" has to be involved
4. The situation that escalated during the desert part of the table meal was HOT
5. Most importantly it was consensual !! Thats my kind of corruption, Amber wanted something she was not getting !
6. No blackmail or forced crap... thats not corruption, its moronic to think "she'lll hate it till she doesnt lulz".
There were some bad points in the update though, and I feel the need to talk about them...
1. Dylan is such an unlikable prick ( I def want to see his route with every girl, but it doesnt mean I am a fan of him)
- He acts like a moron, and the more mature Sam calls him out, and his response is always something that shows him for the tool he is... Its always the equivalent of some idiot that got roasted saying "your mom" as a comeback... example
Sam: Whats with that dumb grin dude ? you look like an idiot
Dylan: nothin... *ohh yeah well this idiot just fingered your slutty and horny mother*
- I mean wtf is that ? it doesnt make him a chad or alpha, he comes across as a petty little shit... and he smears Amber into the shitter with his comment... Yeah insult in your thoughts the sexy milf that allowed your virgin midget ass to get to third base out of pity and cause she's frustrated... that shows how grateful you are.
2. While the scene was hot... its very... very unrealistic, am I to believe no one noticed their arms moving in the direction of the other person ? I've had a second cousin who was very slutty once rub my leg during a family dinner, and everyone immediately noticed she did it. Can you imagine jerking a penis ? or fingering someone ? those are far less subtle arm movements.
I honestly dont remember Sam ever having thoughts about "I am doing stuff with your mom" towards any of Dylans taunts and shit, I have trouble believing that Dylan considers Sam his friend with the way he acts.
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