Not to intrude the conversation, but maybe a middle ground could be that he goes back to do what he already has done in past events. Instead of having air-locked events like we are having in PD 13 with this per-event cycle, he could at least include some comments that related to other events that occurred and
not necessarily related the story line of the current event. That would help, IMO, the continuity of the story and the immersiveness for the reader.
For example:
PD 11
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"Sophia couldn't answer."
"Claire and Marie were doing their exercise so they weren't paying attention to them."
"She had never touched another woman's breast before today, at least not in this manner."
if day18_Sophia_touched_Julias_breasts:
"And now she was doing it for the second time today."
PD 12
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s "(I can't believe it. Being naked in public was something I thought I would never even do!)"
s "(And what am I doing now? Being naked in public! Well, at least partly.)"
if day19_Sophia_pulls_towel_down_in_sauna:
s "(And even for the second time on the same day!)"
if larry >= 9:
s "(And if I count my boobs flash to Larry Morello this morning, then this is already the third time!)"
s "(I think that's more than enough for one day, jeez!)"
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"Sophia clearly was enjoying the massage in a sensual fashion and hardly realized that at this stage, things were preceding beyond the 'strictly helping to relax' stage."
"Before, she never would've let another woman touch her."
if ellie >= 26:
s "(Well, except Ellie. Which I still can't believe!)"
else:
pass
This goes in the direction that
Tamaris was proposing, I guess, and yet they are simple extra dialogues/inner thoughts that do not change the course of the event but, IMO, helps the reader to be more immerse inside the story.
We don't know how she will show the breasts to Sam in the next event. So to use something we know, in the apostle event when she bared her taped breasts she might have thought something along the lines of "This is the X-th time I showed the my breasts today" with X replaced by a simple python code like e.g.
Python:
$ count_bare_breasts = sum([day20_Sophia_fulfilled_Aidens_4th_task, day20_Sophia_showed_her_breasts_to_Aidens_gang])
if count_bare_breasts > 0
s "This is the %(count_bare_breasts) time I showed the my breasts today, bla bla bla"
(ok there is a more fancy way to add first, second, third... instead of 1, 2 ,3... but that's not the point )
This is just a toy example, just to give the gist of it.
As shown above (but there are more) he already used to do it, I don't know if it is the new release cycle that contributes to this compartmentalized set of events but it would be nice if he comes back to it. Also the transitions between events suffers of the same problem, IMO.