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I would pare the branching down, remove some of the unnecessary stuff - keeping some of the current things as they are too far gone to remove. Keep Sam & Morello & Side Jobs, lose Bennet, Museum Boys, Postman, Janitor.
I like much of the stuff, it's creative but a little "preachy"- too much education, which I don't need - so I would reduce the "education piece" like all the mythology with the Art Class, all the Biology and leave in the good stuff of course. I don't need the complete lyrics of any song Sam is singing as another example. L&P needs to move this one along and finish it. The next one will be even better with what he has learned here. Demonstrating the ability to commit AND complete such a thing would really ramp up his subs. The next game would be way over the top if he can finish this one.
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Checks were meant for those likely to sleep With Sophia.
Anyways did anyone ever make a fanart continuation of this scene?
I've seen a few times people post a fan art extension of existing scenes.
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2nd Blackmail Bastard - check
Horny Janitor - check
Horny Suana Couple - check
Horny Cosby like neighbor - check
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2nd Blackmail Bastard? If Andre then yeah sure.
I'd put the Horny Black Janitor in possibility
Included Suana Couple already labeled as the possible threesome.
Cosby like Neighbor?
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I'd say he's a possibility I used to think he would definitely be a sex option but as time went on and saw he stopped really being featured I kind of figured he won't do anything.
If he does it would be very late into the game.
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If all goes well, you'll be able to start Part 2 without any save from Part 1 in next version.
we need the first progressbar fo the last Part to be sure how long it will take. If its 20% again we will get it next week mostly
Hairdresser/Beautician
Hairdresser/Beautician's Daughter
Well, they don't have a pet so.
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Daughter I see as an option for Dylan and maybe the mother?
I can't see either as a full sex option for Sophia.
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I would do the exact opposite but that's because incest doesn't appeal at all with zero thrill in it for me. So incest would become the subject of secondary storylines, with Ellie & Patricia being present but Dylan being scouted by a top flight European football club & moving away from home for an exciting future. (Goodbye to the 2nd MC concept....next game could be 'The Further Adventures of Dylan" which could take another 25+ years to develop... Don't complain Dylan fans because he'll have his own ultra-slow, never-ending game, with dozens of characters, duplicate storylines & unrealistic porn scenarios, including school-boy fantasy MILFs with huge breasts. It will be 'event based' with each event taking around 2 or more months to complete).Focus the story on the family!
That means Dylan, Ellie and Patricia! These are the taboo characters that make the story interesting, exciting and drive the money machine for him.
But that's not to say he should disregard other characters. No! He should just make their stories shorter. What do we care about the story with Sam, with Aiden, with the old guys, the young guys, etc.?
That should be the supporting cast. There's just nothing special about them fucking with these characters in the end.
They can all serve as jerk-off templates!
But the family! That's the thrill of AWAM. Or at least it should be. But apparently L&P sees it differently when he says Sam and Aiden have the most interesting hetero stories.
I would immediately scrap both side jobs by winding them up, or letting them continue "off-screen." I would also introduce elements within some existing storylines to speed things up, while abandoning the idea of 30 playable days, to allow for possible time jumps, if necessary.
Apart from the above, finishing within the decade, meaning greater speed, would be a priority when it came to writing. It would be made explicit via the text, that certain relatively minor characters would not be having sex with Sophia, e.g. Mr Murray retires, those two old men go home, Janitor Clark gets a job elsewhere....& that's just for starters. Several characters would be written out, or just never reappear & a number of duplicate storylines shut down. I'd hold a vote for which ones to "can" first.
There'd be consequences (probably difficult to write in several senses), for Sophia, resulting from her decisions, in an attempt to return to the "realism" that's been abandoned.