VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.211] [Lust & Passion]

[Dr.SigmundFap]

I think this is good news. I expect Sophia to have a lot of internal conflict/dialogue, so I'm glad that there's a lot of text. It would be not believable if they'd do the hot stuff right away, whatever it is.

As L&P said, this part is more story-heavy.

It wouldn't be believable for part II either, as he stuffed the build-up in one event instead of playing out over multiple PD prior to this one. Plus, Part II is supposed to be the "Catch-up," L&P's comment, with Sam's progress. So, I can see the scenes being "Hot" or his version of what "Hot" is, but believable, I would say far from it.

 

[palmtrees89]

The Xavier update had 42 or 43 pages.

Oh, really? Could swear it was in the high 20's. Well my bad!

hmmm, It feels like something is off here.

That's always the case with L&P though, isn't it?

 

[Lust & nipple]

Aiden and Cuck is part of the game

Agreed

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[Notretsam]

Agreed

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don't give me hope

It makes sense for the shyer one of the 3 to turn out to be the more dominant one after getting a taste of it.

 

[Kurious2some]

Before the long wait for the new update I made a tier list for Awam scenes I may have forgot some.

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A good list
The sauna scene with Deshawn as another HOT, perhaps??

 

[WankerDxD]

Im still annoyed from ignoring the scene when someone opened the door while Sophia naked in Sam's room .

Not just Ultra slow progress , but random story , random plot , jumping from content to content while ignoring other core content like Eden Blackmail , The Mafia , The boys from Museum or the club .


Random game without planning and many unfinished opportunities.

 

[abram1]

Random game without planning and many unfinished opportunities.

Incorrect. His initial plan used to be finishing up this VN within 5 years, that was in the realm of possibilities.
Then the success has happened and the brightest idea to improve the storytelling popped up. It slowed down the appearing of updates a bit which, in return, has lead to yet another great intention. First, split playable day in half, then by 3 and afterwards individually, according to the amount of events during the specific PD. Somehow, the attempt to accelerate the process ended up decelerating it almost to a halt.
At this point his goal is quite simple, to provide for his family in a country with a higher quality of life, saving up some buck for his retirement plan thanks to the patrons. A real slow burn beckoning with a promise of a forthcoming highly anticipated sex. Yeah, one day this mythical event, not with Liam, is going to occur.
Alas, there's no visible and feasible endeavor to kickstart for real the refreshment of this VN, an AWAM 2.0 in the terms of revving up the cycle. Whatever he's hinting to do starting from PD14 is as vaguely as most of his answers.

 

[bardock8114]

tomorrow we shold hit 100% and then only testing is left usually 2-3 days and one more day after release

 

[bardock8114]

Im still annoyed from ignoring the scene when someone opened the door while Sophia naked in Sam's room .

It was not irgnored. It was just a stupid conclusion XD

 

[McZoy]

Incorrect. His initial plan used to be finishing up this VN within 5 years, that was in the realm of possibilities.
Then the success has happened and the brightest idea to improve the storytelling popped up. It slowed down the appearing of updates a bit which, in return, has lead to yet another great intention. First, split playable day in half, then by 3 and afterwards individually, according to the amount of events during the specific PD. Somehow, the attempt to accelerate the process ended up decelerating it almost to a halt.
At this point his goal is quite simple, to provide for his family in a country with a higher quality of life, saving up some buck for his retirement plan thanks to the patrons. A real slow burn beckoning with a promise of a forthcoming highly anticipated sex. Yeah, one day this mythical event, not with Liam, is going to occur.
Alas, there's no visible and feasible endeavor to kickstart for real the refreshment of this VN, an AWAM 2.0 in the terms of revving up the cycle. Whatever he's hinting to do starting from PD14 is as vaguely as most of his answers.

Nothing could describe it better

 

[armion82]

Incorrect. His initial plan used to be finishing up this VN within 5 years, that was in the realm of possibilities.
Then the success has happened and the brightest idea to improve the storytelling popped up. It slowed down the appearing of updates a bit which, in return, has lead to yet another great intention. First, split playable day in half, then by 3 and afterwards individually, according to the amount of events during the specific PD. Somehow, the attempt to accelerate the process ended up decelerating it almost to a halt.
At this point his goal is quite simple, to provide for his family in a country with a higher quality of life, saving up some buck for his retirement plan thanks to the patrons. A real slow burn beckoning with a promise of a forthcoming highly anticipated sex. Yeah, one day this mythical event, not with Liam, is going to occur.
Alas, there's no visible and feasible endeavor to kickstart for real the refreshment of this VN, an AWAM 2.0 in the terms of revving up the cycle. Whatever he's hinting to do starting from PD14 is as vaguely as most of his answers.

Actually the idea was to finish the game in 3,max 4 years.
Or at least this was the original idea.
Obviously something go horrible wrong to need 10 times more years.Or even more.

 

[rAmSiMaL]

I'm sort of curious about the MS-Word pages. He commented that he could translate 2 to 2.5 pages a day with his translator/proofreader and has an outline format, as he noted, which should have taken him between 10 to 13 days to translate this update. If he keeps this pace up which he is currently 6 days at 85%, he will translate 26 pages in under ten days. Did he start using AI to tell his story, or Did he rush it, but he said it was a heavy story too? ....hmmm, It feels like something is off here.

You can google translate the whole text and afterwards you correct misstatements. 70% of the job is done with google translate within minutes.

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

You can google translate the whole text and afterwards you correct misstatements. 70% of the job is done with google translate within minutes.

google translate has no class

 

[truerty]

hot stuff

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Lol there definitely is, so don't worry about this. Plus it's pretty story heavy where you learn more about Sophia's/Dylan's past and expand Sophia's and Dylan's relationship further. And additionally the renders and characters look even better than before.

Soooooo...... it's a flashback event then? I'm so not interested in that shit!

 

[Dr.SigmundFap]

You can google translate the whole text and afterwards you correct misstatements. 70% of the job is done with google translate within minutes.

You do realize that he stated that he doesn't have a script but an outline, which means he would have to write the dialogs out, right? So although Google can translate it quickly, he must write it out first. Sophia/Sam's event (v0.175) was close in render count and text, but it took him from the 3rd to the 14th of Nov. 2022, and that was only 19-20 pages. He had to write the dialog and use his translator/proofreader, Google, and a person. Google can translate, but it may not necessarily translate the correct sentence for the scene's context, which is where the proofreader and translator come in.

 

[Punther]

Then the success has happened and the brightest idea to improve the storytelling popped up. It slowed down the appearing of updates a bit which, in return, has lead to yet another great intention.

This part where you say it slowed down updates A BIT gets my vote for understatement of the week.

 

[kewlbigdan]

May 6th. I stand by my estimate.

 

[sept0342]

May 6th. I stand by my estimate.

Anyone can speak. Bet something if you're so sure!

 

[ook23985]

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[neronazkona]

L&P said he's looking forward to the anniversary of this thread on the forum. When there are 6000 pages, he will release an update.

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