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ashitanojoe

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Oct 20, 2019
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Hi Lust&Passion, first of all I want to clarify that my criticism tries to benefit your game, so I try to be the most objective possibly and not obey just to my personal taste.

Dylan doesn't like Aiden either. You can see that in the way he's talking to him! He uses him just to get something for himself and to help his mom to feel as she felt before.
The problem is that the reward that Dylan wantend (her mother wearing sexier clothes) is too little, too bland, for all the plan he made with someone, as you say, he doesn't even like. As I said Dylan can see Sophia in underwear and bikini in his own house, so wanting see her with sexier dresses in school for his own pleasure doesn't seem to justify all that he planned. Also, in the game was never mentioned before something like Dylan had worries about a Sophia's midlife crisis and it's not like she dresses like a nun or something, she wears pretty fine always. For example, the outfit with leggings that she had when she swings Dylan is pretty sexy, modern and youthful. So, from all the directions the plan seems absurd.

On the other hand, I think you should think not only in the reasons that Dylan could have to make that plan, but in the consequences of incorporating a twist like that in the story too. Dylan's character has been generating a lot of sympathy and empathy in the players as a shy and bullied boy. Many people was roothing for Dylan because of that and they had a huge expectation about what would happen after the self defense training, that was a suspenful part of the story. But now everything collapses: Dylan now is immensely dumb, a manipulator, he tells Aiden what to do, is not shy anymore, and Aiden was not bullying him. Then, this likeable character loses his charm. All in just one scene.

My advise is just simply delete those dialogs about the Dylan's confession. Cut it out. The expectation of what will happen between the bullied and the bully will still there. That conflict situation will continue being interesting and Dylan will not lose fans unnecessarily. I will give you an example: Back to the Future. Do you think that movie would have the same reputation without the Marty's conflict with the bully Biff?
 
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mirian

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Nov 18, 2018
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I downloaded unren.bat, but how do I extract it to where is the exe file? I've tried it several times and I don't know how to do it. Can you help me please ?
 

Calyps0

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Mar 24, 2018
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Did you degenerate perverts know that cross dressing occurs for religious reasons, for burlesque, disguise, status gain, even for sexual excitement. Women cross-dressing and living as men began to appear in the early Christian Church where there are a number of women saints who were found to be women only upon their death.
Thinking of the 2nd side job(Home schooling).
Nice you ole' dog you!
 
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Bill_Buttlicker

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Jul 13, 2018
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Do you think Dylan has something planned for his sister like a get back for the viagra? Or now is he enamored to see more of her body for educational purposes just like he did with Sophia? :unsure:
 

zoro nami

Member
Sep 14, 2018
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
File "C:\Users\aarons\Desktop\Dirty Games\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "C:\Users\aarons\Desktop\Dirty Games\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Wed Sep 16 02:27:39 2020
Please help
what u did for this i also have same prob
 

humanno21

Member
Dec 4, 2019
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I finished this boredom fest, all scenes. This was the worst and most boring update so far. Everything is so anticlimactic. Not one redeeming moment. And story is starting to make less and less sense... so basically everybody is perverse and wants to fuck everybody, EXCEPT Sophia, only she needs to be corrupted obviously. I will repeat my previous conclusions that half of renders are redundant and that story is going back and forth with Sophia corruption level, although by numbers it should only go forward.
 

naughtynafz

Creating "Aiden's Revenge"
Game Developer
Dec 2, 2019
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I finished this boredom fest, all scenes. This was the worst and most boring update so far. Everything is so anticlimactic. Not one redeeming moment. And story is starting to make less and less sense... so basically everybody is perverse and wants to fuck everybody, EXCEPT Sophia, only she needs to be corrupted obviously. I will repeat my previous conclusions that half of renders are redundant and that story is going back and forth with Sophia corruption level, although by numbers it should only go forward.
Yeah, no exciting cliffhangers also, don Morello proposing something funny instead of doing crazy things, Dylan confesses something funny and unrealistic. Only zac moment I found exciting, teacher student romance ... Other than that all seems dull
 

Scorpion4769

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Apr 13, 2019
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skullpheonix

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Apr 10, 2020
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I wonder if Sophia will get her own Antonio or will Alyssa buy one for her?
It could be a fun work out with either Ellie/Sophia/Nat/Vicky/Alyssa
I absolutely loved that scene. But as usual, when you think something beautiful is about to happen, it's cut-off.
 
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so i just downloaded the game and an error came up just after sophia bought something. now as i am a student who has python as the programming language, i traced the lines but have no idea what to do. Will someone help plz???

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We just completed loops, i.e., for-while functions.
 
Mar 31, 2020
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "script4.rpyc", line 3182, in script
File "C:\Users\aarons\Desktop\Dirty Games\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "C:\Users\aarons\Desktop\Dirty Games\AWAM-0.100-pc\1 GAME FOLDER\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'day18_Back_home_kitchen'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
A Wife And Mother Vers. 0.100 0.100
Wed Sep 16 02:27:39 2020
Please help
same problem. plz help
 

Maviarab

Dark Lord of the Coffee
Donor
Jul 12, 2020
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Hi Lust&Passion, first of all I want to clarify that my criticism tries to benefit your game, so I try to be the most objective possibly and not obey just to my personal taste.


The problem is that the reward that Dylan wantend (her mother wearing sexier clothes) is too little, too bland, for all the plan he made with someone, as you say, he doesn't even like. As I said Dylan can see Sophia in underwear and bikini in his own house, so wanting see her with sexier dresses in school for his own pleasure doesn't seem to justify all that he planned. Also, in the game was never mentioned before something like Dylan had worries about a Sophia's midlife crisis and it's not like she dresses like a nun or something, she wears pretty fine always. For example, the outfit with leggings that she had when she swings Dylan is pretty sexy, modern and youthful. So, from all the directions the plan seems absurd.

On the other hand, I think you should think not only in the reasons that Dylan could have to make that plan, but in the consequences of incorporating a twist like that in the story too. Dylan's character has been generating a lot of sympathy and empathy in the players as a shy and bullied boy. Many people was roothing for Dylan because of that and they had a huge expectation about what would happen after the self defense training, that was a suspenful part of the story. But now everything collapses: Dylan now is immensely dumb, a manipulator, he tells Aiden what to do, is not shy anymore, and Aiden was not bullying him. Then, this likeable character loses his charm. All in just one scene.

My advise is just simply delete those dialogs about the Dylan's confession. Cut it out. The expectation of what will happen between the bullied and the bully will still there. That conflict situation will continue being interesting and Dylan will not lose fans unnecessarily. I will give you an example: Back to the Future. Do you think that movie would have the same reputation without the Marty's conflict with the bully Biff?
And then there are those of us that couldn't care less about him, never have nor what will happen with him in the future lol.
 
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