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VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.215f] [Lust & Passion]

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Luckysan001 said:
My friend, in the next update, on the Dylan route. If you had set expectations that something hot will happen between Dylan, Ellie and Christine.What you are expecting does not happen. Because in this game Dylan's path only adds realism.Whatever his fans set such expectations, it will not happen. I'd say it's a waste. L&P Dylan only adds realism to one's path. But Unfortunately since there are no realism to the other paths and side paths, you can expect them to have will something hot happen along their routes. The Sophia and Natalie event will feature more hot scenes in the next update.Then Sam's event is the Big Event and if you notice that L&P is taking too much time for that event, The concert event is likely to feature more hot scenes. As far as I can see, the biggest event of the game is the Sam event coming up in the next update.That means one event of Sam is equal to two of Dylan's events. And while the Kathy and Andy event is small, I think we can see some hot scenes there too. But it is futile to expect such hot scenes at the Dylan, Ellie and Christine event, because there is some small teasing in the event, that's all.

Except for Dylan's path in PD12. Other paths and side roles have progressed at high speeds and have been extremely successful in getting the most out of Sophia. Except for one event of Dylan on PD12. The rest of the all events are well written by L&P. The next day, that means there may be events for Dylan in PD 13, but he will make more progress that day. I don't believe Dylan goes ahead of everyone else. Because in his path we have never seen even the slightest hint of romance. Let go of his romantic path, But even lust here is not right in his path. Some of the small progress we've seen so far on Dylan's path is that she showed her breasts to Dylan at a mall event and he touched Sophia's ass at a jogging event.
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We can see these two through sex-ed. It took PD12 to show these two small progresses in the game and for Dylan fans to see, which means the story takes 12 days. If Dylan needs 12 days to touch her ass, it may look like he needs another 12 days to touch Sophia's vagina, which means that in PD 24 Dylan finally can touch her pussy. If this continues, Dylan's character, which has become very popular in the story, will surely fall. In the days to come. If Dylan's path fails to make much progress over the next 2 PDs, perhaps Dylan's supporters on Patreon's page will stop supporting him.
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Perhaps Dylan's supporters on Patreon's page will stop supporting him.
Good luck with that theory.
His Patrons on the whole seem happy with the long waits between updates
 
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Dr.Fapalot said:
That's just it. The CS is based on the text/outline of the novel, and the story is based on 79+ characters that have interactions with Sophia. So you have to create a scene for about every interaction with the support character. Especially characters that have no influence whatsoever. A prime example is this scene.

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Why do I care if her teeth were polished? She is a fictional character. How long did it take him to work on these 12 CS and render them? How does this influence her corruption points, good wife points, lesbian points, or LI points? I don't see her getting hit on by the dental assistant. So to me, this was a wasted scene or one-and-done. This could have been told through mostly narrations about her talking to her sister about bringing the kids over to her house. And there are other examples, too, throughout the novel.

I'm trying to point out here that he could have omitted most of the one-and-done and put more focus on Sophia and the primary supporting cast members.
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I wouldn't agree with you on that. There aren't 79+ characters because he planned 79+ characters. They are there because while writing the story he might have seen that a particular characters presence in a scene is necessary. Like you questioned the need for the principal, to me it would make sense for him to be at the school, especially with Aiden's problem, Bennett's problem etc, even if he doesn't help, logically he should be there.

Scenes with dentist, firstly we don't know if there is something planned through it. It could be used in future. Secondly I have been saying this for quite some time that these kind of scenes connect you to Sophia as a person more. I could also say the scene with cheering Dylan up was not needed and similiarly many other.

But it is the culmination of all these scenes that do play a role in making us care for Sophia.
Agreed none of it increased any kind of points for Sophia but he himself has said before that he doesn't want it to be like other porn games.
In terms of sexual content almost every game surpasses Awam yet in present day it is one of the most popular games. It is the small little details about this story and characters that get everyone invested.
 
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It looks like Sophia will get a call/message from Liam while she is in the bar, we have two options: Sam and Patricia to get home.
However, I think they won't have much time for anything more serious. And that hand on her thigh in this situation is more Sam's desire to "touch" something before Sophia enters the house.
That said, I think she'll promise Sam that they'll meet up later after the Cathy event.

That will be quite late and since I don't think Sophia will jump the fence and going through the house is dangerous, I think they will sneak over to treehouse :ROFLMAO:
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Man this thread moves so fast some days,

I agree with Dr.Fapalot about the dentist visit, the scene serves an expositional purpose but not a visual one.
There are three pieces of information to convey; Patricia inviting the kids for a sleepover, Dylan has soccer tomorrow, Ellie has a friend coming over tomorrow.
Those three pieces of information could have been told in fewer lines of dialogue, potentially could have been cut down by half - but english isn't L&P's first language so he kind of gets a pass on inefficient writing.

The problem with the two renders, is that it's not just two renders - it's 2 renders here, 3 more over there, an even 6 for the next scene after that, 4 for the scene before. It adds up over time.
I'm still firmly in the belief that if L&P took the time at the start of every update to sit down and write & storyboard out the whole script, then re-write & trim... then re-write & trim again - it would still result in a shorter development time. 'Measure twice, cut once'
 
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The haunting20 said:
Don't destroy they imagination:ROFLMAO:
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Sophia climbs up into the treehouse to meet Sam in the early hours.
Sam and Sophia start rocking and Sophia's moans can even be heard by Patricia many many miles away when suddenly they hear a very loud cracking sound as the treehouse comes crashing down to the ground waking up the neighbours in the process.
Stunned after there fall Sophia and Sam, lying there naked, slowly open there eyes to find Amber/Neil/Liam/Ellie/Dylan staring at them unsure of what to make of the situation
 
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Jude6 said:
Man this thread moves so fast some days,

I agree with Dr.Fapalot about the dentist visit, the scene serves an expositional purpose but not a visual one.
There are three pieces of information to convey; Patricia inviting the kids for a sleepover, Dylan has soccer tomorrow, Ellie has a friend coming over tomorrow.
Those three pieces of information could have been told in fewer lines of dialogue, potentially could have been cut down by half - but english isn't L&P's first language so he kind of gets a pass on inefficient writing.

The problem with the two renders, is that it's not just two renders - it's 2 renders here, 3 more over there, an even 6 for the next scene after that, 4 for the scene before. It adds up over time.
I'm still firmly in the belief that if L&P took the time at the start of every update to sit down and write & storyboard out the whole script, then re-write & trim... then re-write & trim again - it would still result in a shorter development time. 'Measure twice, cut once'
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You can look at it the same way L&P handled Sophia packing the dishwasher one night. It was just described over a black screen.
 
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I think a poll would be interesting but with the question: who will give Sophia her first orgasm? :unsure: I'm not talking about penetration.

Liam is out, not that he would give her multiple doses every day :ROFLMAO:
 
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