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The level of the fighting could be measure if it were one on one, maybe. But in the case Seven vs. Two, That would end up in a principal office or someone knowing about it other than the teacher that broke it up.There are numerous possibilities to this. I too have been in fights at school. But never was sent to the principal. The teacher handled the matter. He would give a diary note or worse case ask to bring parents next time. But of course he forgot and I never told anything in my house. .
No, he can't show everything, but he can do it through narration. This brings me to my next point.The class thing, that was an accidental flash atleast for the students and who said that people wouldn't talk about it. Nowhere it is mentioned that the students kept quiet about it. So it is also a reasonable assumption they did talk about it themselves. Since it was not intentional it was never a big deal and didn't get reported anywhere and this discussion stays among students. They talk about with each other. Laugh about it maybe even recall the incident at a particular time of their day to help them out. But since that aspect is not necessary for the story at the moment, we aren't getting any focus on it. Already he is not able to meet the deadlines he set for himself, plus people complain he does unnecessary renders, on top of that if he spends renders, showing students talking about Sophia after class, with no intention of using it in the story for now, it is a waste. Just because we aren't shown every single thing doesn't mean we can only make one assumption - that it didn't happen. He can't show you what each of those students did after class.
Whispering is a thing, but it is up to the author to tell you when the conversation becomes a whisper through narration. So here's the scene for the first task.As for talking, whispering is also a thing. You have to realise that ofcourse they are whispering not talking. Some people whisper so silently that even if I am a feet away from them I hear nothing. Funny incident - I actually once thought I has bad hearing because I never could hear this girl sitting beside me whispering to her friend in front. The benches were adjacent to each other and yet. So one day I had my friend sit in my place and tell me if he could actually get what they say. And my man came back saying, that there's no way one can gear thise two.
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At no point did L&P mention that this conversation was a whisper, which he should have done in the narration text in the first photo. He could have added, "and beings to whisper to Aiden." Also, you noticed that Sophia is standing roughly three feet from Aiden, if I had to guess. That is no longer a whisper range; someone is going to hear you. And you can see in the text of that conversation, Sophia and Aiden were ending each sentence with an exclamation point which the conversation was getting heated. This usually means your voice is starting to elevate to a higher tone. On top of that, look who she is standing next to in that photo: Aiden's Girlfriend, Jennifer. Also, if you're following the story, the only two people that seem to know about the task are Aiden and Andre.
If she was going to whisper to Aiden, she should have been much closer than that to prevent anyone from hearing.
If you want to change the narrative of that part to fit what you believe to be a whisper, you can do so, but keep in mind that you are changing the story to fit your needs for that scene or any other scene.