VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.215f] [Lust & Passion]

[Zagar999]

Could become a masterpiece.

Beautiful graphics (but bland face in latest version).

Interesting story at the start, boring development, no build-up of tension, no excitement

More interesting if she made men struggle, just an easy girl in the story

Would be good to train yourself to write a good script and redo the story

 

[ktemanuel]

spanish link

 

[dorito-kun]

This update was zzz I really didn't like it at all

I still believe that the best update this game has had is Sofia with Dylan in the jacuzzi

 

[Couto25]

Just a small suggestion to LP if he watch it..Dude open your eyes, wake up...you need new plan for this game..scrap all the old schemes...play part 1 of this game yourself that you developed and see what it was.

We want you to continue the story with the essence of real part 1 that you developed yourself from sophia's perspective....we don't want you to dwelve yourself inside the teenage body and keep thinking about first time sex and stretch the story like a rubberband for years. Dwelve yourself inside the body of a married woman who has sexual deisre and corrupt her for cheating with her lifestyle...i.e. in married woman work culture and in terms of who sophia should hang around with after work like neighbors, her sister, her friends etc lol.

Please get your story out from Dylan, Ellie their friends and teenage perspective of sex asap. And get back on the track of cheating and corrupt wife and develop the story from the middle age woman perspective.

 

[Neuro009]

How I hate the constant ranting. If you hate the game so much press the "Ignore thread" button at the top and you will never see it again.

 

[palmtrees89]

Well the audio doesn't work for me. Is it the same for all?

Audio is fine on my end. Maybe try and turn your speakers on?

Win/Linux? Mac? Android? Did you download from the original source on Page 1?

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

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This update has really weird faces.

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[LucidLover]

Audio is fine on my end. Maybe try and turn your speakers on?

Win/Linux? Mac? Android? Did you download from the original source on Page 1?

Yeah maybe missed it somewhere, will see a fix.

 

[INOM_18]

How I hate the constant ranting. If you hate the game so much press the "Ignore thread" button at the top and you will never see it again.

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

Just a small suggestion to LP if he watch it..Dude open your eyes, wake up...you need new plan for this game..scrap all the old schemes...play part 1 of this game yourself that you developed and see what it was.

We want you to continue the story with the essence of real part 1 that you developed yourself from sophia's perspective....we don't want you to dwelve yourself inside the teenage body and keep thinking about first time sex and stretch the story like a rubberband for years. Dwelve yourself inside the body of a married woman who has sexual deisre and corrupt her for cheating with her lifestyle...i.e. in married woman work culture and in terms of who sophia should hang around with after work like neighbors, her sister, her friends etc lol.

Please get your story out from Dylan, Ellie their friends and teenage perspective of sex asap. And get back on the track of cheating and corrupt wife and develop the story from the middle age woman perspective.

 

[Couto25]

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I don't have question about the game ...I have suggestion lol.

 

[imbatshit452]

for years this bitch has been dodging sex like Neo dodges bullets but now all of a sudden she's eating pussy WTF

 

[Notretsam]

for years this bitch has been dodging sex like Neo dodges bullets but now all of a sudden she's eating pussy WTF

It's not been years, we're on day 21 in the novel, so 3 weeks.

 

[Adsnow]

Off topic. There was this amazing animation of Sophia and Aiden. Idk who made this but are there more of this? Please and thank you

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[lockerxx]

It's not been years, we're on day 21 in the novel, so 3 weeks.

and maybe she is going to eat another in the vicky event

 

[bluehound36]

Just a small suggestion to LP if he watch it..Dude open your eyes, wake up...you need new plan for this game..scrap all the old schemes...play part 1 of this game yourself that you developed and see what it was.

We want you to continue the story with the essence of real part 1 that you developed yourself from sophia's perspective....we don't want you to dwelve yourself inside the teenage body and keep thinking about first time sex and stretch the story like a rubberband for years. Dwelve yourself inside the body of a married woman who has sexual deisre and corrupt her for cheating with her lifestyle...i.e. in married woman work culture and in terms of who sophia should hang around with after work like neighbors, her sister, her friends etc lol.

Please get your story out from Dylan, Ellie their friends and teenage perspective of sex asap. And get back on the track of cheating and corrupt wife and develop the story from the middle age woman perspective.

People have been telling him this for several years now. He refuses to listen to anyone. Just the way it is.

 

[crabboid]

It's not been years, we're on day 21 in the novel, so 3 weeks.

So then she went from complete prude to jerking her son off and eating her daughter’s vag within a three week period, but is still trying to act like she has scruples when it comes to sexual activity with anyone who she’s not actually related to. That’s nonsensical too, unless she has a head injury at some point that I didn’t notice.

 

[abirzaman]

hey!! i did not got sam n sophia short version update? did i miss anything?

 

[RUSSIAN MAFIA]

What kind of scary Woman is in the new update? Has Sofia quit?

 

[DarkShadow29]

It's not been years, we're on day 21 in the novel, so 3 weeks.

This is not an excuse for bad storyline...the thing is it should have stick to cheating wife path and sophia's story only...obviously if dylan and ellie are involved then make a short background like he did with sam...where Sam told sophia how he was attracted to her when he was a child...that's all....same thing he could have done with dylan and ellie...but streching the story from dylan and ellie perspective from day 17-day21 is bs...3 weeks maybe in story but it seems like the story has lost it's identity and changed it to teen perspective since past 2 years or 4-5 days of gameplay..sophia is out of focus and she is on focus only when dylan and ellie story require her ....these are side storylines....and these could be developed after the main story gets completed (he can show all ellie and dylan sex with their friends including/excluding sophia later on)...dylan was a cuck in sidestory previously ..and we liked it that way...now he was MC for an year of development and he has his own storyline with his friends n all. its bullshit...no need to waste novel days of the story by telling other characters story as a main storyline. For example, if he develop day 22....there is no need to tell the story from patricia or ellie point of view...he could continue the story from sophia point of view and increase the MC corruption...every day in the novel he choose some other character as MC and start their corruption level from zero, like by showing boobs then blowjob etc and end the novel day....next time he will show patricia and start the same thing again by showing patricia boobs, then blowjob and end it ...each and every characters doesn't need to be corrupted slowly. This is not slow burn..this is scam.