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Yes, with the only difference that I'm interested both in seeing the scene with the old men and in seeing how Dylan's story continues
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And I've been extremely reserved about "handmade" works, but I feel like I have to say this.
As soon as I read the first 3 lines of your post, I expected you to talk about fireplaces and that you'd talk about body parts.
Here's what I can say:
Nobody cares about background images.
There are very few games in 3D games (not only AVN) that equate primary and secondary lighting, or that emphasize the impact of what's treated as backgrounds.
And except for the fingers, the body has no problems or is negligible.
I saw 3 of your drawings and felt that you have a very distorted perspective.
To be honest, I got goosebumps when I saw your picture.
If that reflects your personality, I'm "sure" that you often have friction in conversations with people around you or that people avoid talking to you.
You analyzed the picture well. I wouldn't have noticed the many small and large errors straight away. I think someone like you who draws/paints as a hobby automatically has a completely different view of such pictures.
But I also have to say that in the context for which such pictures are made, I tend to overlook such errors. Typical male limited point of view - I know that, shrug.
By the way, I don't think you have a distorted perspective, I don't get goosebumps when I look at your pictures and I don't think people avoid talking to you either.
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The reason I felt your interest was distorted was not because of other people's images, but because of the shape of your fingers and mouth in your drawing.
To be more specific, it was because of your perspective on that drawing.
You clearly don't see it.
I missed that, and thanks to you, I also saw the problem with that part.
You clearly have a problem.
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Anti AI terrorist over here. He's fighting the holy war.
Man do I love AI art. It's so much better compared to a certain self-proclaimed hobby artist's art calling himself a professional, acting like he knows it all. Thank god the AAA gaming industry doesn't usually hire artists on that level, otherwise alot of the art we see in games these days (lots of AI involved) would look so much worse. Did I mention that I love AI art?
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Ah, you mean my avatar?
I explained the hand few pages back and shown how a real female hand look like. Painted from the photo reference and 100% accurate. You will need to trust me on that.
Her mouth is moved to the side, because she smirks. Our faces move quite a bit when we show different emotions. Take a look at this:
See how this girl face changes? She is unrecognisable in some takes.
But the biggest issue I think is that the avatar is too small and detail blurs and get lost. Maybe I need to change it a bit
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As expected, you definitely don't see it.Ah, you mean my avatar?
I explained the hand few pages back and shown how a real female hand look like. Painted from the photo reference and 100% accurate. You will need to trust me on that.
Her mouth is moved to the side, because she smirks. Our faces move quite a bit when we show different emotions. Take a look at this:
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See how this girl face changes? She is unrecognisable in some takes.
But the biggest issue I think is that the avatar is too small and detail blurs and get lost. Maybe I need to change it a bit
I "already" know how diverse the shape of the mouth can be. Everyone knows.
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Here comes another one. Thanks God I can always live rent free in your heads.
EDIT:
Actually, you don't have to be as skilled as me. Even advanced beginners can find something.
Also AI is being used but not in the way you think.
Mostly you take your piece and use AI to quickly add variation or explore different approach or ideas.
No one is crazy enough to let AI do all of it. Even stuff labelled as AI made is still done by an artist and then heavily edited.
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Finished the update yesterday.
Pros: good renders. Good erotic story telling.
Cons: too much unnecessary dialogue used as filler and extra unnecessary renders.
I mean for the time constraints of the tutoring lesson some of the sexual situation makes sense, however we're to believe the one standing next to her rubs his dick on her thigh, but the one standing behind her ( the natural coitus position) all pumped full of hormones and youthful curiosity isn't going to attempt to at least rub his dick on her butt? Especially while he's gripping her waist?
So Sofia attempts to establish some ground rules, yet effs the timing so badly she tries to get the boys off faster by letting them grope her and she talks dirty to them. Meanwhile is getting massively aroused by all of this. Yet still somehow retains a smidgen of control? I don't fucking buy it. Yet L&P throws in a handy animation that teases she's going to kiss a dick and a double blow job. And tells one of the boys to grab her tit and pinch her nipple. She tastes a tiny drop of cum and that's supposed to excite us?
The cliffhanger was equally lame. Prediction: she just walks by an open door masturbation scene. Quickly grabs the bag and leaves.
L&P style has become so sophomoric, throw in unnecessary dialogue and predictable it steals away from his erotic writing.
If he got rid of the unnecessary dialogue and was a bit more realistic with the sexual tension he could do two scenes per update and get the story moving along at a normal pace.
This game is basically becoming one to watch to see if L&P finally gets it, and learns how to move a story along or continues fumbling along like a virgin scared to pull the trigger.
I support a few other devs, but this one.......is still a bit clueless.
Pros: good renders. Good erotic story telling.
Cons: too much unnecessary dialogue used as filler and extra unnecessary renders.
I mean for the time constraints of the tutoring lesson some of the sexual situation makes sense, however we're to believe the one standing next to her rubs his dick on her thigh, but the one standing behind her ( the natural coitus position) all pumped full of hormones and youthful curiosity isn't going to attempt to at least rub his dick on her butt? Especially while he's gripping her waist?
So Sofia attempts to establish some ground rules, yet effs the timing so badly she tries to get the boys off faster by letting them grope her and she talks dirty to them. Meanwhile is getting massively aroused by all of this. Yet still somehow retains a smidgen of control? I don't fucking buy it. Yet L&P throws in a handy animation that teases she's going to kiss a dick and a double blow job. And tells one of the boys to grab her tit and pinch her nipple. She tastes a tiny drop of cum and that's supposed to excite us?
The cliffhanger was equally lame. Prediction: she just walks by an open door masturbation scene. Quickly grabs the bag and leaves.
L&P style has become so sophomoric, throw in unnecessary dialogue and predictable it steals away from his erotic writing.
If he got rid of the unnecessary dialogue and was a bit more realistic with the sexual tension he could do two scenes per update and get the story moving along at a normal pace.
This game is basically becoming one to watch to see if L&P finally gets it, and learns how to move a story along or continues fumbling along like a virgin scared to pull the trigger.
I support a few other devs, but this one.......is still a bit clueless.
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When someone tells you, "You see everything distorted," it doesn't mean, "You have a vision problem."
Fix it yourself.
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check out Memories new game Ha much of what you are looking for above.... read the FORUM PAGE AS WELL.
I made a patch in Turkish, if you want to use it for myself, please.
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