fapzoner69018

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I wonder if anyone is paying at this point? The game is getting worse and LP is getting more and more frustrated. He can't even make the story and quality renders like in the past...

The end of this blue ball VN is near :FacePalm: :lepew:
No the quality of renders are still the same if not better. Just because you're frustrated from blueballing u dnt have to start making shitty things up. Besides the last weird animation which is not that bad btw the renders are still good. And the story is still captivating but not like before and that is because of the amount of time we'll have to wait for between each update. So it's normal that fans start to lose interest because of the amount of content presented which isn't proportional with the huge amount of time they'll have to wait for.
 
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hzjujk

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I really don't get how Sophia leaving her bag is that big of a deal. The boys know how to hide stuff from their mom and the worst that will happen is that Sophia's worn undergarments will get returned encrusted with the boys cum after they realize that she left a "gift" behind for them.

I thought the scene as a whole seemed unnecessarily rushed. There was no need for the hurry up dentist visit as the goal was to show off lingerie and discuss masturbation results. Sophia could have just arrived and got started without the need to rush. The dialogue also was a step down from the 2 previous tutoring sessions. Everything just seemed kinda cobbled together. The final part was pretty much as expected but again, the development time and number of renders seemed unwarranted for this update.
The problem with VN's that tell erotic stories or porn stories is that they only have one goal, to create a situation in which the characters involved somehow end up interacting sexually with each other. This premise quickly turns the most realistic starting conditions into a farce. Because unlike real life, there is rarely a second chance in a VN.

Under these conditions, I think L&P has done a good job. The promise to the boys to wear erotic underwear has already heated up the situation in advance. The fact that the boys could then see Sophia in different outfits heightened the sexual tension even more.
The trick was to combine the boys' sexual experience through masturbation with the sudden time pressure. Together with Sophia's growing sexual excitement, this made the scenes with the handjobs and the first French kiss possible (in my opinion).

The fact that Sophia refused to show the boys her naked breasts again was due to Sophia's intention that it was sex education and not an erotic adventure. It is precisely this sudden time pressure that explains why Sophia wasn't naked at the end. In this sense, L&P was consistent here and did it right in my opinion.

You could have stopped the scene at any time. In real life, you would get a second/third chance. Due to the linear structure of a VN, something like this is usually not possible. In real life, the main character would have taken a moment to think and then abandoned the whole thing. In this VN, that is also possible, but that also means the route is over. This also corresponds to the nature of a VN because the entropy of the branches would increase exponentially (siehe xxxorro) .
 

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The problem with VN's that tell erotic stories or porn stories is that they only have one goal, to create a situation in which the characters involved somehow end up interacting sexually with each other. This premise quickly turns the most realistic starting conditions into a farce. Because unlike real life, there is rarely a second chance in a VN.

Under these conditions, I think L&P has done a good job. The promise to the boys to wear erotic underwear has already heated up the situation in advance. The fact that the boys could then see Sophia in different outfits heightened the sexual tension even more.
The trick was to combine the boys' sexual experience through masturbation with the sudden time pressure. Together with Sophia's growing sexual excitement, this made the scenes with the handjobs and the first French kiss possible (in my opinion).

The fact that Sophia refused to show the boys her naked breasts again was due to Sophia's intention that it was sex education and not an erotic adventure. It is precisely this sudden time pressure that explains why Sophia wasn't naked at the end. In this sense, L&P was consistent here and did it right in my opinion.

You could have stopped the scene at any time. In real life, you would get a second/third chance. Due to the linear structure of a VN, something like this is usually not possible. In real life, the main character would have taken a moment to think and then abandoned the whole thing. In this VN, that is also possible, but that also means the route is over. This also corresponds to the nature of a VN because the entropy of the branches would increase exponentially (siehe xxxorro) .
Your writing is just an explanation for the sake of explanation, and it is completely at odds with reality.

1. Remember that she had plenty of time, and that she changed her underwear twice.
- I believe that this does not need an explanation because it does not make sense.

2. The cum shower occurred because of "sex education", and that she was almost naked before was also because of "sex education".
- It also does not make sense that she could not be naked because of "sex education".

3. A normal person would expect that the last (naked) and this (underwear) event would happen together in this update, not that the last event (naked) would be canceled.
- It's like showing the contents of a box, then closing the box again, putting a wrapper on it, and hoping that the other person would be surprised.

And

The game allows the player to change their choice at any time.
- Seriously, I have never seen anyone say things backwards like you.

In the real world, the only times you get a second or third chance are when you buy the wrong thing at the grocery store or when you don't clean your room properly.
In the real world, "real time" flows and can never be reversed.

Your "real time" never allow you to start over from zero.
Also, many people remember your footsteps, your words, and what your hands touched.
 
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hzjujk

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Your writing is just an explanation for the sake of explanation, and it is completely at odds with reality.

1. Remember that she had plenty of time, and that she changed her underwear twice.
- I believe that this does not need an explanation because it does not make sense.

2. The cum shower occurred because of "sex education", and the fact that she was almost naked before was also because of "sex education".
- It also does not make sense that she could not be naked because of "sex education".

3. A normal person would expect that the last (naked) and this (underwear) event would happen together in this update, not that the last event (naked) would be canceled.
- It's like showing the contents of a box, then closing the box again, putting a wrapper on it, and hoping that the other person would be surprised.

And

The game allows the player to change their choice at any time.
- Seriously, I have never seen anyone say things backwards like you.

In the real world, the only times you get a second or third chance are when you buy the wrong thing at the grocery store or when you don't clean your room properly.
In the real world, "real time" flows and can never be reversed.

Your "real time" never allow you to start over from zero.
Also, many people remember your footsteps, your words, and what your hands touched.
Oops, I thought you weren't talking to me?! :unsure::unsure::LOL::unsure:

Since you think I'm stupid anyway (previous posts), I'll refrain from replying to your post.
 
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No the quality of renders are still the same if not better. Just because you're frustrated from blueballing u dnt have to start making shitty things up. Besides the last weird animation which is not that bad btw the renders are still good. And the story is still captivating but not like before and that is because of the amount of time we'll have to wait for between each update. So it's normal that fans start to lose interest because of the amount of content presented which isn't proportional with the huge amount of time they'll have to wait for.
The proportions are just crazy, Sophia should be huge not tiny... not sure what's going on, LP lost his touch :KEK:

"And the story is still captivating" - LP is paying you a huge amount of money :KEK:

"last weird animation which is not that bad" - haven't seen it, can't wait to see how much it sucks :KEK:

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