yourmomma

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That kind of "progess" thinking is what makes it crazy. People don't follow a strict path of flirting, kissing, touching, HJ, BJ, fucking.
It's a story so, sure, do that a bit but acting like Sam should have had some invisible barrier keeping him from, I dunno, touching her pussy. Or Putting his mouth on her pussy, Pulling his dick out, etc is what's illogical.

A genuine question and not at all an insulting accusation: have you ever fucked? Met someone of the sex you're attracted to, got to know them and had sex with them? I'll assume you're a dude attracted to women from here but swap out your preferences if not:

Yes or no, I don't care if you've fucked beyond making a point. If no, sorry. If yes, think about how that went.
Could you imagine having that person in your bedroom, nude, tits in your mouth, her panties on your floor, etc...and not trying to fuck or get head...because you two had only kissed a few times before that moment LOL.

Consider how insane that would be.

"Well, Suzy, my balls are blue and swollen and I've been in love with you for a decade...BUT...we have only kissed a few times before today so despite you being naked and on my bed I'm NOT gonna try to fuck....or get/give head"

No, lol. That's not how humans behave. That's alien shit. That's bad writing.
All I know is that any woman that got naked on my bed got fucked and it was usually her idea. Absolutely no woman I every met put herself in that situation without those intentions.
So yes. I agree. However these are porn games and realism get's hrown out the door the moment you hit " Start " lol
 

AlfredBundy4

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All I know is that any woman that got naked on my bed got fucked and it was usually her idea. Absolutely no woman I every met put herself in that situation without those intentions.
So yes. I agree. However these are porn games and realism get's hrown out the door the moment you hit " Start " lol
Oh, for sure and I'm not even advocating for "ultimate or total realism", just basic writing and plot pacing skills.

You can tease and play the slow pace while also not asking the reader to abandon all logic and sense while self-proclaiming your dumbass porn story to be of "ultimate quality and realism"


L&P has said his insane pace of following, seemingly, every hour of her life is is FOR realism and quality. Basically, if he didn't output at this pace of every story day taking 4 years of IRL time it wouldn't do his amazing story justice, lol.

No, it's just bad writing. Don't put your characters in that situation if you can't write around or through it in a halfway believable way. Like...looking for just 5% believability lol.
 
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