neub1i

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That kind of "progess" thinking is what makes it crazy. People don't follow a strict path of flirting, kissing, touching, HJ, BJ, fucking.
It's a story so, sure, do that a bit but acting like Sam should have had some invisible barrier keeping him from, I dunno, touching her pussy. Or Putting his mouth on her pussy, Pulling his dick out, etc is what's illogical.

A genuine question and not at all an insulting accusation: have you ever fucked? Met someone of the sex you're attracted to, got to know them and had sex with them? I'll assume you're a dude attracted to women from here but swap out your preferences if not:

Yes or no, I don't care if you've fucked beyond making a point. If no, sorry. If yes, think about how that went.
Could you imagine having that person in your bedroom, nude, tits in your mouth, her panties on your floor, etc...and not trying to fuck or get head...because you two had only kissed a few times before that moment LOL.

Consider how insane that would be.

"Well, Suzy, my balls are blue and swollen and I've been in love with you for a decade...BUT...we have only kissed a few times before today so despite you being naked and on my bed I'm NOT gonna try to fuck....or get/give head"

No, lol. That's not how humans behave. That's alien shit. That's bad writing.
completely ignored the fact that i stated that this is a married mother and any real life married mother wouldnt even go that far. Many single women in real life will pull the breaks before getting undressed in the first place. THAT'S WHAT'S ILLOGICAL.

having a chello session, fine, kissing, we did that, him pushing boundaries with fondling yes, maybe pull a tit out, sure.... but no sane married woman would just go "oh hey draw me nude why wont u?" drops the dress WHILE SOME ARE IN THE FUCKING HOUSE.

dont compare this to any real life experience you had in HS or wherever because it's simply not. Try to seduce your neighbors wife who has kids. let's see how that goes and how far you even get.
 

yourmomma

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That kind of "progess" thinking is what makes it crazy. People don't follow a strict path of flirting, kissing, touching, HJ, BJ, fucking.
It's a story so, sure, do that a bit but acting like Sam should have had some invisible barrier keeping him from, I dunno, touching her pussy. Or Putting his mouth on her pussy, Pulling his dick out, etc is what's illogical.

A genuine question and not at all an insulting accusation: have you ever fucked? Met someone of the sex you're attracted to, got to know them and had sex with them? I'll assume you're a dude attracted to women from here but swap out your preferences if not:

Yes or no, I don't care if you've fucked beyond making a point. If no, sorry. If yes, think about how that went.
Could you imagine having that person in your bedroom, nude, tits in your mouth, her panties on your floor, etc...and not trying to fuck or get head...because you two had only kissed a few times before that moment LOL.

Consider how insane that would be.

"Well, Suzy, my balls are blue and swollen and I've been in love with you for a decade...BUT...we have only kissed a few times before today so despite you being naked and on my bed I'm NOT gonna try to fuck....or get/give head"

No, lol. That's not how humans behave. That's alien shit. That's bad writing.
All I know is that any woman that got naked on my bed got fucked and it was usually her idea. Absolutely no woman I every met put herself in that situation without those intentions.
So yes. I agree. However these are porn games and realism get's hrown out the door the moment you hit " Start " lol
 

AlfredBundy4

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All I know is that any woman that got naked on my bed got fucked and it was usually her idea. Absolutely no woman I every met put herself in that situation without those intentions.
So yes. I agree. However these are porn games and realism get's hrown out the door the moment you hit " Start " lol
Oh, for sure and I'm not even advocating for "ultimate or total realism", just basic writing and plot pacing skills.

You can tease and play the slow pace while also not asking the reader to abandon all logic and sense while self-proclaiming your dumbass porn story to be of "ultimate quality and realism"


L&P has said his insane pace of following, seemingly, every hour of her life is is FOR realism and quality. Basically, if he didn't output at this pace of every story day taking 4 years of IRL time it wouldn't do his amazing story justice, lol.

No, it's just bad writing. Don't put your characters in that situation if you can't write around or through it in a halfway believable way. Like...looking for just 5% believability lol.
 

AlfredBundy4

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completely ignored the fact that i stated that this is a married mother and any real life married mother wouldnt even go that far. Many single women in real life will pull the breaks before getting undressed in the first place. THAT'S WHAT'S ILLOGICAL.

having a chello session, fine, kissing, we did that, him pushing boundaries with fondling yes, maybe pull a tit out, sure.... but no sane married woman would just go "oh hey draw me nude why wont u?" drops the dress WHILE SOME ARE IN THE FUCKING HOUSE.

dont compare this to any real life experience you had in HS or wherever because it's simply not. Try to seduce your neighbors wife who has kids. let's see how that goes and how far you even get.
lol, that's circular thinking outside of my point entirely.

Again, not in "my personal high school experiences" but LIFE...if YOU have ever fucked...imagine the girl/woman coming to your house (!) and with a few words - far from "seducing" - you have her naked on your bed with her tits on your mouth...and you DON'T try to fuck or get/give head. That has happened to a normal dude exactly never, lol. Not once. Ever.

Now, it seems like the answer is probably that you haven't fucked IRL and that's ok. Truly. Not insulting you. If you have and still can't see the insanity of how these characters are written...yikes.

But either way, you're trying to use the rules of a poorly written story and characters to justify why they're poorly written. Your point is for the sake of itself, it's circular.

"Sam couldn't try to do what any guy would do in that situation because...because...IT WAS ONLY THEIR 3RD CELLO SESSION AND THEY'VE ONLY KISSED AND...DON'T PUT YOUR REAL-LIFE EXPERIENCE INTO ANYTHING..."

Not the point, man lol. The point is that these characters are not written like human beings even in a "porn logic" sense. 0% believable. They're bipolar aliens BECAUSE dev is a dogshit writer. His characters cannot be written as human being AND do what they do because he isn't good enough to do that. Other devs are! This one isn't.
You can be ok with that but you can't then claim that "akkkktually....it is realistic" while citing points FROM the dogshit story itself to prove it.
 
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thanks for share the teaser, if i may ask it says "t8" what means teaser 8, so are there t5, t6, t7 that haven been shared yet or it's just the name of the picture?
 

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thanks for share the teaser, if i may ask it says "t8" what means teaser 8, so are there t5, t6, t7 that haven been shared yet or it's just the name of the picture?
Hi yes it is the name of the of the image T8/Teaser 8 .
Six teasers have been shared...
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