VN Ren'Py Above the Law [Ep.I v0.9.3] [Lewdkitty87]

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this game.

 

[LewdKitty87]

Looks like the MC is a cross between Paul from Tekken and Magnum P.I.

Spot on, not really sure who this guy Paul is (not big on fighting games) but I'm googling him

Thanks for the explanation, this needs a netorare tag, I wish you best of luck to your endeavor, I enjoyed this version but it looks I will not appreciate the future ones, maybe the NTR crowd will enjoy being cucked, maybe I will give it a chance if you make it optional, but it doesn't sound like it, you made it sound like it's her development arc, which is sucking every dick in existence. Oof.

I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, but thanks for giving it a go.

I'm part of the NTR crowd and I guarantee I will enjoy this title. No idea why all the anti NTR people feel they will be cucked in real life for enjoying a VN but to each there own.

Interesting looking title Dev good luck with it, I will try it asap.

Thank you for the positive feedback! I hope you enjoy the game!

Will the game have multiple endings? Will the MC be able to join Kobra for real eventually, or being an undercover cop is the only option?

Criticism:
The writing in the PD is very bad. We go to talk to the prisoner, and suddenly we seem to have more information than we have ever been given. MC asks Foxy about the gem, which we have never heard about before, which is somehow import to Shibuya's research, which we also didn't know. After getting the gem, MC comments that is a vital component to the time machine (which we also have never heard of before), then he goes to the Chief's office where she says the gem is a vital part of the time machine... and the protagonist is surprised. He thought the exact same thing two screens ago!

The female characters are also constantly referred to as "he/him", which implies that either the text had been AI generated too, or a machine translation from another language has been used, because I don't think a human would do such a mistake consistently.

Suggestion: please cut down on useless choices. If a choice does nothing (not even a slightly different scene), it shouldn't be there. The worst offenders happen during the scene with Feng. No matter what you choose, everything happens the same. Why even give us an option to check case files or personnel, if the only thing we can do is read Witness Reports?

Come on, man. For an AI made game, the graphics are pretty good, and the atmosphere has a nice vibe, but it's not an excuse for sloppy writing.

First of all, thanks for taking the time to write such an insightful and interesting review. Yes, the game in it's current form is far from complete, due to the way I code and do art, I sometimes put those choices there so In the future I can actually add some meat to them. Please think of them as 'rough sketches' of what that interaction is going to actually feel like later on. The interaction with Feng is just there as a placeholder so the game can progress, but it's planned to evolve in it's own thing or sub plot in future updates. The game is going to be proofread at some point by a native speaker (which I'm not), but I deemed more important to release the game, even if it has many flaws in it's current state.

To answer your question: Yes, the idea is for Ty to infiltrate Kobra's organization and have his loyalty to the PD questioned at some point. As you can see, Ty used to be the butt end of all jokes back in 'the normal' world, and he's not really wise in how to handle the power and raw sexual magnetism he's been given. In future episodes, this will come to play, as I'm planning for Ty to eventually have to choose actual love over power or vice versa. So yes, going undercover (and beyond) is planed in the genetic code of the game. I already said more than I should, so I'll end this here to avoid possible spoilers. Thanks again for the comment.

 

[xapican]

LewdKitty87 ; great game and I enjoy it a lot, looks promising
Only one minor inconvienece "
I couldn't finisih it but so far it looks good

 

[Obsidion69]

Oh wow! Really want to know what the dev was on while making this!

The screenshots are... way too in your face!

Judging from the visual sound effects and the general feel of the content they were binge watching the old Adam West Batman and 80's action movies with a muscle porn chaser while on a crap load of acid.

 

[Fapmaister]

what the actual GTA vice city is this ?

 

[wildride69]

You may wany to run a spell/grammar checker over your script.

5 Early errors I caught right away -
Ty
Fuck you! I wont stand for you "truing" to intimidate us, I'm not "affraid" of you!

Rookie
You'll do no such thing! And put those Flaming Fists off! They're "dagerous!"

Rookie
It's "nos" common, but we had our share

Ty
I don't know about that... "It" think I just got lucky.

Rookie
Back, then, a group called Special Task Force was "headspearing" the war against crime.

I'm not an ahole about it and wasn't even looking for errors such as these but they're very glaring in the first 5 minutes of playtime. If I noticed then other people will notice way more.

EDIT:
Chief Hardbutt
"Tank" you, Ty. Tall handsome and a gentleman.

Chief Harbutt
Don't "tank" me yet, Ty. Being an Ironhaven police officer...

Taylor
Sure, why "noy"? I'll check the place out.

Roxy Tomlinson
Honestly? I'd hear him out. But keep your guard up and don't show him your full hand. (You are meeting with "HER" not "HIM")

 

[FuhQ314]

got to "pay miranda another visit" and was met with this View attachment 3942834

To progress you just have to pick some other option a few choices back. The armory path has more content anyway.

 

[dirtyoldmanlol]

Finally an Ai art game that's actually pretty good. I really like the look of Ai art but up until now I haven't been able to find anything that could hold my interest for more than a few minutes.

 

[FuhQ314]

NTR incoming next update, so nope. Good luck, you will need it.

 

[LewdKitty87]

Thanks for sharing this game.

Thank you for taking the time to play it.

LewdKitty87 ; great game and I enjoy it a lot, looks promising
Only one minor inconvienece "
I couldn't finisih it but so far it looks good

Hi!, first of all, thanks for the feedback, very much appreciated. I see that you're still running 0.9.0 which has that error where you can't return to Miranda's office for a second time. This is working correctly in 0.9.1 (it's linked in the first post.)

Judging from the visual sound effects and the general feel of the content they were binge watching the old Adam West Batman and 80's action movies with a muscle porn chaser while on a crap load of acid.

I used to binge watch cop movies by the dozen. I always felt in love with simple things like unnecessary nudity, violence, and explosions.

what the actual GTA vice city is this ?

GTA Vice City is one of my favorite games of all times. The 80s retro vibe still rule.

You may wany to run a spell/grammar checker over your script.

5 Early errors I caught right away -
Ty
Fuck you! I wont stand for you "truing" to intimidate us, I'm not "affraid" of you!

Rookie
You'll do no such thing! And put those Flaming Fists off! They're "dagerous!"

Rookie
It's "nos" common, but we had our share

Ty
I don't know about that... "It" think I just got lucky.

Rookie
Back, then, a group called Special Task Force was "headspearing" the war against crime.

I'm not an ahole about it and wasn't even looking for errors such as these but they're very glaring in the first 5 minutes of playtime. If I noticed then other people will notice way more.

EDIT:
Chief Hardbutt
"Tank" you, Ty. Tall handsome and a gentleman.

Chief Harbutt
Don't "tank" me yet, Ty. Being an Ironhaven police officer...

Taylor
Sure, why "noy"? I'll check the place out.

Roxy Tomlinson
Honestly? I'd hear him out. But keep your guard up and don't show him your full hand. (You are meeting with "HER" not "HIM")

Thank you for weeding those out! I'll make sure to mention your name in the thanks section. (BTW, in the upcoming weeks I'll be recruiting a native speaker to help me with the dialogue and typos, just bear with me while the episode is proofread.)

To progress you just have to pick some other option a few choices back. The armory path has more content anyway.

Yes, although the bug should be solved in 0.9.1 (it's linked in the first post.)

 

[wildride69]

Just finished this VN (I think). I say "I think" because it gets to the undercover setup with Hardbutt and renpy crashes.

The premise of the story is good. It feels like an over the top Super Hero game in my opinion. Reminds me of "Sin City" with Bruce Willis movie. Totally over the top.

I'm not a fan of AI CG but it suits this titles over the top nature. The problem with AI CG is really pronounced here though, There are at least 4 characters here with the exact same model. The hair and the bust size maybe different but the face stays exactly the same. For example Roxy and Goldie


Exact same model, with different hair color, even the eye color and eyebrows are the same. The look slightly different here because of the angles but if you go through the scene it's the same model. This same model shows up at least 2 more times but I'm not going back through to get there names. Luckily it's an attractive model but if you check aicg games you will see this face over and over again.

So far there is no animations yet but hopefully some will be added later.

I'm not going to rate this yet as it is way to early in my opinion, but it looks promising and with some tweaks this will be a solid title.

 

[dirtyoldmanlol]

There should be a farting tag - some people might not like that. I was actually happy to see it, but some might not like it. I guess there's no dirtier version of this game? The dialogue during sex is very hot but the pictures don't match the descriptiveness of the words.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

There should be a farting tag

I play all my games with the sound off but went back to check that out for the laughs.


I'm getting this error. It won't let me save after the fight with Maranda's goons.
Love the game, Love the 1980s vibe.

 

[8u88a2020]

Fun Game, hope to seee more from this series. Best Game I have played in awhile, thank you for sharing this. I think the dev is obsessed with anal though .............

 

[elmicho]

when someone is being a dickhead, LITERALLY

 

[HAISEKEN1999]

Above The Law [Ep.I v0.9.1] save

 

[xapican]

Hi!, first of all, thanks for the feedback, very much appreciated. I see that you're still running 0.9.0 which has that error where you can't return to Miranda's office for a second time. This is working correctly in 0.9.1 (it's linked in the first post.)

Thanks It worked like a charm It totally hooked me up, Kudos, love the '80 vibe keep it up looking forward to the next update
God sped LewdKitty
abrazo

 

[LinkBox88]

So instead of using Taylor in any meaningful way she's just going to become fuel for gangbangs with random assholes? What a waste.

 

[LewdKitty87]

Just finished this VN (I think). I say "I think" because it gets to the undercover setup with Hardbutt and renpy crashes.

The premise of the story is good. It feels like an over the top Super Hero game in my opinion. Reminds me of "Sin City" with Bruce Willis movie. Totally over the top.

I'm not a fan of AI CG but it suits this titles over the top nature. The problem with AI CG is really pronounced here though, There are at least 4 characters here with the exact same model. The hair and the bust size maybe different but the face stays exactly the same. For example Roxy and Goldie
View attachment 3945672

Exact same model, with different hair color, even the eye color and eyebrows are the same. The look slightly different her because of the angles but if you go through the scene it's the same model. This same model shows up at least 2 more times but I'm not going back through to get there names. Luckily it's an attractive model but if you check aicg games you will see this face over and over again.

So far there is no animations yet but hopefully some will be added later.

I'm not going to rate this yet as it is way to early in my opinion, but it looks promising and with some tweaks this will be a solid title.

I totally understand this might be off putting, but it simply is the way AI works in its current state. I believe with time and advancements the technology will be able to completely generate unique characters, but right now is a bit of a hit or miss. I hope the rest of the game was to your liking.

As for the animations, It's a completely different skill set to do correctly (one I don't possess), and probably the project will need someone who is an actual NSFW animator to implement those. Right now the cash flowing into the project is not nearly enough to pay for animations and It will probably take some time until it does. To be completely honest, It'll all gonna boil down to people monetary support to have animations or more complex interactions in the near future.

There should be a farting tag - some people might not like that. I was actually happy to see it, but some might not like it. I guess there's no dirtier version of this game? The dialogue during sex is very hot but the pictures don't match the descriptiveness of the words.

Yes! It has a bit of 'cute chick farts' in one of the Taylor's scenes. I'll add the "Fart incoming" message in case someone wants to skip it. Thanks for the suggestion.

I play all my games with the sound off but went back to check that out for the laughs.


I'm getting this error. It won't let me save after the fight with Maranda's goons.
Love the game, Love the 1980s vibe.

It's somewhere in the code for the QTE. I'm gonna have to test it extensively if I want to add it to some other fight scenes. Thanks for pointing it out!

Fun Game, hope to seee more from this series. Best Game I have played in awhile, thank you for sharing this. I think the dev is obsessed with anal though .............

No, I'm not! Thanks for playing the game, so glad you like it.

Thanks It worked like a charm It totally hooked me up, Kudos, love the '80 vibe keep it up looking forward to the next update
God sped LewdKitty
abrazo

I'm glad you liked it! thanks for taking the time to play and comment!

 

[lukas7533]

Its not bad, in fact it got better as it went. Gonna be honest, I was fairly shocked by its extreme stupidity.

Few problems though:
- you need to check your script as you have spelling errors constantly
- there are several moments in the script where events make zero sense
- putting Taylor into rape scenario that is unavoidable is a recipe for disaster
- the look of girls is inconsistent, and given nature of generative AI I guess thats expected
- it needs some solid animations if it wants to be goofy, but enjoyable porn game (because let´s face it, nobody is going to play this for story)

Positives:
- most of the girls look hot
- pussy/ass shots are freaking great for avns
- some parts of the script/dialogue were actually enjoyable to read

It desperately needs more redhead content, and avoid NTR at all costs.