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Tried that didn't work for me still need an android version also even if it did bro like over 3 gig is crazy would do it if worked still but it didn't sucks because the game looks awesome
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This is honestly an incredibly evenhanded response to what was a rather aggressive criticism, for which I apologize. However I still stand behind the content of the post despite this. For what it's worth, know that I have a great deal of respect for you for not simply saying, 'you say mean thing, opinion discarded.'
Regardless, If in Tolkien's work, Galadriel said to Frodo, "SHEEEIT SHORT BOI, YOU AMS IS GON CARRY DA WRING AN SHEET TO DA FIRE MONTAIN!" the audience would rightly recognize this as out of place for a character that is supposed to be ancient, powerful, mysterious, magical, and wise.
I am obviously operating under the assumption you made Mia speak this way anyways, and to simply state 'Mia does' is irrelevant to what I'm saying. My problem is whether she ought to.
The question is whether Mia is a 15 year old black man, or a 80+ year old magical futa elf.
If the latter, her speech is jarringly clumsy and vernacular. This in addition to her being just as much of a rapist as her enemy counterpart, just without using magic.
It's hard to imagine you wanted her to be a down syndrome wigger rapist, and not a noble, ancient, mysterious, hottie. Defending women from actual evil romantic advances.
Regardless of whether or not a large concatenation of random people visit f95zone and directly say you made your ancient mysterious elven futa MC have the personality of a vagrant gangbanger, you should take seriously the claim simply by looking at how she behaves and how you want her to be received. Is Mia supposed to be a poor young black man?
If not, her current dialogue is a mistake.
'Hoe' is specifically low class american black vernaculer, there's no reason for your ancient mysterious magic elven futa to be using it. She may as well be saying, "OI THAT'S A FOOKIN FIT BURD THAT IS. OMMA GEV YOU THE OLD SLAP AN TICKLE I WILL!"
As if she's an Aussie beerguzzler. And she isn't.
This is a problem regardless of how many people are willing to tell you about it.
- Oct 16, 2019
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in the interest of defending the integrity and original vision of the dev, which trumps any fedora-tipping reddit-tier drivel, i'm going to respond to you in the manner i think the MC would
don't care + i like how she talks + ratio
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No worries. Feedback is feedback, no matter how it's delivered. It's my job to get something out of it. I wouldn't be doing it right if I just ignored it.
I read your post and wrote an answer, but I'm not going to post it. It wasn't much, but I want to avoid any spoilers. I'd rather let the story speak, which I know can be pretty confusing at the moment. But I want to add that Mia definitely is no Galadriel
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I really like these type of games where you can choose of you want to be a dom or sub the only problem is i am dumb and choose the wrong choice and somehow be on the sub path Instead of the dom
I have a question, when do you think the next update will be? I know these things take a lot of time and effort, but... it's for a task, let's say that XD
Its already been Released for tier 3 we just have to wait till Public release maybe in a few days or when someone leak it
It's supposed to be 5 days early per tier, so 15 days after it released for tier 3. By the schedule, it should be available without a membership roughly 2 weeks from today.
Thank you man for simplifying the answer to 2 weeks from. My fired brain can't take no more.
I should prbbly sleep lol
THX
I played the demo, and it is incredible. I want to play the newer release, but sadly I can't subscribe to Patreon because of some kind of error on Patreon's side, so maybe tomorrow.
The story starts dark as Mia tells of her broken childhood. I am really curious about this world and why Ashley is mocked by society because of her body. I mean, isn't it normal to have a petite body type? And also, Mia's relationship with Camille, as I know that Camille isn't her biological mother, and what happened to Mia's family.
I do like dark stories, but not too dark (hard to explain), and I do hope there are some or many wholesome or happy moments and that there is a happy ending, but that is still a long way to go. So I only hope the story isn't too dark for my taste.
Something that I want to address a bit
1. There are some typos, but not important ones, like when in the cafe scene when Ashley says, "Leave here alone, she doesn't deserve that."
2. A lot of the time, the dialogue text becomes hard to read because of the background/image color. My suggestion is to make an optional text box with custom opacity because at some points, it is also better without a text box.
3. Currently, there isn't a gallery, which makes sense for the first chapter or version, but hopefully there will be
4. (This is personal) I hope there are some "normal" girls because I don't particularly like extremely large body part like boob.
5. I really believe that this game needs the "rape" tag because the cafe waitress was essentially raped after being drugged (i think so), and I can tell that there will be many more in the upcoming update.
One more thing: I sincerely hope that there will be a futaxfuta (maybe as one of the LI) scenario in both the Dom and Subm paths, and that Mia can be the bottom as well regardless of the path we take.
I'm excited to learn more about the story and how she and her friend fell into debauchery. and i hope the other character or Mia's friend still retain their personality after being "corrupted" because a lot of corruption game, basically just make the Li's as a literal slut without personality after being corrupted.
However, it is Messiah's story (I'm not sure why you chose this name, lol), and the plot is entirely up to them.
The story starts dark as Mia tells of her broken childhood. I am really curious about this world and why Ashley is mocked by society because of her body. I mean, isn't it normal to have a petite body type? And also, Mia's relationship with Camille, as I know that Camille isn't her biological mother, and what happened to Mia's family.
I do like dark stories, but not too dark (hard to explain), and I do hope there are some or many wholesome or happy moments and that there is a happy ending, but that is still a long way to go. So I only hope the story isn't too dark for my taste.
Something that I want to address a bit
1. There are some typos, but not important ones, like when in the cafe scene when Ashley says, "Leave here alone, she doesn't deserve that."
2. A lot of the time, the dialogue text becomes hard to read because of the background/image color. My suggestion is to make an optional text box with custom opacity because at some points, it is also better without a text box.
3. Currently, there isn't a gallery, which makes sense for the first chapter or version, but hopefully there will be
4. (This is personal) I hope there are some "normal" girls because I don't particularly like extremely large body part like boob.
5. I really believe that this game needs the "rape" tag because the cafe waitress was essentially raped after being drugged (i think so), and I can tell that there will be many more in the upcoming update.
One more thing: I sincerely hope that there will be a futaxfuta (maybe as one of the LI) scenario in both the Dom and Subm paths, and that Mia can be the bottom as well regardless of the path we take.
I'm excited to learn more about the story and how she and her friend fell into debauchery. and i hope the other character or Mia's friend still retain their personality after being "corrupted" because a lot of corruption game, basically just make the Li's as a literal slut without personality after being corrupted.
However, it is Messiah's story (I'm not sure why you chose this name, lol), and the plot is entirely up to them.
so i am too impatient to wait for patreon or paypal to fix whatever error they have and just go to subscribestar instead.
after playing the 0.2, the dark story theme really show especially when how
. also i know it is a dark story but i am kinda sad
also the text is much clearer now and didnt blend too much with the background/image. so thanks for fixing that.
overall, i am very impressive with the update and cant wait for the next one.
after playing the 0.2, the dark story theme really show especially when how
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also the text is much clearer now and didnt blend too much with the background/image. so thanks for fixing that.
overall, i am very impressive with the update and cant wait for the next one.
this one still very new and only got 2 update, if i am not misremember, i think the newest version (soon go public) can be finished 1 hour max (depending how fast or slow you read)
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Hello MessiahXx I really enjoyed your game, the plot is good and I can't wait to find out more!
I've made a French translation for your information, the link is just below:
https://f95zone.to/threads/accord-v0-1-french-translation-frelon31.231851/
Good luck with the rest of the development!
I've made a French translation for your information, the link is just below:
https://f95zone.to/threads/accord-v0-1-french-translation-frelon31.231851/
Good luck with the rest of the development!
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